this was pretty nice,
even though it was long,
it was still a good read,
flow was on point,
real good to me,
structure was nearly perfect,
but that really doesn't,
mean anything to me,
the best part i liked,
about it was the,
imagery that stood out,
it was very creative,
overall i give this peice,
a 8/10, not bad homie, props.
pz.