...Apocalypse vs Skillz Position

[aSap iLL]

apoc
nice battle, obviously you won this battle, your punches were iight but ive seen better from you... nice flow, multies were iight and that what i really liked about your verse,personal's were okay not really good..overall nice job overall really think you still need to elevate alot but it was enought to merk skillz.. and oo0 yea your structure was good .

skillz position
your Verse was plain and simple WACK.. you really need to elevate alot.. your multies were wack, your punclines were wack and i dont even think they were derected at apoc...and some of it didnt even make sense damn son read ya shyt before you drop it ,personals were wack and i really think you need to work on that,your structure was horrible made your verse very hard to read , but i still think your WACK and really need to elevate alot...

Vote = apoc

[Skillz Position]

you can suck my dick.....


that one was directed towards you

[Nice]

apocalypse got this eaisly, with absolutely no contest.
othe rkid needs to use proper format


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[Jammin' Jobus]

Apocaplypse....Uhhh...Not feeling this verse at all....Not really any punches...rhyme scheme was decent at times but sloppy at others....Not witty in the least....Urgghhh overall a lackluster verse...

Skillz....Uhhhh No punches like ap No wordplay like ap not good like ap.....but you didnt have a visible structure to speak of whats so ever....so that make you worse....for future battles get a structure and use punches...

Vote/Apocalypse

[Jammin' Jobus]

opps forgot to post this..
return the favor and hit up this battle with an honest vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&page=1&pp=15