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His name tough by the looks, In reality this bitch sittin shook,
Cus when this verse ‘’airs’’ mac out…. I think this mac gonna book…
Get slapped if you look, now this bitch that I’m rippin, no business even spittin,
Shit thought macks were pimps, We all wondering where’s this niggas bitches..
Leave em in stitches, this boy gone stiffin, when real macs in his vision,
Last I checked, macs immune to the virus, so nothing you spit is really sickenin
My punches aint missin, get me slain? Never… you’d have to spit something clever,
Cus shit we read his verses, nd delete em, like recieveing annoying chain letters.
Another slain veteran, spit crack, hit hard like its laced, this kids a disgrace,
Continue to get in my way? I’ll remove mac quick… Like he comin off a chick face…
Grab a shakespeare book, start from there u needa switch
Take a Mac and drop this 2000 OS trought the Windows bitch
Look how i develop better punchs than tony stark's company
You'll lose so bad that when The Unit sees this u gonna be uncomfortably
Watch a post with ur wins, then notice its exactly like ur age
Bitch, nobody would care to read your verse, just pass the page
Dood gtfo here.. negros like u in RB cant fit
I bet your just the The_King alias.. cuz ya suck thats it
Dawg so retarted nobody will notice my master plan
Have bitchs like you tryna to be dope but battling girls like phan man
keyed that shit in 1 hour
His name tough by the looks, In reality this bitch sittin shook,
Cus when this verse ‘’airs’’ mac out…. I think this mac gonna book…
aight
wasnt really a quote..but definitely enough in my eyes to give u the vote.
mac, still shows u got some elevatin to do. u keep hearin the same things but it doesnt seem like ur really listenin. iunno fam..nothin much to say but i aint seein bars connect..period.
get direct, form punches, use personals if u have em, etc
Vote-> BrodieSelfPaid
Uppin
Brodie
His name tough by the looks, In reality this bitch sittin shook,
Cus when this verse ‘’airs’’ mac out…. I think this mac gonna book…
this was a good np reference airmac/airmax never seen it before
Get slapped if you look, now this bitch that I’m rippin, no business even spittin,
Shit thought macks were pimps, We all wondering where’s this niggas bitches..
lol nice
Leave em in stitches, this boy gone stiffin, when real macs in his vision,
Last I checked, macs immune to the virus, so nothing you spit is really sickenin
ok not a bad reference little played concept but wording was nice
My punches aint missin, get me slain? Never… you’d have to spit something clever,
Cus shit we read his verses, nd delete em, like recieveing annoying chain letters.
nice
Another slain veteran, spit crack, hit hard like its laced, this kids a disgrace,
Continue to get in my way? I’ll remove mac quick… Like he comin off a chick face…
nah
MAC
Grab a shakespeare book, start from there u needa switch
Take a Mac and drop this 2000 OS trought the Windows bitch
ok not a bad concept
Look how i develop better punchs than tony stark's company
You'll lose so bad that when The Unit sees this u gonna be uncomfortably
had some potential but mac needs better wording ok personal though. didnt really get the reference to setup.
Look how i slang more Iron then tony starks company
Ill fuck u up so bad you'll be fitting in The Unit uncomfortably
something to that affect when it comes to wording
Watch a post with ur wins, then notice its exactly like ur age
Bitch, nobody would care to read your verse, just pass the page
ok better
Dood gtfo here.. negros like u in RB cant fit
I bet your just the The_King alias.. cuz ya suck thats it
lmao this was better
Well Mac i could see u followed through on ur concepts here so props for that just a little trouble still in ur wording. U need to be a little more creative in places too when it comes to np wp or using metaphorical concepts. I gotta give this to Brodie because i thought he came more consistent with the np punches and overall concepts.
V/ Adrean Brodie
Dawg so retarted nobody will notice my master plan
Have bitchs like you tryna to be dope but battling girls like phan man
Uppin for da overkill
yo...uppin
Dood gtfo here.. negros like u in RB cant fit
I bet your just the The_King alias.. cuz ya suck thats it
vs
His name tough by the looks, In reality this bitch sittin shook,
Cus when this verse ‘’airs’’ mac out…. I think this mac gonna book
Get slapped if you look, now this bitch that I’m rippin, no business even spittin,
Shit thought macks were pimps, We all wondering where’s this niggas bitches..
i got brodie taking this one. his punches were clever and had some strength behind them. mac came ok, still a bit too basic for the win.
v/Brod
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