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Thread: Drugz nd Liqour

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    Drugz nd Liqour

    Like Tyrets Syndrone victims i 'spit shit' at every chance,
    My mouth released profanities sit and watch as i advance,
    At a glance, this rap game for sucess and higher finance,
    Money got me actin funny, heads spinning like a break dance,
    Round and round, pop an asprin, paracetamol and pills,
    The shit begins, under my skin, tylynol and fluid spills,
    My friend died or was he killed? i couldn't get the carpet clean,
    Put the whole thing in quick cycle, broke the wash machine,
    I think i've lost my spleen, if you've seen it please return it,
    Lost a bag of 'green' so i rolled up the grass and burnt it,
    When its lit, i take my hit, hissy fit upon the floor,
    Drove a car without a permit sped to the club and killed a whore,
    Another hit, shit; I don't remember anymore?
    Is that the paranoia kicking in? is that the pow..lice at my door?
    Is someone trying to kill me? do they know i did some more?
    Drugs and liqour got me off quicker than any man at a flicker
    Down a pint of hennesey and i end up feeling sicker
    Then a vicar with one leg sitting in a room full of muslims
    Fuck this shit, I'm off to bed, to sleep before the floor spins.
    Def Poets

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    ...My favorite "female Emcee"..with another dope piece..you amaze me with your wordplay...

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    wow, am i seriously your favourite female emcee? seriously? wow, that suprises me..and you like my wordplay! jesus..you must be after something! LMAO

    Luv You 2
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    wow..... impressive
    The freethinking of one age is the common sense of the next

    For me, words are a form of action, capable of influencing change

    -=Logik=-

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    k i gotta give you props... I never heard a girl spit like that... you drop any audio... I'd like to hear it
    The freethinking of one age is the common sense of the next

    For me, words are a form of action, capable of influencing change

    -=Logik=-

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    Quote Originally Posted by FanTa ZeE
    wow, am i seriously your favourite female emcee? seriously? wow, that suprises me..and you like my wordplay! jesus..you must be after something! LMAO

    Luv You 2
    ..after... ..?????

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    ^lol...but yeah this was a nice piece here...you had good structure in this.....the flow was good through out it i thought, it stayed on pretty well in this, flowed good....you had some good vocab....good wordplay like stated before me....had some nice lines in there....overall a nice piece....keep at it.

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    thank y'all so much..for once in my life i can feel proud..and to Penskills...we haven't even had a first date! LMAO..

    think i could be a legend one day?
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