Thinkin Bout You (Aminal & Baron Mynd Diss)

"I take shots at emcees when I want, like what?
Going back to back
You think you're me and that you can hotbox with Mike but you can't
Terminating emcees, I do my job
Now why you racing the beat fam?
Slow down, you sound lost (Ha ha ha ha ha ha)
These niggas punchline away and keep missing
I prefer the direct ting, not sneak dissing
(Bluku bye bye bye bye bye)
Cause when I pen pen pen man down, trust man go missing..."


That's MIA... L, N and A;
Dumb creature! why do you even try to speak?
You speak, and don't know what, you say
If you did you'd know that in a melody
The same notes aren't played, all the way through...
Who said you could talk, to me? You?
You're so damn fake.
If there's filler, its only cause i'm showing restraint
Unless you trigger me, and get my emotions engaged
I done fucked up a Mynd already, now he's going insane
He's not - and never was - in his prime. Mynd's already lost...
And now he's lost his mind.
Don't make me fuck up you, too. But I won't, I don't speak to animals
I'm not Doctor dolittle. You do the most, though
I do put animals down though. I'm not a doctor, but a vet!
And I don't care about who, or what you call's the best
Cause a GOAT to me is just a domesticated, taught...pet.
So I move from animals, to humans - after deities - you're next!
I've been thinking bout God, I wonder, if he loves his job, more than his satan
I've been... awfully patient, waiting, for him to give me glorious salvation!
All these chores, have got, my back breaking
I'm a slave, like Cinderella, sweeping and dusting floors
I've been searching for meaning, and something more
Am i genuine? Can you see me and touch me, lord?
What am I really just suffering for?
I need a relationship, to dance with prince charming
I wanna witness society, and be seen at the country ball
I eat both vegetables and meat... i'm an omnivore
On a gall-oping horse, I've been
Accompaning royals, on their hunting trips, we are hunting boars
Trading shots with evil, and bludgeoning swords, into knights
And barons. Baron, I gave you freedom and justice, boy...
Through the signed Magna Carta by John, agreed to at, Runnymede...
To establish that no-one - not even the king - is above the law!
Failure to adhere to the treaty, will erupt in the war
Trust me, you really don't want that
So just fall back! Lest you fall back, into the almost silent,
Low-speaking, seething & grumbling gorge
I know i've been grevious...but you've been devious, for punching
In the darkness, with a nemesis that didn't even say nothing wrong!
So take this defeat, on your knees, or I'll be Queen Elizabeth...
"Off with his head!" Do you recall I said you're a rodent?
A member of the rat race! You are, as well your compat-riot..
But I've put an end to the Black plague
If you wish for medieval glory...I'll send you, then, to the past days!
For so long you've been held in a den and a trapped maze
Those who live in houses of glass, shouldn't throw stones
If i've hit the mark, and then some. Over-thrown!
Over-thrown kings, so a baron is irrelevant..
With a witch's help, i've cast black spells
What's a pitcher to a batter? A rinser to a bather?
A pincer to a lancer? With the assistance of an Arthur
I've seen the shell of a crab break
Not crab, I mean, you're a venemous asp! But I charm snakes
So dance for me, bitch...wind your neck.. in,
And let me see your breasts and your ass shake!
You've fell in my path. Was destiny who brought us together
Infact, fate.. clashing me is a hell of a task, mate.
I'm not the Alpha or Omega...
But with my shooting weapon, an A-K is all that's needed..
That'll take us to L-M.. that's appropriate, cause here's another L, M...
When will the alphabet ever N'd, for my O-Ps?
You're just another enemy...Get in the Q. You'll get lost in these letters
So I'll stop with this sentence - I really ain't gotta question whether you R...S....aved

"I said "if I named you, I rate you"
Then you wanna come back sneak dissing
You brought this on yourself
Now you're gonna need more help
Oi fam, are you really tryna come for me alone?..."

I guess Aladdin a mans body was all he could muster, bummer.

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Originally Posted by QuantumCaveman

" I'm a slave, like Cinderella, sweeping and dusting floors "

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brain rot got you insulting yourself mid paragraphs lol...

i knew someone would pick up on that. So i purposely LEFT it in there. Was gonna change it to 'workhorse' but I thought nah...i don't give a fuck.

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Thanks for falling right into my traps, though.

Work whores

Pretty basic. There were a few good shots in here though. The putting down animals/vet line was a stand out. The piece kind of transitioned into an OM in the second half. It's better to go half-short and twice strong in a diss piece.

Add some compound rhymes and up the vocab. Keep on elevating. Practice makes perfect.