Re: Tip n' Go: Keep Going
kk, feedback is ready to be recieved :\
Re: Tip n' Go: Keep Going
This was a decent piece. There were a few spots that could have been worded a lil better or set up better. But other than that... this was a nice little read.
Re: Tip n' Go: Keep Going
thanks for that bit of feedback i already knew :\
Re: Tip n' Go: Keep Going
This was quite nice, but yea there were a few minor problems, mostly with your wording, which I know from personal experience is very frustrating because you know exactly what you want to say but can't think of how to put it on a page. But yea I liked this dude, it had a nice story line and I was feeling your imagery it was what stuck out the most here that and your obvious story telling abilites, I like to tell a good story when I'm writing (in most of my peices) so it's nice to see somebody else concentrating on that too, because writing is about communicating, not complicating, so it's good to see you had a nice story and a nice message in your peice too. Good shit dude, keep at it, props.