It vs CaliCollegeGurl

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Here is a battle I need poll votes on

click: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131258

[It.]

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[It]

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I flow bringing pleasure and pain
No sex so call it lyrical masturbation
what was this?... nope, just no
But I prefer Rapbattles elevation
Or maybe “It” annihilation.
wtf, what is this soppose to mean?
A female on the mic cut throat making you bleed
Could call it verbal menstruation
no, no, and hell no...
Rape you with this vocal violation
I may be the newbie but this is “It”s indoctrination
just stop now, please just stop...
Like I said before 10 lines is the limit
Otherwise, “It” I’d cut you down infinite
.............................................. no

this verse is all filler, no punches or personals.
weak wordplay and lacked rhymescene,
u need to elavate, this was really whack...




a girl from cali & she attends a college, holy shit!
but whats she doing on RB?, thats what i dont get?!
this won u the match right away but it was whack
cuz i bet u'r a bitch thats suicidal & very unconfident!
like depressed midgets wit eating disorders & inpairments!
lmao, whack punch, no personal...
u'r dependent on vocab but that dont mean u succeeded!
u'r like conseeded numbers of even, u'r odds not needed!
didnt make much sense, attempted personal but weak
like parapleegic nuns this piece of shit is dying for salomy!
snap u'r anatomy like U.S. soldiers n iraq wit no harmony!
lmao, whack, no punch, just whack...
fuck saying pardon me, cuz u'r guna be saying excuse me
u see u'r like a college girl from cali ruinning lives, sorry b!
didnt u say this allready?... whack...

u had better attemted punchlines but they sucked.
1 personal i beleive but it was whack,
overall better rhymescene and wordplay...



[i]idk this battle was really whack, but caligirl had all filler,
i think It at least came with attempted punches & personals.
caligirl didnt really have a sense of what she was doing...
no connection to her opponent, short lines and shit...
It had got more points or w/e in this...tried better to win.

vote/It

[This]

It vs CaliCollegeGurl

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IP: EC0B 84C7


I flow bringing pleasure and pain
No sex so call it lyrical masturbation
But I prefer Rapbattles elevation
Or maybe “It” annihilation.
A female on the mic cut throat making you bleed
Could call it verbal menstruation
Rape you with this vocal violation
I may be the newbie but this is “It”s indoctrination
Like I said before 10 lines is the limit
Otherwise, “It” I’d cut you down infinite

ok shit, nothing to special, came off weak.
need to work on some punches and flow.
be more creative, this wasnt really all there.



a girl from cali & she attends a college, holy shit!
but whats she doing on RB?, thats what i dont get?!
cuz i bet u'r a bitch thats suicidal & very unconfident!
like depressed midgets wit eating disorders & inpairments!
u'r dependent on vocab but that dont mean u succeeded!
u'r like conseeded numbers of even, u'r odds not needed!
like parapleegic nuns this piece of shit is dying for salomy!
snap u'r anatomy like U.S. soldiers n iraq wit no harmony!
fuck saying pardon me, cuz u'r guna be saying excuse me
u see u'r like a college girl from cali ruinning lives, sorry b!


was ok, better than 1st, but still needs work.
try to be more wit ur best side, dont come half,
assed cuz u know yur oponent did that aight.

really whack battle but It takes the win....
he had better overall punchlines and effort....
but It came whack and so did calicollegegirl....
so both can elavate but more in favor of CCG....



vote/It....
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[Axe]

It is DQ'ed for voting for himself as both THIS and CoS