Wk 15 Knoxville 4-9 Vs Zunto 0-3 - Knoxville wins

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@KnoXville. @Zunto

Your A Dead Man.

You never drop sharp enough voters are Bored of you bro.
I’ll inform your torso,
That the Cuts will bleed & leave Z all over fabric like the sword of zoro.

Knoxville wins by NS open for feed

lol it's cool, saying ur gonna leave him all over fabric isn't a gr8 punch but it's a funny concept

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Also is zunto ever gonna show for one of these or is he just trolling? sign that man out lmao

this was a good concept and a nice visual. and I like the rhyme pattern. i could have hit a bit harder but I fuck with it

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Originally Posted by Blas

lol it's cool, saying ur gonna leave him all over fabric isn't a gr8 punch but it's a funny concept

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Also is zunto ever gonna show for one of these or is he just trolling? sign that man out lmao

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Appreciate it

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Originally Posted by MV

this was a good concept and a nice visual. and I like the rhyme pattern. i could have hit a bit harder but I fuck with it

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Good looks appreciate it I just threw something quick together I had a feeling this guy wasn’t gonna show.

Servicable jab, though I have two knocks on it. I would avoid single letter flips if possible, but also it was a bit wordy and that effected the flow & sting. That said, it works.