Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

Turn You Out
An Ode to Cla919

I understand Girl, you never felt a love so real
You trying to find out how this black dick feel
Don't be scared, I promise to beat it up - pull your hair
Do all the freaky things with precision and care
I'm not being sarcastic I go all out whenever Truth is dared
I go all out, lick that titty residue and smell those underwear
I go all out to get all in that chubby snatch
Make you leave deep scratches on my back
With a dick like this you won't know how to react
In fact, we can get it popping tonight if you like
I don't even mind if you been ran through and that pussy ain't tight
I'm just glad you're plump and white, oh so fly as a kite
Let my hairy balls be your means to bypass plight
And suck em just right, I bet those tits hang low
Like a mid-2000's rappers chain and pants
I've been wondering if you've let that pussy mane grow
Could I see it if you wore a belly shirt and danced
But I'm being for real girl so tonight don't make plans
I might not have the blackest dick, but if you give me the chance
I'll turn you out

@CLA919 what do you say? for real though?
http://www.troll.me/images/tommy-pic...-this-dick.jpg

So reading CLA919 verse to this verse is like this shit remind me of some Roxanne Shante vs UTFO....Very cut throat with the punches...I like the theme of her getting the dick...the way you act like you about to hit but point out the flaws she has or had...very funny, very entertaining...Yes TP owned it all.....Flow was there had nice imagery the multies and internals was subtle but this is a diss verse that you actual had a topical feel....Nice....

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...76#post8500476

I like it! I thought it was a cute piece! full romantic words.

This is great. I love the flow of the piece, the nit picking about parts of bodies and the out of control ego that goes with it.
I thought the imagery was cool, and the rhymes were sweet.
The words were hilarious.
Funny, cool, read.


lol @ the last bit...

"what do you say? for real though?" LOL

I like your style.

Your dirty, rotten, scoundrel, style.

lol @ the two females seeing this was "Romantic" & "Sweet" the next female i try to lure into my web of dirty, rough, one-night-stand sex will hear something similar to this haha

Ha!
I meant sweet as in nice, as in good, word wise.
Not sweet as in romantic!
Nothing sweet or romantic about it.

Too late now lol

I never did get my answer from CLA919...

Something i've always wondered is if the first 9 in her name was supposed to represent a P. as in Clap19

lol this shit was amusing and pretty funny. still good though, i feel the vybe. real dirty talk, flowed well & put some real honesty behind ur words. imagery was very detailed...too detailed lol jp, but this was alright bro. keep writing homie.