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Verse Length - 16 Lines
Verse Due - January 6th, 2023
@MV @Fresh
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House Rules
Verse Length - 16 Lines
Verse Due - January 6th, 2023
@MV @Fresh
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Originally Posted by Amen
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Originally Posted by Fresh
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Originally Posted by Amen
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Originally Posted by Fresh
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Originally Posted by Amen
You’re such a fuckin pussy… literally a bitch, through n’ throughQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
I’ll get ya beta male me a nigga pass on your behalf and ain’t shit you gon’ do
Your whore don’t give u pussy, you’ll never satisfy her, so stop
That bitch’ll deep throat my Deify present it, now she just worships cock
Spoiler alert, you’re not tough… tell the truth or ill make sure ur death isn’t clean
If I Sensai Kreese in your story, I’ll poke more holes in you than in that dudes prison scene
You’re a nobody, I’m a spectacle... MV a name you won’t see mentioned
It doesn’t matter where we meet… I’ll turn anyplace into a nose-bleed section
Let me lay it out, you were nothing at rap Royalty n you’re even less over here
Your only Crowning achievement will be the dental work needed after my message is clear
Dude is soft as fuck but acts like he’s known as toughQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
The only good thing about being ten-ply is it helps to soak up the blood
Fight me? You can’t even fight poverty so stop tryna act hard
These hand’ll put you in a poor state forever... when I bury you in your own back yard
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nice band bro. i see you!
its crazy your performance was foreshadowing of all the things you'd do
because we dont want to hear your shitty lyrics...even if its really Blue
i googled 106th and park and thought i saw your stupid face, boy you got to admit it
wearing glasses you look like Blind Fury, and just like him youll never write a bar unassisted
just take my advice do the opposite of what you are doing now, im tryna help
you work so hard for bars with Homophones its probably why u aint learn to sound like yourself
you and Phal scheming i see your placement and ya seeding, im sounding off the alarm
Fresh been sitting on a punch for me all season, and Phalanx lookin sus with a waterlogged arm
real tough til i named a gym close by, i'd actually pull up so the bitch in you started showingQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
i would have had a Fresh Body for the New Year and without a resolution, yours would be decomposing
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Originally Posted by MV
i wont break the assassins creed,last thoughts me killing u, ur friend an yall fam instantlyQuote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
the jokes on me? Animus explain to ur blood line why they all have to share the same memory
blue busted this pussy n sent him home and you still acting like an elite wordsmith
because now its bacterial life living in your little hole, were you're just burning and pissed
Spoiler alert, you’re not tough… tell the truth or ill make sure ur death isn’t clean
If I Sensai Kreese in your story, I’ll poke more holes in you than in that dudes prison scene
Let me lay it out, you were nothing at rap Royalty n you’re even less over here
Your only Crowning achievement will be the dental work needed after my message is clear
Fight me? You can’t even fight poverty so stop tryna act hard
These hand’ll put you in a poor state forever... when I bury you in your own back yard
Vs
i googled 106th and park and thought i saw your stupid face, boy you got to admit it
wearing glasses you look like Blind Fury, and just like him youll never write a bar unassisted
just take my advice do the opposite of what you are doing now, im tryna help
you work so hard for bars with Homophones its probably why u aint learn to sound like yourself
you and Phal scheming i see your
This was a cool battle in the end I think fresh had a few misses but some decent bars in there too. MV really should’ve won this he had some great concepts but the execution left them falling a little flatter than they should have. But I enjoyed reading this battle and fresh just edged it.
V/fresh
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Originally Posted by Fresh
Bar 1 - MVQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
Bar 2 - Fresh
Bar 3 - Fresh
Bar 4 - MV
Bar 5 - MV
Bar 6 - MV
Bar 7 - Fresh
Honestly this was close as fuck. Both had some solid shots and cool spins on personals. I think MV dug a little deeper here, and edged it in terms of creativity.
Truth be told, I would have predicted Fresh to take this, but I gotta call them how I see 'em.
Vote - MV
You’re such a fuckin pussy… literally a bitch, through n’ through
I’ll get ya beta male me a nigga pass on your behalf and ain’t shit you gon’ do
I’m guessing MV isn’t black and his gf is, and thus he took offense to you saying the n word? I get bae ta mail, and I see that you’re calling him one, but the execution could’ve been better. It’s an ok jab.
Your whore don’t give u pussy, you’ll never satisfy her, so stop
That bitch’ll deep throat my Deify present it, now she just worships cock
I was gonna call this a reach cause I honestly didn’t know you could pronounce it “dēify,” but TIL. Carry on.
Spoiler alert, you’re not tough… tell the truth or ill make sure ur death isn’t clean
If I Sensai Kreese in your story, I’ll poke more holes in you than in that dudes prison scene
Had to google this, but alright. My only issue is that “crease” is a weird thing to call an inconsistency or a lie. Cool punch though.
You’re a nobody, I’m a spectacle... MV a name you won’t see mentioned
It doesn’t matter where we meet… I’ll turn anyplace into a nose-bleed section
I can only take the personals at face value. I do like this bar, but he sort of took the sting out of you talking about beating him up by posting quotes (that I can only take at face value, again) about trying to box you irl or whatever.
Let me lay it out, you were nothing at rap Royalty n you’re even less over here
Your only Crowning achievement will be the dental work needed after my message is clear
Not knowing the history, I can only really judge the wordplay, which is fine but not amazing.
Dude is soft as fuck but acts like he’s known as tough
The only good thing about being ten-ply is it helps to soak up the blood
Idk what you mean by “ten-ply”
Fight me? You can’t even fight poverty so stop tryna act hard
These hand’ll put you in a poor state forever... when I bury you in your own back yard
Your execution could’ve been better. You can’t even fight poverty was funny and promising, but the rest of the bar is just aight.
its crazy your performance was foreshadowing of all the things you'd do
because we dont want to hear your shitty lyrics...even if its really Blue
Are you saying Blue Bayou is his ghostwriter? Or that he’s an alt for him? Idgi. Personal preference ig, but personals are either great or corny to me. I don’t see the point of posting a link of who I’m to assume is him, if all you’re gonna do is drop a light jab (bars) about the lighting of the venue. (Not singling you out, because Fresh’s personals didn’t do much of anything for me either)
i googled 106th and park and thought i saw your stupid face, boy you got to admit it
wearing glasses you look like Blind Fury, and just like him youll never write a bar unassisted
I guess you were saying Blue is his ghostwriter. I couldn’t tell from that clip if he looks like Blind Fury or not, but this was alright.
just take my advice do the opposite of what you are doing now, im tryna help
you work so hard for bars with Homophones its probably why u aint learn to sound like yourself
That’s slick. I like that. Especially since he did pull out some quasi-generic homophone puns for his verse.
you and Phal scheming i see your placement and ya seeding, im sounding off the alarm
Fresh been sitting on a punch for me all season, and Phalanx lookin sus with a waterlogged arm
I got nothing. r/whoosh.
real tough til i named a gym close by, i'd actually pull up so the bitch in you started showing
i would have had a Fresh Body for the New Year and without a resolution, yours would be decomposing
Solid, though I think that could’ve been worded/executed better. The wording and flow sort of take some of the sting off.
i wont break the assassins creed,last thoughts me killing u, ur friend an yall fam instantly
the jokes on me? Animus explain to ur blood line why they all have to share the same memory
Ngl, I don’t get this. But I don’t like and I must/ animus.
blue busted this pussy n sent him home and you still acting like an elite wordsmith
because now its bacterial life living in your little hole, were you're just burning and pissed
I’m the type who thinks no wordplay at all is better than forced wordplay. Back to real/bacterial ain’t it. Burning and pissed honestly makes it cornier imo. Also again, this probably could’ve been executed in a way that would make it more impactful. You ended on your worst bar tbh.
This is close af; it truly could go either way. Which is why I wanted to avoid voting, because in a battle so close, I’m not sure that someone with no knowledge of y’all’s past should help decide a battle that has so many insider references. That said, we’re all just huddled up in our hoodies, trying to keep warm as the heat death of the online rap forum universe envelops us, so fuck it, a vote’s a vote.
I gotta go with Fresh. Personals are sort of a wash here for me; I didn’t get many of them and none of them were that amazing at face value regardless. Fresh takes this because I think he executed his concepts better than MV. MV has solid wordplay concepts, but instead of focusing on maximizing the impact of a good pun, he gave us okay punchlines and then sprinkled some associative wordplay in there for window dressing. He had a good verse, but I think he really could’ve won this convincingly with better execution. Fresh’s flow is also a lot crisper. Good battle y’all.
Vote- Fresh
Fresh leads 2-1.
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Spoiler alert, you’re not tough… tell the truth or ill make sure ur death isn’t clean
If I Sensai Kreese in your story, I’ll poke more holes in you than in that dudes prison scene
just take my advice do the opposite of what you are doing now, im tryna help
you work so hard for bars with Homophones its probably why u aint learn to sound like yourself
V.MV/Close battle..Fresh had some good wordplay, MV was more direct with his shots
You’re a nobody, I’m a spectacle... MV a name you won’t see mentioned
It doesn’t matter where we meet… I’ll turn anyplace into a nose-bleed section
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i wont break the assassins creed,last thoughts me killing u, ur friend an yall fam instantly
the jokes on me? Animus explain to ur blood line why they all have to share the same memory
this battle had too many misses imo .. it was close but probably not in the good way
I got MV with better misses
Lmfao
This is a joke I clearly had the better verse here. Close it and give him the win. This kinda shit sucks the motivation right outta me
You’re a nobody, I’m a spectacle... MV a name you won’t see mentioned
It doesn’t matter where we meet… I’ll turn anyplace into a nose-bleed section
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real tough til i named a gym close by, i'd actually pull up so the bitch in you started showing
i would have had a Fresh Body for the New Year and without a resolution, yours would be decomposing
both verses were pretty bad and hard to find quotes. I felt that the wording was all over the place and I was just trying hard to read this with some kind of flow. I felt the quote from fresh was a good concept but the overall wording was trash, no real setup at all. MV's bar wasn't worded great either but it tied in okish. A bit too wordy but the concept was ok.
v/MV
MV wins 4-2.