How can we?

How can we say that we're making a difference if we're standing still or sitting down?
How can we say that we help if even ourselves we cannot help alone?
How can we say that there's nothing wrong to dream if life is basically a nightmare?
How can we say that we're sure if we're unsure?
How can we say that we can drive if we dont even know where we're going?
How can we say that we never judge if we feel like we're being judge?
How can we say that we can walk if we're afraid to wear somebody's shoes?
How can we say that it's alright if it's not?
How can we say that we know love if we dont even love anybody?
How can we say that we believe if we dont even have any faith at all?
How can we say that we succeed if we dont even know what for?
How can we say that there's still hope if we're already giving up?
How can we say that we're trying hard if we dont even try?
How can we say that money means everything if everything means greed?
How can we say that life sucks if some of us dont even know what life means?
How can we say that we're brave if we always run away from our problems?
How can we say that we're responsible if we're careless?
How can we say that we're smart if we always choose the wrong decisions?
How can we say that we exist if we're invisible?
How can we say that we care if all we do is hate the world?
How can we say that we know what's right from wrong if we dont even know the difference?
How can we say that it's a piece of cake if we know it's hard?
How can we say that we agree if we know that we're against it?
How can we say that we have a future if we didnt even live up to the past?
How can we say that we can see if we're blind?
How can we say that we know who we are if we're just nobodys?
How can we say that we know the answer if we dont even understand the question?
How can we say that we're old enough to do and know everything if we dont even want to grow up?
How can we say that we know how it ends if we dont know how it began?



I dont know about you but maybe...



...Just by simply because that we can.

Ya know... i started to think for a second tha Malcom X came back to life... but this was actully decent enuff... but nothin really great kid... i mean it was nice tho... send it to Bush,,, he could use it...

Caesar - On3

This was deptht poem but it kept repeating....how how..lol but image was done good..contend aight......vocab could be done lil betta overall good drop

check mine a dream.

This is not some kind of masterpiece to be honest with you, just actually seeing through in and out of life while i was bored at work, but, hey thanks for the comments and who knows maybe ill send it to Bush?

It took this forever to get just even one reply so i appreciate you both.

Lovely.

i love the fact that this whole thing is questions...the ending is magnificant in my point of view...

keep this up..

return the favor

In all honesty, I'll be straight with you. This got tedious after a while.

Still, you pose a lot of good questions. Sometimes I think about the same things myself, and I find myself justifying actions by simply ignoring the morality.

I dunno. Still a decent peice.

~Shalom~

Hi Jenn!
This was the ultimate rhetorical question piece. Every single question was something to thing about, and even if it was a little monotonous, it still outlined the basic questions of life.
I know from experiance. Everyone says things are okay when everyone knows that they're not, just to make themselves feel better. Everyone believes, not because they have faith, but because they have to to keep on living. It's the way of the world, baby ;)
I think maybe you should have put something more conclusive at the end...as opposed to "we just can" maybe..."because we're human" or "because we don't know any better". Something to give the reader some closure.

this is going to be on my mind all night...good work =)

wow this and overload for reel... i felt each line hit me like a bullet shot. honestly i think you can write a peice off everyline. good peice overall. stAy up

Ok after you get past the asthetics of it (i could understand what necro meant), this is rather nice... It ask everything that we ponder on some level everyday. Shiznit, it's been a while so let me give you a warm welcome back. I've seen a few of your post, just have not said hello yet. There that's done, back to the drop. I see this as a detailed rant, one which begs the audience to feel the emotion you do over these questions. I enjoyed the read, and I gives a a nice insight into what thoughts form in your mind. For that raw glimpse, it was well worth the read. I enjoyed this drop.

Looking forward to reading more from you...

Much respect...
~Bounce~