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@Smog
@R!canTheoryz
Check 10
Yeah, 10 is straight.
Ur not awake bro. Ur woke sooo..
..This ain’t a place for Faggots, u rank the worst in this shit, dweeb
Idgaf if u transform into Trans Form..u wouldn’t be first in Bitches leagues
U gets no chance, I’m right handed but rather punch u from a different stance
U’ll get hit so hard by an Extreme Left.. it’ll make Radical Liberals shit their pants
I’ll slaughter u n let the corpse Rot, no viewing so ur family’s sad it couldn’t tell
But It’ll be Rican In a Box…. so bad they won’t open the Casket cuz the Smell
Imma punk u before the kill, these open palms r heavy as hell
I’ll give u 1 Bitch Slap after another like I’m callin everyone out
I always question my effort, but I know u put time into ur verses dude
So I’m not sayin u don’t Work Hard.. im sayin Im Hardly Working to murder u
Fuck You Pussy.
Extreme left
Rican in box
Closer
.. I was feeling them from smog
Extreme left could have been better. But still cool
Haunted house
Hookah
I almost didn’t quote hookah bc it wasn’t that special.. kinda oded of smog nameplays and to be honest smog flips r some played they gotta be fire to be worth quoting… I did think that haunted house one was tough tho.. after that u kinda feel off my dude.. moms knees was corny.. factory smoke wasn’t worth quoting.. push off cliff was meh I thought haunted house was best bar outta both verse but not much after that
Vote SMOG consistent
Rican started crying so I change my vote to him
Smog didn’t win this Rican did
VOTE RICAN … those 3 smog nameplays were sick.. never seen nothing like it.. str8 fire…so creative…. 10line battle and 6 were smog flips
Vote Rican. "fuck you pussy" just flows so well and I can really feel the aggression. Smog dropped like one okay bar about boxes.
LmaoooooQuote:
Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz
OH MAN this could have been used so much better, but you still get a nod for the concept.Quote:
Originally Posted by Smog
Vote Rican, shit was so ahead of its time it hasn’t been posted yet
Vote rican .. smog went over the line limit
So I had the chance to read R!canTheoryz verse prior to him deleting it, along with Smog's but I wasn't able to vote at the time. I can recall another battle R!canTheoryz had with Smog where he used a multitude of Smog nameflips to redundancy, and then in the 1-2 Punch League this season I believe they had another battle where he did a Smog nameflip. With this verse, he again used a variety of Smog nameflips. I didn't really like any of them, and I'm sure I've mentioned before that Smog nameflips are really unoriginal but despite the counsel he went ahead and did it again anyways. That put his verse at a disadvantage from the start.
Smog's Extreme Left/Bitch Slap/Work Hard bars were all dope to me but the Extreme Left one was fire and I don't expect to forget about it for awhile. When I think of how nice a punch is, it's usually one that sticks with me and that's what makes it so nice. Those 3 punches alone were much, much better than anything I read in R!canTheoryz verse, so I have Smog winning it.
v-Smog
Vote Rican.. to stay in the league
Smog wins
R!canTheoryz ejected from battle, suspended 15 weeks, and fined $19.99