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sup pleth, atleast 16 good?
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Plaz sent 20
Almost got 20 doneQuote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
Should be fucking hilarious, hence me not battling pleth
WTF DID WE JUST TALK ABOUT!Quote:
Originally Posted by Caged
already ko'd him for a belt, so have no interest in this match
but kill spree forcing my hand.. to smack the shit out of plaz
bitch slap this cat, then a left to body for arguing back
when u get Hooked to the Ribs, aint joe boston at a bbq shack
put out a contract, my nigga gets paid all the cash
see a Shooter clapping for Green, s'not durant asking draymond to pass
ur girl has diseases & unfortunately that ain't a haiku
u been Delta Terminal 1, & will be departing for the sky soon
my dude.. if this battle's close, hands thrown & lead pop
shit ends in a tie i'll beat u to the draw.. & blast ur head off
ur girl wanna record our sex dawg, lens gets her horny
don't worry, i'll Tape Delay then show u first thing in the morning
get chopped up, raw guts all cut leaking like pacs
once the blade Raisinets ending w/ disfigured pieces in a box
laser point in my duffle to snuff u w/ the locked shot
see me ready, Scope out the Bag.. s'not cuz i think ur mom's hot
got u again? who the heck gave him another crack at me?
whoever put u in line for a shot musta known my pinpoint accuracy
in LLL ur facin someone w/ a shitty record, just like yours
Sinning's bad, but i hope he murders u & repents to our christ lord
Quote:
Originally Posted by Amen
Quote:
Originally Posted by plethora vs me.;
claimed i robbed Barc then he robs King. the fuck is THAT dude?Quote:
Originally Posted by plethora
shit, Amen wouldn't even suck a fart outta that Pussy Ass move.
the OG's paved the way for your shine, just keepin it real dawg
if ur the Cornerstone of the site, it 's coz ur Foundation was easy to build off
n' the real vets rather have new blood to pry whats left of your station
its like population replacement coz the 'natives are DYING for gentrification'
i hear pleths bunkered up like even if i pull it, he'd fair better
rifle cocked. 'pointing down on your head' - n' plus the bullets are air benders
you easy comp to pluck, one sneeze and i can put you in the cold..
this is more like A. Boogie wit da Hoodie vs. a boogie in the nose
he just acts like a "BadAzz" when really insecure and feelin worried
coz everytime his Boosie's me - her memory of him gets a Lil Blurry
pleths the sorta kid who'll go any length to confuse n' annoy cats
n' find a way to cause 'noise n' discord' - even after getting muted in voice chat
plus your bitch look like a straight thirstin howl emoji..
i think 'kill it with fire' while writin, you think kill it fire to escape alimony
his bitch'll fuck for free but don't retract an eye off the broad..
she tried to run a 'Wild Bill' on my tab - so i left her ass shot in a bar
im glad we battled before, but you bout to get thrown where the reefs exist
iron sharpens iron - and mine gon' give him Deficiency like what he'll be sleeping with
put out a contract, my nigga gets paid all the cash
see a Shooter clapping for Green, s'not durant asking draymond to pass
ur girl has diseases & unfortunately that ain't a haiku
u been Delta Terminal 1, & will be departing for the sky soon
vs
claimed i robbed Barc then he robs King. the fuck is THAT dude?
shit, Amen wouldn't even suck a fart outta that Pussy Ass move.
i hear pleths bunkered up like even if i pull it, he'd fair better
rifle cocked. 'pointing down on your head' - n' plus the bullets are air benders
pleths the sorta kid who'll go any length to confuse n' annoy cats
n' find a way to cause 'noise n' discord' - even after getting muted in voice chat
cool battle... plaz had way more personals and hits then misses...compared to some of pleths bars which seemed coulda been aimed at anyone...
plus a couple bad misses...Raisenets / tape delay...
V- Plaz ...for consistency,...
gd shit
Quote:
Originally Posted by plethora
v. Plethora...Aye tbh Plaz isnt that bad. decent concepts just poorly worded. I can see him making noise in the near future. Pleth imo did enough. Seen better.Quote:
Originally Posted by Plaz
Pleth
already ko'd him for a belt, so have no interest in this match
but kill spree forcing my hand.. to smack the shit out of plaz
bitch slap this cat, then a left to body for arguing back
when u get Hooked to the Ribs, aint joe boston at a bbq shack
put out a contract, my nigga gets paid all the cash
see a Shooter clapping for Green, s'not durant asking draymond to pass
ur girl has diseases & unfortunately that ain't a haiku
u been Delta Terminal 1, & will be departing for the sky soon
laser point in my duffle to snuff u w/ the locked shot
see me ready, Scope out the Bag.. s'not cuz i think ur mom's hot
vs
Plaz
claimed i robbed Barc then he robs King. the fuck is THAT dude?
shit, Amen wouldn't even suck a fart outta that Pussy Ass move.
n' the real vets rather have new blood to pry whats left of your station
its like population replacement coz the 'natives are DYING for gentrification'
i hear pleths bunkered up like even if i pull it, he'd fair better
rifle cocked. 'pointing down on your head' - n' plus the bullets are air benders
you easy comp to pluck, one sneeze and i can put you in the cold..
this is more like A. Boogie wit da Hoodie vs. a boogie in the nose
v/Pleth
this was tough. i think plaz could have edged this. i read and reread the deficiency bar a few times and if the wording was a bit more crisp that would have take this or even if hte wild bill line had be directed towards pleth whatever the case i do give Plaz the Bar of the battle with that pussy ass move. shit was fire. i think Pleth's misses were closer than plaz's tho. close match. nice drops both of you
already ko'd him for a belt, so have no interest in this match
but kill spree forcing my hand.. to smack the shit out of plaz
^nah
bitch slap this cat, then a left to body for arguing back
when u get Hooked to the Ribs, aint joe boston at a bbq shack
^ok
put out a contract, my nigga gets paid all the cash
see a Shooter clapping for Green, s'not durant asking draymond to pass
^ok
ur girl has diseases & unfortunately that ain't a haiku
u been Delta Terminal 1, & will be departing for the sky soon
^good1
my dude.. if this battle's close, hands thrown & lead pop
shit ends in a tie i'll beat u to the draw.. & blast ur head off
^nice
ur girl wanna record our sex dawg, lens gets her horny
don't worry, i'll Tape Delay then show u first thing in the morning
^ok
get chopped up, raw guts all cut leaking like pacs
once the blade Raisinets ending w/ disfigured pieces in a box
^ok
laser point in my duffle to snuff u w/ the locked shot
see me ready, Scope out the Bag.. s'not cuz i think ur mom's hot
^alright
got u again? who the heck gave him another crack at me?
whoever put u in line for a shot musta known my pinpoint accuracy
^nah
in LLL ur facin someone w/ a shitty record, just like yours
Sinning's bad, but i hope he murders u & repents to our christ lord
^decent
VS
claimed i robbed Barc then he robs King. the fuck is THAT dude?
shit, Amen wouldn't even suck a fart outta that Pussy Ass move.
^good1
the OG's paved the way for your shine, just keepin it real dawg
if ur the Cornerstone of the site, it 's coz ur Foundation was easy to build off
^ok
n' the real vets rather have new blood to pry whats left of your station
its like population replacement coz the 'natives are DYING for gentrification'
^nah
i hear pleths bunkered up like even if i pull it, he'd fair better
rifle cocked. 'pointing down on your head' - n' plus the bullets are air benders
^miss here
you easy comp to pluck, one sneeze and i can put you in the cold..
this is more like A. Boogie wit da Hoodie vs. a boogie in the nose
^haha good1
he just acts like a "BadAzz" when really insecure and feelin worried
coz everytime his Boosie's me - her memory of him gets a Lil Blurry
^nope, it's a miss for me
pleths the sorta kid who'll go any length to confuse n' annoy cats
n' find a way to cause 'noise n' discord' - even after getting muted in voice chat
^decent
plus your bitch look like a straight thirstin howl emoji..
i think 'kill it with fire' while writin, you think kill it fire to escape alimony
^decent
his bitch'll fuck for free but don't retract an eye off the broad..
she tried to run a 'Wild Bill' on my tab - so i left her ass shot in a bar
^ok
im glad we battled before, but you bout to get thrown where the reefs exist
iron sharpens iron - and mine gon' give him Deficiency like what he'll be sleeping with
^meh, wording was off.
So yea, this battle was a bit lengthy, however what can you expect from a champ match? Ppl wanna hear more bars from top contenders. Still, with more lines comes more opportunity for misses and that's what it came down to. Most of the concepts were pretty well developed and the structure was consistent for both artists throughout. The difference could be generally described as consistency, however not in the typical since of a to Z. There were times, Pleth seemed to be rolling and unstoppable, while there where spurts in Plaz's verse that made it catch your attention at an odd moment. For me it came down to me a simple 2 misses versus 3.
V/Plethora by a hit.
Going to break this down a little different, since it's a champ match. I will utilize a head-to-head bar comparison to try and illustrate how I formed my opinion. I will assign point values to the tune of boxing "winner must score 10" rhetoric. Keep in mind the numbers are arbutrary, and a 10 just means it was the better bar of the two, and not that it is truly a 10/10.
Bar 1- Tie. 10-10. Both bars were decent. Play was more humorous, where as Pleth had that aggressive vibe. Both scored as clean jabs.
Bar 2 - Plaz 10-9. Again, two decent jabs. But I feel like Plaz'@ bar was more direct, and stung a bit more as a result.
Bar 3 - Pleth. 10-8. Had the better jab. Plan's gentrification bar was too verbose and missed for me.
Bar 4- Tie. 10-10. I feel like Plaz had a concept with potential. But was hurt by his word choices, and the rather lazy bullets/air benders angle. I like the pointing down on your head set up, but you ended lackluster. Whereas Pleth first line detracted from his be as a whole. Two sloppy jabs.
Bar 5 - Plaz 10/9. Had the cleaner jab of the two.
Bar 6 - Tie 10-10. Honestly wasn't super keen on either bar. Both work, I guess, but didn't do much for me. Can't say one was better.
Bar 7 - Pleth 10-9. I think Plaz's concept was kind of underwhelming, whereas Pleth had the more aggressive flip, with some pretty gnarly imagery.
Bar 8 - Tie 10-10. I real disliked both bars. For pleth, the bag play just doesn't resonate with me. Only really heard it used as a term to refer to women with old in front of it? As in that old bag. So the wording felt unatural. For Plaz, it was just a corny concept to me.
Bar 9 - Plaz 10-9. Wasn't super big on either. Plaz had another "yo girl" concept that was decent at best. But Pleth just referenced there last match and then did a self hype flip.
Bar 10 - Plaz 10-9. B Pleth had a lazy cop out of a pseudo-personal. Plaz had an okay wordplay, with serviceable wirding.
Pleth 96
Plaz 97
I think that accurately illustrates how close this match up was. Some hit and miss from both, which is to be expected when you've battled recently. For me, Plaz was just a little more consistent.
Vote - Plaz
Quote:
Originally Posted by plethora
PlethQuote:
Originally Posted by Plaz
Hooked to the ribs
shooter clappin
Quick to the draw
scope
plaz
pussy ass move
air benders
boogie w/ hoodie
Boosie
wild bill
deficiency
got plaz here with a couple more quotables
i'll hit this up a little later tonight. got a busy day ahead of me.
already ko'd him for a belt, so have no interest in this match
but kill spree forcing my hand.. to smack the shit out of plaz
---no
bitch slap this cat, then a left to body for arguing back
when u get Hooked to the Ribs, aint joe boston at a bbq shack
---lmfao niiice
put out a contract, my nigga gets paid all the cash
see a Shooter clapping for Green, s'not durant asking draymond to pass
---ok
ur girl has diseases & unfortunately that ain't a haiku
u been Delta Terminal 1, & will be departing for the sky soon
---not feelin
my dude.. if this battle's close, hands thrown & lead pop
shit ends in a tie i'll beat u to the draw.. & blast ur head off
---no
ur girl wanna record our sex dawg, lens gets her horny
don't worry, i'll Tape Delay then show u first thing in the morning
---lol ok
get chopped up, raw guts all cut leaking like pacs
once the blade Raisinets ending w/ disfigured pieces in a box
---cool
laser point in my duffle to snuff u w/ the locked shot
see me ready, Scope out the Bag.. s'not cuz i think ur mom's hot
---no
got u again? who the heck gave him another crack at me?
whoever put u in line for a shot musta known my pinpoint accuracy
---nothin here
in LLL ur facin someone w/ a shitty record, just like yours
Sinning's bad, but i hope he murders u & repents to our christ lord
---nah
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claimed i robbed Barc then he robs King. the fuck is THAT dude?
shit, Amen wouldn't even suck a fart outta that Pussy Ass move
---no
the OG's paved the way for your shine, just keepin it real dawg
if ur the Cornerstone of the site, it 's coz ur Foundation was easy to build off
---no
n' the real vets rather have new blood to pry whats left of your station
its like population replacement coz the 'natives are DYING for gentrification'
---no
i hear pleths bunkered up like even if i pull it, he'd fair better
rifle cocked. 'pointing down on your head' - n' plus the bullets are air benders
---ok
you easy comp to pluck, one sneeze and i can put you in the cold..
this is more like A. Boogie wit da Hoodie vs. a boogie in the nose
---LOL ok
he just acts like a "BadAzz" when really insecure and feelin worried
coz everytime his Boosie's me - her memory of him gets a Lil Blurry
--niiice
pleths the sorta kid who'll go any length to confuse n' annoy cats
n' find a way to cause 'noise n' discord' - even after getting muted in voice chat
---nah
plus your bitch look like a straight thirstin howl emoji..
i think 'kill it with fire' while writin, you think kill it fire to escape alimony
---no
his bitch'll fuck for free but don't retract an eye off the broad..
she tried to run a 'Wild Bill' on my tab - so i left her ass shot in a bar
---lol ok
im glad we battled before, but you bout to get thrown where the reefs exist
iron sharpens iron - and mine gon' give him Deficiency like what he'll be sleeping with
---nah
Very close battle....
V- pleth
already ko'd him for a belt, so have no interest in this match
but kill spree forcing my hand.. to smack the shit out of plaz
ok jab
bitch slap this cat, then a left to body for arguing back
when u get Hooked to the Ribs, aint joe boston at a bbq shack
cool
put out a contract, my nigga gets paid all the cash
see a Shooter clapping for Green, s'not durant asking draymond to pass
dope, wish it was directed more at plaz but still dope
ur girl has diseases & unfortunately that ain't a haiku
u been Delta Terminal 1, & will be departing for the sky soon
i like the wp, fell a little flat at the end but ok still
my dude.. if this battle's close, hands thrown & lead pop
shit ends in a tie i'll beat u to the draw.. & blast ur head off
eh, ok flip
ur girl wanna record our sex dawg, lens gets her horny
don't worry, i'll Tape Delay then show u first thing in the morning
dope
get chopped up, raw guts all cut leaking like pacs
once the blade Raisinets ending w/ disfigured pieces in a box
nah
laser point in my duffle to snuff u w/ the locked shot
see me ready, Scope out the Bag.. s'not cuz i think ur mom's hot
not feeling
got u again? who the heck gave him another crack at me?
whoever put u in line for a shot musta known my pinpoint accuracy
not feeling this either
in LLL ur facin someone w/ a shitty record, just like yours
Sinning's bad, but i hope he murders u & repents to our christ lord
could have been dope, ok at best
started off good, wasnt really into the second half tho. i thought the draymond bar was ur best.
claimed i robbed Barc then he robs King. the fuck is THAT dude?
shit, Amen wouldn't even suck a fart outta that Pussy Ass move.
lmao. dope
the OG's paved the way for your shine, just keepin it real dawg
if ur the Cornerstone of the site, it 's coz ur Foundation was easy to build off
ehh, seen cornerstone a bunch of times
n' the real vets rather have new blood to pry whats left of your station
its like population replacement coz the 'natives are DYING for gentrification'
not feeling
i hear pleths bunkered up like even if i pull it, he'd fair better
rifle cocked. 'pointing down on your head' - n' plus the bullets are air benders
cool
you easy comp to pluck, one sneeze and i can put you in the cold..
this is more like A. Boogie wit da Hoodie vs. a boogie in the nose
lol ok
he just acts like a "BadAzz" when really insecure and feelin worried
coz everytime his Boosie's me - her memory of him gets a Lil Blurry
ok
pleths the sorta kid who'll go any length to confuse n' annoy cats
n' find a way to cause 'noise n' discord' - even after getting muted in voice chat
cool, i like it. that being said, if u worded this better it could have been hard af
plus your bitch look like a straight thirstin howl emoji..
i think 'kill it with fire' while writin, you think kill it fire to escape alimony
nah
his bitch'll fuck for free but don't retract an eye off the broad..
she tried to run a 'Wild Bill' on my tab - so i left her ass shot in a bar
ehh, ok at best
im glad we battled before, but you bout to get thrown where the reefs exist
iron sharpens iron - and mine gon' give him Deficiency like what he'll be sleeping with[/QUOTE]
this was a fresh wp for me but not good wording.
definitely had the lotb with the amen opener. inconsistent after that.
i'm going with Pleth. pretty close, i think plaz could have taken this if he worded a couple bars stronger. good battle.
vote Pleth
5-3 Pleth wins
Good battle fellas