Echelon vs. Networth

30 lines due tomorrow. Good, lol.

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I'm fucking your moms fragile walls, her fragile halls; daggar brawl is daggar baal
Dragon maw, dragon claw...I'll throw this fat fuck like a boomerang through a castle wall...
Pop this bum. lost in suns; carve' my niche' in your wrist; a terrorist with sonnet puns...
Conquer suns; conquer puns...if money talks...my money talks in tongues...
i'm burning this faggot, a thirsty ass dragon...burning this faggot..with breaths
if hip hop is dead..you are what's left..I'll take a stab at it..my blue daggar just turned red...
I hung the big sun, big suns and big puns, big puns and big puns
you're B.I.G. as hell; here's a 2pac of beer.. you look like a black pig pun..
bag this bum..cast the sun with a witch's tongue..hindered love
sinister dove..i'll give you a black belt whooping for mastering the art of being wack as fuck..
you eat burgers and fries..hurt you alive..burn this guy..than burn this guy..
learn to write..you awful blight..i gave you 12/30..at midnight he'll die...

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it's okay..don't write a verse..i'm not feeling it..anymore..lol..

I'll catch you later, okay.

Want proof I can beat yo ass, you'll get pause if u curious E
Naw im lyin slime- cause I could never take you................ seriously
A 30 line battle? Why when yo five bar flops aint never lookin well
You'll have voters surprised like wow, this the longest he ever took to fail
Most scrubs elevate, but you're incapable Sin.. u remain the same
It's levels to this shit n U aint reached one new1 dawg Y u change ya name?
In all honesty, seems like you took some advice now u can get to show'em
Went from crammin stanzas together, to now its like readin a whole different poem
So you're a new man, got some hair on ya chest but this where it all stop
Ain't it funny how lil niggas wanna jump out the gym as soon as they balls drop?

U drivin in the wrong lane, matter of fact pull over, u cant use the car
But if U park in Myspace its on site, like where yo old Haikus n failed music are
He act real social, media be duckin K rounds ready to get they sing on
Better vest up, when these boys hit~ sound like a FaceBook messenger ringtone
I'll press a dent in ya chick clit, so liberal wit strokes, give her a stomach ache
You're just too conservative faggot.. in 2020 you should be Trump's runnin Mate
I only turn on the tele for politics, music, sports, and maybe emphasized words
Left RB a few yrs came back n seen you, thats how I knew they legalized Herbs

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Originally Posted by Echelon

30 lines due tomorrow. Good, lol.

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it's okay..don't write a verse..i'm not feeling it..anymore..lol..

I'll catch you later, okay.

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U only on once a month, then ya flow on the pad is crampin my stiz cuz
Now you don't wanna fight right?? Ech you're actin just like a bitch blood!
You wouldn't bust grapes in a wine barrel, ur chicken shit really bro, Stop!
U dont got a whole grain of courage, or the strawberry heart on a Cheerios box!

I'm fucking your moms fragile walls, her fragile halls; daggar brawl is daggar baal
Dragon maw, dragon claw...I'll throw this fat fuck like a boomerang through a castle wall...
Pop this bum. lost in suns; carve' my niche' in your wrist; a terrorist with sonnet puns...
Conquer suns; conquer puns...if money talks...my money talks in tongues...
i'm burning this faggot, a thirsty ass dragon...burning this faggot..with breaths
if hip hop is dead..you are what's left..I'll take a stab at it..my blue daggar just turned red...
I hung the big sun, big suns and big puns, big puns and big puns
you're B.I.G. as hell; here's a 2pac of beer.. you look like a black pig pun..
bag this bum..cast the sun with a witch's tongue..hindered love
sinister dove..i'll give you a black belt whooping for mastering the art of being wack as fuck..
you eat burgers and fries..hurt you alive..burn this guy..than burn this guy..
learn to write..you awful blight..i gave you 12/30..at midnight he'll die...
I'm a little..I'll have you turn in your grave..I'm a firecracker..I'll have you burn in your grave..
You never learn from mistakes..you're so fat..you were burned at the stake..
This rapper is sickly drawn..ripping bombs..echelon with sinister songs..
I'm minister baal..you're a little big..but you're no biggie smalls..
In this scene you will die..you're leaving the sky in a propeller to die..
I'm deceiving to cry..you're fat as hell..but I'll have you eaten alive..
you're never right with heathens..during sodom and gommorah..you lost energy to reason..
I'm winter in a season..you're fat as hell..you need to exercise your demons..
I'm a sinister witch..a seer echelon..you're a little bitch..
my rapping is hot..and I would put you in a box..but you don't fit in it..
The sirens licked my stache..irony will clash..
I'm the plight..and if you think you're fly..you're pilot will crash..
i pop nines..good rhymes for good nights..town cries..
i'm going to kill you..and you're so fat..you don't fit in your chalk outline..
you're a troubled guy..bubble night..bubble light..
you need to lose some weight..quit eating humble pie
biggie smalls, snoop dog..the good in rights
this is your death..this isn't a threat..like 2pac..you're gonna' die tonight..

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Vote Networth

Both had decent flow, Echelons flowed a bit better. Echelon came out strong and then seriously fell off with a lot of word repeats which makes me want to deduct for creativity and complexity.

Echelon I'm fucking your moms fragile walls, her fragile halls; daggar brawl is daggar baal
Dragon maw, dragon claw...I'll throw this fat fuck like a boomerang through a castle wall...

Networth Most scrubs elevate, but you're incapable Sin.. u remain the same
It's levels to this shit n U aint reached one new1 dawg Y u change ya name?