Just to set it

I'm gonna do this the way you motherfuckers think it should be.
Conventional, bland. original? Man I never understood these.
And so here it starts number one diss would be:
Shok-val-u the wussy. Get sic text's cock outta' yo pussy.

Shockvalue's zero. What the fucks he know? Deep throat?
Fuck that. Let's see how far my feet go.
See 'em choke n' croak n' poke my toe through his asshole
Argues like a blond bitch in bondage. Too dumb to get out. See THAT's dope
See I'd put another one here but yall'd say it killed the last joke
oops guess I subliminaly did already I just had to go
And mess it up for the rep I was heading for yall can have it though
I'm rappin' for ME my stackin' flow is wrappin you ALL in a massive rope

So fuck what ya'll said it's cool. I'm energized like I'm on a redbull
N' shovin' the can up Dead Pooles ass cause what he read's bull
Snip a section of his balls n' dissect em like a vasectomy til it led to a tunnel
So when Shok-val-u sucked his dick he'd be fed through a funnel.

God knows he needs the energy. He'll search the dam web just to get one
line on me
But if he finally get's somethin' he'll be too blind to see I'm the baddest rhyme machine
Structure will puncture, rupture n' fuck your soul like a disease
This was just to put my mind at ease so there's no punchline to read

Anybody gonna' critique this shit?

you gotta leave links bro

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