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look...ima drop half ass on this cat cuzz i know he a rookie
you aint beatin me son,ya best bets 2 play hookie
this dude make me laught....he a str8 joke
ya rhymes wouldnt be cold if it was 30 below and u was blowin smoke
the only way he could win is if the voters got a pay-off
dont excpect super bowl material when this dude couldnt make the play-offs
i never talk shit cuzz i just let my shots speak
im not even gonna peep ya verse cuzz i know u droped weak
i keep hollows in the chamber,pop 1,watch this dummy fall
ya punches gonna miss
this dudes so weak,my punches worth 2 like a money ball
im keeping it cool,..ILL's a beast and it's true,
you only think that you spittin, cause you speak with a drool,
make this geek eat my stool, cause yung enjoys talking shit,
i employ awesome scripts,,and yung plays the 'part pussy' like exposin a clit,
im annoyed at you bitch,..asking for votes is no surprise,
this ghost couldnt 'bring the noise' if he was a poltergeist,
beef?,, i pulverize,..plus your styles 'butt',like farts and rears kid,
only time yung's 'on point', is when i take his heart and spear it(spirit),
be smart and fear this, queer bitch, you'll be smothered and beat,
your names 'ghost' cause after this battle, you'll be covered in sheets,
thanks for the battle yung, uppin for VOTES#1
man..Yall need to elevate somewhat
ILL~o~KWENT - you had a better rhyme schema, but the content within your punches was better so you took this battle. Even though the structure was good, your verse did not flow well at all. I would read some of the wordplay and it was so lame I was like WTF. However, you had enough to take the win.
yung ghost - you had the better flow and it read easy. But, the punches were not as strong as Ill-o-kwent. The structure was great, you just need to work on fresh concepts.
Vote - Ill-o-kwent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322468
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uppin for votes#2
Vote Ill___..
Better punches.....no hate but elevate:).................
Pretty good batttle... the best shot was..
----->be smart and fear this, queer bitch, you'll be smothered and beat,
your names 'ghost' cause after this battle, you'll be covered in sheets,
7/10 finisher.....not bad at all
imma vote an yes my boy antonio is right but over all if i say who won it be kwent he had better rhymes an used better syllabol rhymes an shit so over all my vote goes too kwent
bumpin for votes #3
Yung
look...ima drop half ass on this cat cuzz i know he a rookie
you aint beatin me son,ya best bets 2 play hookie
~ehh, almost
this dude make me laught....he a str8 joke
ya rhymes wouldnt be cold if it was 30 below and u was blowin smoke
~ehh, almost, (wears the smoke come into that?)
the only way he could win is if the voters got a pay-off
dont excpect super bowl material when this dude couldnt make the play-offs
~ok, not a flip tho
i never talk shit cuzz i just let my shots speak
im not even gonna peep ya verse cuzz i know u droped weak
~blah
i keep hollows in the chamber,pop 1,watch this dummy fall
ya punches gonna miss
this dudes so weak,my punches worth 2 like a money ball
~ehh
Ill
im keeping it cool,..ILL's a beast and it's true,
you only think that you spittin, cause you speak with a drool,
~lol, ok
make this geek eat my stool, cause yung enjoys talking shit,
i employ awesome scripts,,and yung plays the 'part pussy' like exposin a clit,
~ehh ok, pussy lines are played tho
im annoyed at you bitch,..asking for votes is no surprise,
this ghost couldnt 'bring the noise' if he was a poltergeist,
~not bad
beef?,, i pulverize,..plus your styles 'butt',like farts and rears kid,
only time yung's 'on point', is when i take his heart and spear it(spirit),
~ok, coulda tied in the 'spirit' a little more
be smart and fear this, queer bitch, you'll be smothered and beat,
your names 'ghost' cause after this battle, you'll be covered in sheets,
~good
V-Ill
bump #4
bump #5... come on peeps, we need some votes