"Im Straight" by Platinum Pistolz

Track I did with a Producer friend of Mine from Japan to add to his Production Discography. Classic Hip Hop vibe they like in Japan, hope yall enjoy.




Im Straight Lyrics:

Hook:

I could black mask Up & robb a couple foos
Get donations with a couple of tools
But im Straight

I could go cop a pound of Dro, Sell it all to the bros
& reup for another
But Im Straight

I could Lose my Mind any day
& Make Society pay for my Anxiety & riot
But Im Straight

I dont need to Wild out to get this Bank roll
Business & Crime pays, Invest & I'mma Take those
Straight!

VERSE 0:29

Like a avenue from Harlem to Times Square
We Straight up & Down, Refined here, We Grind here...
..We find time here to hold a lil meetin'
Start Speaking bout who owing money & gettin' beatins
Pay a couple bucks in cash & put'em on your ass
Like im buying Jeans for my bitch & Got you tags
Body Bagged, Put the Shottie back,
I'm Callin' Gotti back
So he can let the hitta know, I Already got the stack
For Him!
Held a couple bucks Back for him
Like that first weeks check on the Job
They mess wit the mobb, They Definitly Starve
Eat they food, pass the Rest to the Squad
Place bets like its Chess or the Cards
Couple Calls they get Death & the Morgue
Then we back to Business,
I dont even sell crack but listen
Imma invest in his pack If my Manz grabbin' that position
So when he flip & bring my cut, shit, Thats Commission
Im Straight!

Hook: 1:13

I could black mask Up & robb a couple foos
Get donations with a couple of tools
But im Straight

I could go cop a pound of Dro, Sell it all to the bros
& reup for another
But Im Straight

I could Lose my Mind any day
& Make Society pay for my Anxiety & riot
But Im Straight

I dont need to Wild out to get this Bank roll
Business & Crime pays, Invest & I'mma Take those
Straight!

VERSE 2
1:35

Like the final stretch in Track & Feild
Its relay how we Pass the Steel
Give it to the lil homie, Track his kills
He like Xanax, Percocets, Ecstasy so he known to carry Packs of Pills
He do a Hit, take a Double stack & Chill
...Yea, He a Addict but got Master Skills
Ya Feel Me?
His labor Cheap, HA! Thats a Deal
Really,
I ain't gotta lift a finger if my Cash right
Pay the bro, he blow the Air out your Chest
like a bagpipe
Or I could do it myself, I been in That life
In the hood movin in Steath, Keep the Masks Tight
Remove the lil Tool from my Belt, let the Blast bite
Blood Spill, you running on E, Like a Gas Light
But Imma O.G, I Copped a couple LLC's
Bank account, No Felonies
So When its beef I Mail the fees
My Lawyer Fly from Televiv
With Alibi's you tell on Me
Im Straight

Hook: 2:19

I could black mask Up & robb a couple foos
Get donations with a couple of tools
But im Straight

I could go cop a pound of Dro, Sell it all to the bros
& reup for another
But Im Straight

I could Lose my Mind any day
& Make Society pay for my Anxiety & riot
But Im Straight

I dont need to Wild out to get this Bank roll
Business & Crime pays, Invest & I'mma Take those
Straight!


Business deal here.. a lil crime there

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That's tight work nice flows I like the hook. And adding the im straight into the verses is a nice touch. Not a fan of the beat usually don't like boom bap and I would have liked if the beat changed more in the chorus section sounded too much like the verses.

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Originally Posted by Plat Hav Pro

That's tight work nice flows I like the hook. And adding the im straight into the verses is a nice touch. Not a fan of the beat usually don't like boom bap and I would have liked if the beat changed more in the chorus section sounded too much like the verses.

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Trillz.. I Made it for a Japanese producer that sells them over there on his mixtapes.. they still like that Boom Bap beat over there so I jumped on it & created something for him to hustle off. All the vocals and lyrics and vocal mastering I did though lol no control over the beat.. I appreciate the feedback family! Keep Rockin it out!

yeah, i'm digging the beat, this is pretty good, wish the vocals were a little crisper, other than that, no complaints

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Originally Posted by Urban Dialect

yeah, i'm digging the beat, this is pretty good, wish the vocals were a little crisper, other than that, no complaints

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True that.. the vocals were a lil too wet after I sent it back to Japan.. Good looking and great ear bro! I Appreciate you!