Big energy

Past the mic, I'll rip bars.
You don't need stars to be a star.
I'm riding Gucci Car
I don't care about enemies,
I got big energy.
I'm hot,
I'm your fancy.
I'm juicy,
I'm melody.
Drip too hard,
I got that remedy.
LP/Lady Poet on VIBE on Magazine,
I hold it down for VIP.

Short and basic. A good length for a piece is 16 bars or more. I caught a few good multis in this around the middle, which is good to see. Good study for open mic is to check out Sacred Scriptures, giving a piece a concept, like a story, makes it more interesting to read.

Keep posting, keep elevating.

Thanks for the feedback