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@Aero
@Smog
Yo!
Come catch another L from yours truly.
Ready whenever
Ayo
If our stupid prez knew this match was bad fa ya health, ya jaws’ll drop lookin scared
Net zero emissions by 2050???? Man even BIDEN knows Smog is not good fa Aer.
Well fuck him U n his son, y’all can all cop some crack rock fa sell
But I’d rather kill u wit a mobile device, they’ll start callin my shit the lap top from hell
This Turfs where pens slaughter cats, even at NC u ain’t scarin nada, black
He’ll leave torn Achille won’t achieve, only thought when Wu said Aaron, Rodger that!
U the hoe show king, ur mag hype was fag type, TF’s ever heard of u buzzin
DOT spoke sweet to please ur ears, this fuckin queer won’t write without verbal seduction.
All you do is scroll, talk shit n annoy, should ask the most high to soothe ur soul
Then again if God shows son light, he’ll turn to stone cuz that’s^ WTF it do to trolls
Scene:
*Aero and Smog's wife are in Smog's bed getting sensual. All of the sudden her phone rings.
It's Smog.
Smog: Hey babes, why are you breathing heavy? I'm on my way home...*
Simp
You give ya girl ANY out, cuz the truth is devestating
She replied "ummmmmm" he chuckled "ohh, boo is meditating :)"
She told me "Hide in the kid's room!" that suggestion was bad
His daughter pinching herself in disbelief - when I left her with crabs
Lol just kidding, I respect children, who doesn't?..
I'm big on family & in your daughter's mouth it looks humongous
You buggin', STILL on RB? LOL Wigger DO SOMETHING
Smog's a fitting name, you hover around blow smoke and do nothing
Quit biting black culture, wana be Jay Z stick to text
If you ever throw up the rock you've OD'ed on crystal meth
This isn’t okay.Quote:
Originally Posted by Aero
Trust me I know. Wish I could undo it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dominate
If our stupid prez knew this match was bad fa ya health, ya jaws’ll drop lookin scared
Net zero emissions by 2050???? Man even BIDEN knows Smog is not good fa Aer.
Vs
Lol just kidding, I respect children, who doesn't?..
I'm big on family & in your daughter's mouth it looks humongous
You buggin', STILL on RB? LOL Wigger DO SOMETHING
Smog's a fitting name, you hover around blow smoke and do nothing
Quit biting black culture, wana be Jay Z stick to text
If you ever throw up the rock you've OD'ed on crystal meth
Overall Vote- cool match here I liked both verses, Smog was pretty good here his opener was my favorite
The rest of his verse was decent but to me that was his best bar
Aero very funny witty hits the daughter shit was wild but funny
I got to give it to aero slightly here for being alittle more consistent and cleaner execution.
Vote - Aero
Smog
If our stupid prez knew this match was bad fa ya health, ya jaws’ll drop lookin scared
Net zero emissions by 2050???? Man even BIDEN knows Smog is not good fa Aer.
nice double nameplay. light jab
Well fuck him U n his son, y’all can all cop some crack rock fa sell
But I’d rather kill u wit a mobile device, they’ll start callin my shit the lap top from hell
eehh. i wasn't really feelings this one. was ok tho
This Turfs where pens slaughter cats, even at NC u ain’t scarin nada, black
He’ll leave torn Achille won’t achieve, only thought when Wu said Aaron, Rodger that!
punch was okay but it felt a bit chopping to read
U the hoe show king, ur mag hype was fag type, TF’s ever heard of u buzzin
DOT spoke sweet to please ur ears, this fuckin queer won’t write without verbal seduction.
lol okay lil personal here. more direct than your other punches but i liked this one
All you do is scroll, talk shit n annoy, should ask the most high to soothe ur soul
Then again if God shows son light, he’ll turn to stone cuz that’s^ WTF it do to trolls
light jab for the closer
vs
Aero
Scene:
*Aero and Smog's wife are in Smog's bed getting sensual. All of the sudden her phone rings.
It's Smog.
Smog: Hey babes, why are you breathing heavy? I'm on my way home...*
Simp
You give ya girl ANY out, cuz the truth is devestating
She replied "ummmmmm" he chuckled "ohh, boo is meditating "
lol not devastating but pretty funny
She told me "Hide in the kid's room!" that suggestion was bad
His daughter pinching herself in disbelief - when I left her with crabs
naw you are trifling!!! this was so so
Lol just kidding, I respect children, who doesn't?..
I'm big on family & in your daughter's mouth it looks humongous
lol tf is wrong you with?? lol shit was funny tho
You buggin', STILL on RB? LOL Wigger DO SOMETHING
Smog's a fitting name, you hover around blow smoke and do nothing
Wasnt really feelings this np.it was aiiiight
Quit biting black culture, wana be Jay Z stick to text
If you ever throw up the rock you've OD'ed on crystal meth
this was set up nice
summary.
I have Aero taking this battle with consistency and better articulation of bars into punches. Smog had the better concepts overall but I think the choppiness of some of the words and the interruptions of how they flowed hurt him here. Aero as far as bars was not as creative but was much more concise and easy to read. as well as i found the whole setup and theme to be humourous. Definitely on point with the angles here. the daughters mouth bar was fucking stupid and fucking funny at the same time. shit actually made me laugh. I think this battle also came down to smogs lack of a definitive haymaker.Good battle Gents
V/Aero
I've got a massive headache and I'm sick right now so this isn't going to be a lengthy vote. I think Smog won this rather convincingly. His concepts were fleshed out and had substance to them, while Aero's felt kind of simplistic, especially for 2023. The Aaron Rodger's bar from Smog was LOTB, and more of what I was looking for from Aero. I mean the narration thing was somewhat corny, and the straightforward insults were underwhelming. The setups weren't compelling enough to sell the punch for me, while Smog put in the effort to drop a complete bar. Aero was really half-assed while Smog obviously spent more time building on his concepts.
V-Smog
If our stupid prez knew this match was bad fa ya health, ya jaws’ll drop lookin scared
Net zero emissions by 2050???? Man even BIDEN knows Smog is not good fa Aer.
this could have been worded so much better, but OK
Well fuck him U n his son, y’all can all cop some crack rock fa sell
But I’d rather kill u wit a mobile device, they’ll start callin my shit the lap top from hell
poorly developed/executed concept
This Turfs where pens slaughter cats, even at NC u ain’t scarin nada, black
He’ll leave torn Achille won’t achieve, only thought when Wu said Aaron, Rodger that!
no
U the hoe show king, ur mag hype was fag type, TF’s ever heard of u buzzin
DOT spoke sweet to please ur ears, this fuckin queer won’t write without verbal seduction.
nope
All you do is scroll, talk shit n annoy, should ask the most high to soothe ur soul
Then again if God shows son light, he’ll turn to stone cuz that’s^ WTF it do to trolls
meh
vs
You give ya girl ANY out, cuz the truth is devestating
She replied "ummmmmm" he chuckled "ohh, boo is meditating "
Ok
She told me "Hide in the kid's room!" that suggestion was bad
His daughter pinching herself in disbelief - when I left her with crabs
Are you seriously using some pedo shit as a punch? the fuh
Lol just kidding, I respect children, who doesn't?..
I'm big on family & in your daughter's mouth it looks humongous
you have a problem bro
You buggin', STILL on RB? LOL Wigger DO SOMETHING
Smog's a fitting name, you hover around blow smoke and do nothing
This was fire
Quit biting black culture, wana be Jay Z stick to text
If you ever throw up the rock you've OD'ed on crystal meth
nah
Tough choice but the pedo had the only fire line. Haven't been around so if that angle on smog has been done, I ain't seen it.
v/ Aero
Smog
If our stupid prez knew this match was bad fa ya health, ya jaws’ll drop lookin scared
Net zero emissions by 2050???? Man even BIDEN knows Smog is not good fa Aer.
This Turfs where pens slaughter cats, even at NC u ain’t scarin nada, black
He’ll leave torn Achille won’t achieve, only thought when Wu said Aaron, Rodger that!
U the hoe show king, ur mag hype was fag type, TF’s ever heard of u buzzin
DOT spoke sweet to please ur ears, this fuckin queer won’t write without verbal seduction.
All you do is scroll, talk shit n annoy, should ask the most high to soothe ur soul
Then again if God shows son light, he’ll turn to stone cuz that’s^ WTF it do to trolls
Aero
You buggin', STILL on RB? LOL Wigger DO SOMETHING
Smog's a fitting name, you hover around blow smoke and do nothing
I was being generous giving Aero that quote due to it being so simple, but I needed to give contrast to why Smog won this battle so handedly. Even with Smog's own nameflip, you can see the difference in creativity and levels between the two verses. It wasn't even close.
I didn't like that punchline you quoted from Aero. Lol, well actually I didn't like any of his lyrics. If his creepy pedo stuff wasn't enough, then the fact he decided to use the race card a couple times directly after doubling down on the "I'll have sex with your child" thing was a complete disaster for me. Smog wrote his stuff the way I've come to expect from him. The verbal seduction thing was funny. It was probably the most questionable thing about his verse. I liked the rest of his verse. His opening lines were better than anything I saw from Aero. So I'm going with Smog.Quote:
Originally Posted by Preston and Ivy
zero emissions line was cool, even for a smog/air nameplay..but after that I did think anything hit, the rest didn’t really connect for me…
aero had the big on family line.. creep shit but iight..hover around line was cool to…
I gotta go with aero for the stronger hits
V/ aero