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Feed Please: Traj Exclusive (Promo Track)
This is a promo track I did for my homie (and Rishi P's cousin) Traj from the UK. Just a little something to drop while I'm writing for my album coming later in the year. Anyway, feedback would be appreciated, and will return the feed. Thanks dudes!
Traj on Production...
Mastering done by Papa Joe of DetroitHotBeatsStudio
[soundclick]10482922[/soundclick]
LINKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...018/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...691/index.html
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Re: Traj Exclusive (Promo Track)
Try to give u feedback but it says error loading songfile, let me know wen u get it fixed fam.
Holla back:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...995/index.html
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Originally Posted by
theflo
fixed! Thanks for pointing that out man haha, good look.
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it was good, nice beat.. good flo with it
quality is there.. good verbage,
i can dig this fam.
good promo
Holla back:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...995/index.html
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i like this homie, voice is cool floww could be a little better some lines feel stretched other then that its cool i like the beat alot, and the idea you used kinda flows with it...nice story tleling beat, but good shit all together man.. and thanks for the feed on my track
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werd up to my cousin on making this beat! Still have yet to use one of his for myself
anyway to the track, you showed me this a while ago but peeping this mastered version....on headphones but can def tell the vocals are blending with the beat better....was never fan of this beat but knew this be right up your alley (repping that old school shit also thought a beat this slow would be very hard to attack but you did a good job man, not really my favorite from you but def a good track for some promo and dropping some bars
ITS THE YEAR OF THE MUFUCKIN ALBUMS , BE REAAAAAAAADY :)
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yo man this is dope it reminds me of C-Rayz Waltz a little, keep it up!
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Man, I am definitely digging this. Has a good hip hop chill feel to it. I like this beat a lot. All of you did pretty well on this track, and you fit well together. Wordplay was nice, flow was on point, and it had a good tone for the song. I heard 1 on RB Radio last night I really enjoyed as well. Keep making good music, and thanks for the feed on my song!
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Sup man...I'm returning the feed
Simple yet interesting beat. I like your voice (no homo) it's very hip hop-ish. I also like how you deliver this shit man, there's an attitude in there, I like it. Flow goes smoothly all the way through, it's nice how you ride this beat with such pattern. Lyrics were also on point, nice rhyming. Hook was definitely a highlight to me. Quality was cool, could be upped no doubt. Overall this was pretty good, I'll be looking for more shit from you. Keep it up.
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Originally Posted by
theflo
it was good, nice beat.. good flo with it
quality is there.. good verbage,
i can dig this fam.
good promo
Word up man, thanks for bumpin'! And I got you back.
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Originally Posted by
Just Skan
i like this homie, voice is cool floww could be a little better some lines feel stretched other then that its cool i like the beat alot, and the idea you used kinda flows with it...nice story tleling beat, but good shit all together man.. and thanks for the feed on my track
True man, thanks for checking it out, and no doubt man, anytime.
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Originally Posted by
Rishi P
ITS THE YEAR OF THE MUFUCKIN ALBUMS , BE REAAAAAAAADY :)
Yeahhhhh man! That's how we do for 2011
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Originally Posted by
Leo-AK
yo man this is dope it reminds me of C-Rayz Waltz a little, keep it up!
Haha! Word up man, thanks for checking it out!
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Originally Posted by
Swag
Man, I am definitely digging this. Has a good hip hop chill feel to it. I like this beat a lot. All of you did pretty well on this track, and you fit well together. Wordplay was nice, flow was on point, and it had a good tone for the song. I heard 1 on RB Radio last night I really enjoyed as well. Keep making good music, and thanks for the feed on my song!
Word man, thanks for the critique, appreciate it! What track did you hear on RB Radio if you remember? And anytime man
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Originally Posted by
Iphorill
Sup man...I'm returning the feed
Simple yet interesting beat. I like your voice (no homo) it's very hip hop-ish. I also like how you deliver this shit man, there's an attitude in there, I like it. Flow goes smoothly all the way through, it's nice how you ride this beat with such pattern. Lyrics were also on point, nice rhyming. Hook was definitely a highlight to me. Quality was cool, could be upped no doubt. Overall this was pretty good, I'll be looking for more shit from you. Keep it up.
Thanks for the mini review man haha, much appreciated! What about the quality you think could be better? Thanks man.
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im feeling this man good flow, vocally the mixin is sick!!!! beat its nice and chilled well put together..
good little peak to see whats coming fam
(must start making rishi the track he wanted lol )
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The beat is real chill and mellow, I didn't expect the type of delivery you went with on this, but this is cool. I think the hook could use some post work, layers, some delay and pan work. You know, just to give it a full feel to better compliment the beat. Lyrics are nice, and you can obviously rap, so Im looking at this from a production stand point. Like I said, work on the hook, give it a little more attention. Fatten it up with some high to low vox back ups. Keep the hustle up.
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Great Beat on some get high and zone Intro is way too long nuff people will never get to the lyrics. Some crazy flow on this Really gives me a 90's MC style of flow. Nice track
If you are interested in being part of the compilation please email us @ jakob22@live.com as well please include
Name:
Location:
Email:
Profession(eg rapper, producer, etc)
Do you have access to production or need it:
Do you have access to camera to shoot videos if you check our stuff you will see we shoot allot of videos for our projects.
As well any other information you think we should know about you
I would really love to hear back from you and believe that a colabo would be mutually and musically beneficial for both of us
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^ sorry man but you should just ask for everyones resume before you leave feed lol even if it's in good manner i feel like just put him through an interview...saw the same in my thread just thought it was funny but werd collabs are always good
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Originally Posted by
J-min
im feeling this man good flow, vocally the mixin is sick!!!! beat its nice and chilled well put together..
good little peak to see whats coming fam
(must start making rishi the track he wanted lol )
Thanks man, appreciate the bump!
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Originally Posted by
Bounce
The beat is real chill and mellow, I didn't expect the type of delivery you went with on this, but this is cool. I think the hook could use some post work, layers, some delay and pan work. You know, just to give it a full feel to better compliment the beat. Lyrics are nice, and you can obviously rap, so Im looking at this from a production stand point. Like I said, work on the hook, give it a little more attention. Fatten it up with some high to low vox back ups. Keep the hustle up.
Thanks for the mini review man, much appreciated! This was just some quick promo shit I basically wrote on the spot, so wait until the album comes out later this year!
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Originally Posted by
DeathChamberz
Great Beat on some get high and zone Intro is way too long nuff people will never get to the lyrics. Some crazy flow on this Really gives me a 90's MC style of flow. Nice track
If you are interested in being part of the compilation please email us @
jakob22@live.com as well please include
Name:
Location:
Email:
Profession(eg rapper, producer, etc)
Do you have access to production or need it:
Do you have access to camera to shoot videos if you check our stuff you will see we shoot allot of videos for our projects.
As well any other information you think we should know about you
I would really love to hear back from you and believe that a colabo would be mutually and musically beneficial for both of us
Thanks for listening homie, and yeah I'll get at you about this collab, deff was feeling that video you posted so will be in touch.
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Originally Posted by
chrislee909
Any feedback on the track man?
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Feeling the beat nice and laid back I'm digging it. Blaze a blunt to this shit.
Flow comes in pretty nicely. Lyrics are pretty sick. Delivery was kind of energy-less at times, could use some more energy here and there. But the voice was good.
Hook was pretty straight. Could have had more dubs maybe to make it stick out better.
Pretty decent man, for sure.
Keep it up.
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yeaaa love it!
what stuff do u useż?
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damn this beat is chill!
Flow & delivery is dope.
dope track
keep it up
pz
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Bumping this for my homie spitting on this and for my cousin in London producing this banger
Stop sleeeeeeeeeeping
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Originally Posted by
L.E
Feeling the beat nice and laid back I'm digging it. Blaze a blunt to this shit.
Flow comes in pretty nicely. Lyrics are pretty sick. Delivery was kind of energy-less at times, could use some more energy here and there. But the voice was good.
Hook was pretty straight. Could have had more dubs maybe to make it stick out better.
Pretty decent man, for sure.
Keep it up.
Thanks for the bump man, and hell yeah blaze a blunt to this! Hahah
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Originally Posted by
Drunken Monk
yeaaa love it!
what stuff do u useż?
Thanks man, I use a Tascam US 122 (usb) Interface, a vocal booth and a Neumann tlm 103 mic
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Originally Posted by
Aversie
damn this beat is chill!
Flow & delivery is dope.
dope track
keep it up
pz
Thanks man!
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Originally Posted by
Rishi P
Bumping this for my homie spitting on this and for my cousin in London producing this banger
Stop sleeeeeeeeeeping
Thanks menk
Those who didn't hit me back yet, get at me! Those who already did, hit this homies! http://www.myemoticons.com/emoticons...rite/joint.gif
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beats hot. qualitys good. feelin your flow on this, i like the delivery...chorus does need more to it, like someone else said...
overall this is nice man, keep it up
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liek she said in that track she did "Outer Space"....."bringin hiphop from the 90s back to the 2010s"
that what it izzzzzzzz
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bumping this up mayne
also hit my link shad and rishi
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...362/index.html
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I felt this was good enough for SoTW man. That other kid got banned for voting for himself on like 6 accounts, so I revoked his privilege to have a Showcase. Wasn't the mod before so I couldn't hand it out, but Congrats, I felt you had the Showcase for the week.
:D
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yo congrats on SOTW homie! its our fuckin year mang.....year of the motherfuckin albums....RB better be ready lol......glad ppl finally noticing my homies talent....and no I am not dick riding just the truth even tho I know homie personally we been putting in work this year
trying to keep HIP HOP ALIVE YOOOOO
Edit - somoene get this man his medal!
and LOL at the other dude voting for himself 6 times.....was it that kid with that "I'm Gone" track cuz thats a shame....that track was pretty good
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Congrats on the award.
I like the laid back feeling. Just spittin some real shit. I actually feel like not much more should be added to the hook because if it was changed it would take away from that feeling that you were trying to achieve here, just my opinion. props on the song from lyrics to production..
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...529/index.html
^^^NEW TRACK PEEP MEH ;) "Apolitical World"
This is sick dude... laid back shit. Really gritty feel to the track. I enjoy it. Lyrically this is bodyin' a lot of cats. I enjoyed this. "stimulate my brain sensors.. sensory pleasures" and "revolution erupts, now they outta luck" some pretty good words here man.. imo it sounds clean as hell and the hook isn't too much or too little.. but that's from a listeners standpoint so take what you will from it. Good drop... thanks.
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Originally Posted by
Big Question
beats hot. qualitys good. feelin your flow on this, i like the delivery...chorus does need more to it, like someone else said...
overall this is nice man, keep it up
Thanks for the feedback man, much appreciated. I agree chorus could have had another layer but it was a promo track so the verses I focused more on, finishing up writing the album this month, next month recording, so I got some dope songs up my sleeve :hung:
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Originally Posted by
J-min
Thanks for the bump man, I got you tomorrow night...
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Originally Posted by
Swag
I felt this was good enough for SoTW man. That other kid got banned for voting for himself on like 6 accounts, so I revoked his privilege to have a Showcase. Wasn't the mod before so I couldn't hand it out, but Congrats, I felt you had the Showcase for the week.
:D
Yo man, props for this, very very much appreciated dude!
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Originally Posted by
Possible
Congrats on the award.
I like the laid back feeling. Just spittin some real shit. I actually feel like not much more should be added to the hook because if it was changed it would take away from that feeling that you were trying to achieve here, just my opinion. props on the song from lyrics to production..
Thanks homie! Yeah the hook was pretty much a "promo" kinda hook, just to let ppl know what I'm doing. Appreciate the feed man.
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Originally Posted by
ThatKidCry
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...529/index.html
^^^NEW TRACK PEEP MEH ;) "Apolitical World"
This is sick dude... laid back shit. Really gritty feel to the track. I enjoy it. Lyrically this is bodyin' a lot of cats. I enjoyed this. "stimulate my brain sensors.. sensory pleasures" and "revolution erupts, now they outta luck" some pretty good words here man.. imo it sounds clean as hell and the hook isn't too much or too little.. but that's from a listeners standpoint so take what you will from it. Good drop... thanks.
Thanks for the feedback man! Appreciate the kind words, deff peep the album when it comes out, like I said got some real bangers on there, recording for it starting the end of May, so hopefully an early fall/late summer release.
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Originally Posted by
Rishi P
yo congrats on SOTW homie! its our fuckin year mang.....year of the motherfuckin albums....RB better be ready lol......glad ppl finally noticing my homies talent....and no I am not dick riding just the truth even tho I know homie personally we been putting in work this year
trying to keep HIP HOP ALIVE YOOOOO
Edit - somoene get this man his medal!
and LOL at the other dude voting for himself 6 times.....was it that kid with that "I'm Gone" track cuz thats a shame....that track was pretty good
YEAR OF THE MUTHAFUCKIN ALBUMS MAN!!!!!!!!
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ahh it started slow to mee, but it grew on me , cool flow voice is decent i do like the beat also... the lyrics are pretty ill some points of the flow i didnt like though not gonna lie, but it had a cool rhyme scheme ... good job i like it.
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Originally Posted by
-Marvelous-
ahh it started slow to mee, but it grew on me , cool flow voice is decent i do like the beat also... the lyrics are pretty ill some points of the flow i didnt like though not gonna lie, but it had a cool rhyme scheme ... good job i like it.
leave feed on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...646/index.html
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Thanks for the feed man, bumping this one more time, will RTF
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Dope session we had for my album tongith
Stopnsleeeeeping its SOTE
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This could be the best song I've ever heard anyone upload from a forum.. really feeling it, slick flow, slick chorus, awesome quality.. many props man..
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Originally Posted by
Rishi P
Dope session we had for my album tongith
Stopnsleeeeeping its SOTE
Haha hell yeah man, Rishi P album coming soooooon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Originally Posted by
Bongkers
This could be the best song I've ever heard anyone upload from a forum.. really feeling it, slick flow, slick chorus, awesome quality.. many props man..
Haha, I don't know if I'm worthy of such praises but thanks a lot man, appreciate the listen!
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Sounds to me like some1's got the potential to bring back the golden age of hip-hop. Same with the beat
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I fucks with this. Loving the underground/real hip hop vibe. This is something the game's been missing.
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laid back beat..came in good ,real laid back i fucks with it ..good topic and good emotion and mic presence..flow and lyrics great.. not much to say shit is tuff keep doing ya thing
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Originally Posted by
DjFatalityBeatz
Sounds to me like some1's got the potential to bring back the golden age of hip-hop. Same with the beat
Thanks man, that's my overall goal haha
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Originally Posted by
InfiniteStylez
I fucks with this. Loving the underground/real hip hop vibe. This is something the game's been missing.
Word man, I agree, thanks for bumping!
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Originally Posted by
Genesis631
laid back beat..came in good ,real laid back i fucks with it ..good topic and good emotion and mic presence..flow and lyrics great.. not much to say shit is tuff keep doing ya thing
Thanks homie, much appreciated!
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Originally Posted by
DjFatalityBeatz
Sounds to me like some1's got the potential to bring back the golden age of hip-hop. Same with the beat
this is EXACTLY WHAT