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    Gettin' Shit Off My Chest (My Point Of View)

    Nothin' else is relavant when you're after them Presidents
    But when they're Dead, often times you lose residence
    No money. . More Struggle. . No help. . More Trouble
    Political figures don't see things bigger when flexing their muscle
    It's bullshit campaigns to maintain poll superiority
    Priorities are fucked to the point you wanna piss on authority
    And damn a minority, equal opportunities aren't given
    That's the fuckin' reason we have people in the streets livin'
    For every shopping cart with possessions, there's a stressin' millionaire
    Wonderin' what to do with so many millions to share
    Instead of being materialistic, get on some fuckin' real shit
    You find dining while some families don't even have a meal, shit
    You deserve to be robbed of ya riches, you stingy bitches
    It's real on the street, cats got a trigger finger that itches
    And our president leaves me in stitches, uh-oh don't cross the one
    Who's oblivious to the fact that he ain't the only person with an Air Force One
    Let the troops come home please, we don't need more casualties
    Fighting in Iraq when back here we got our own battle scene
    Why can't we worry about our own problems N solve um ?
    Seems like every Bush as a liking for fuckin' revolvers
    Our world revolves around other countries business
    Mother fuckers is ignorant, thinking war equals intimate
    The lives lost for a cuase not benefiting us, yeah we got Sadaam
    But there's plenty more mu'fuckas hungry to bomb
    I tried to remain calm, but needed to clear my mind
    Words are powerful, so I should cause a stir with mine
    If you don't like it, fine, but an opinion's an opinion
    N It's not like you asked for it but you knew you was gone get it
    Lady Liberty is feelin the pain her lower extremities
    Soon she'll collapse as the US' last flame falls in victory
    For the ones who trying to destroy this great land built
    The great land tilts, and damn fake hands spill
    Blood for nothing. . ayo Blood tell me something. .
    What's gone happen when ya legs wanna go but ya feet stop runnin' ?
    Will you embrace the sour taste of past sins ?
    Will you attempt to get a grip and move ya ass again
    Down the road less travelled, that's one less shackled
    To this system of society destruction N self dismantle
    You can't handle the truth, so grab ahold of the mirage
    And keep thinking this world is all good with a violent massage
    So much is not real, some still pushed against they will
    To do shit, we been through this, there's so much consealed
    Please push me from this window seal, lemme leave this non-sense
    Fuck a food stamp, gimmie paper not these non-cents
    You know what else gets to me ? These fuckin' youths
    Wastin' our money on cigarette commercials, the Blunt Truth
    Since when did being true ever involve a fucking high ?
    I blow smoke to the TV with glassy eyes as these fucks try
    To provide a good message, look, here's a good message
    They'll quit if they want you stupid fucks, quit guessin'
    That you'll make a difference, what about crime on the street ?
    You don't see any commercials about the consequences of beef
    So fuck that, get off that track and do something worth while
    Nothing is changing and trust this shit ain't worth a smile
    Been a minute since my face cracked, gettin' this off my chest
    So normal breathing will commence N I can finally rest
    So many haters, saying I wanna be the next Eminem
    You ignorant mu'fuckas, I'd dye my hair if I wanna be him
    If I wanted to mimic his gimmick, I would, but I don't
    Face it. . . I'm nicer than ya'll so leave that shit alone
    N I'm tired of this he said, she said, pointing of fingers
    A fucking political tug of war for '04 Presidential Streamers
    Once again I'll say. . . Let The Troops Come Home. . .
    I want to send my regards to the families who's loved one's are gone
    It cost to mourn, N We're paying a heavy price. . .
    This is my Point of View, a point of maybe few, but this is Life.

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    You have greatly improved since your previous drops..

    You are getting much more emotion into your pieces now..

    Maybe it was just because this is actually your opinion on certain issues.. But it had good emotion..

    Could tell it was from the heart..

    Transitions need to be worked on though.. ..

    Only real critisizm to be made..

    Well done..

    Hit up something in my siggy that you aint already..

    Thanks..

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    Goddamn Formula.....what can I say.......I can't really respond to too much shit in this....(the shit about the President cause people I know read my shit an if anyone in my Squadron got a hold of it I'd be fucked!)

    ....Anyway dawg I really agree with what you said....Especially about the war.....my view (being in the military an all) is the same as yours.....I don't know why we continue fighting a war that is so pointless.....

    Anyway your emotion was excellent an raw.....I love this piece....because being int The Air Force I can relate to it.....thanks.....peace.....
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    liked how you voiced your opinion, always makes for a better read.... i agree with most of what you were saying, but i have to say i have seen you come better with your transitions, seemd blunt in places, like a whole new rhyme in places no blending them in, to smooth them out.... but thats quite minor, when you has a good conteent... your def getting better man... nice work....
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    ^ ^ People with alot of posts can be so funny freeposting in threads and acting like they're holier than thou.

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    yea this is real real nice for real
    i agree with you on a lot
    and its nice to see emcees talking about political shit and carrying it for a topic for such a damn long song but the read was worth it mos def
    very nice fuckin drop
    ill be sure to peep you next time you drop
    especially if you advance as quick as people sayin in other replies
    but nice drop, keep it up, long ass read all on one topic, good
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