iight
10-15 lines
cs u spit 1st
no d/r
no crew votes
due in a hr and a half afta check in
no hate good luck yall
miss nani
cs
iight
10-15 lines
cs u spit 1st
no d/r
no crew votes
due in a hr and a half afta check in
no hate good luck yall
......
What up LA!
1,2,1,2...
Yo, I got the rhymes that created the asian tsunami
I got the dick that made me have for 1 buck ur mommy
Miss Poonani, i'll make u call ur nanny
Cuz when I start to rap i frighten any wannabee
Ur just a bee...n i am the big bear
I know it aint fair, but u gotta admit lifes unfair
Ur crew is kritical, yeah u need to say more
how come ur a biatch and u r to the core
like would say jay-z encore?(do u want more?)
Why? im sayin like jadakiss
Can I rap when u can only piss
I dont know, I just got the flow
And for rite now i'd say ciao if i was italiano
i dont hate u
CS
i'll leave those lyrics just as broke as ya buget
its funny watch me throw a penny and give u a run 4 ya money
you shouldn't have neva said nuffin
so i'll rip out ya vocal cords nigga end of discussion
i'm spittin dat fire but first u get doused in gas cut u off at the wrist da shits getin out of hand
i'll just toy wit u... u wack dun avoid the truth
i'll gouge ya fuckin eyes out and change ya point of view
i'm the truth u need to change ya name 2 cs 2 BS
cuz u gotta be bullshittin me
get ya shit together b4 u come and step 2 me
but really it would b no point 4 u to uppin ya game
ya status would only grow from nuffin 2 lame
lemme stop now b4 i fuck around and go ova 15
Tell Me Sumthing Good....
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CS-wack man im sorry u started off liike u was gon bring the tsunami for real but it fell off after that line..no personals at all...call ur nanny and bear,,,reall real basic man,,,no vocab..and the ender was just off...
nani-u came cool i like the outta hand thing and the change ya name to bs..it was decent ...the ender was nice...but the change ya point of view..played,,,it was a decent verse took the cake...
v-nani
RETURN THE FAV..
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cant poll so ill keep it short nani you cam out iight only thing you need to work on is keeping the lines not stretched fuks the flow and scheme up you know, cs wasnt realy feeling your rhymes keep elevating yall
V. Nani
I will slay thee
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make you look STUPID
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i can bump this right?
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cant vote without my 100 posts so just some feedback
cs-at a quick glance i thought u might be decent but as i got further..ur shit was just wack man..no hate just keep elevatin dug
miss nani-decent flow good structure thought u hit some good punches...keep it up and keep elevatin
hit me back yall 1
i can up it riOriginally Posted by tOngueLasHing
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CS
Yo, I got the rhymes that created the asian tsunami
I got the dick that made me have for 1 buck ur mommy
^^Weak
Miss Poonani, i'll make u call ur nanny
Cuz when I start to rap i frighten any wannabee
^^Hah...nah...
Ur just a bee...n i am the big bear
I know it aint fair, but u gotta admit lifes unfair
^^nope
Ur crew is kritical, yeah u need to say more
how come ur a biatch and u r to the core
^^Not bad I guess...
like would say jay-z encore?(do u want more?)
Why? im sayin like jadakiss
Can I rap when u can only piss
^^Fuck nah...
I dont know, I just got the flow
And for rite now i'd say ciao if i was italiano
^^bad
Miss Nani
i'll leave those lyrics just as broke as ya buget
its funny watch me throw a penny and give u a run 4 ya money
^^Not bad, ok start
you shouldn't have neva said nuffin
so i'll rip out ya vocal cords nigga end of discussion
^^This was ok, saw what you were tryin to do here
i'm spittin dat fire but first u get doused in gas cut u off at the wrist da shits getin out of hand
^^not feelin this one tho...
i'll just toy wit u... u wack dun avoid the truth
i'll gouge ya fuckin eyes out and change ya point of view
^^Decent concept, punch was ok
i'm the truth u need to change ya name 2 cs 2 BS
cuz u gotta be bullshittin me
get ya shit together b4 u come and step 2 me
^^no real punch, except maybe the 1st 2 lines
but really it would b no point 4 u to uppin ya game
ya status would only grow from nuffin 2 lame
^^not that good of a finish
Overall it'smos def obvious that Miss Nani took control of this battle, edged it out as much as she needed to for a victory gain. word...pce.
vote=Miss Nani
I Don't Bring The Beef, I AM The Beef
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Beef/Meat Nameplays Are Forever Whack!!! And You Will Be Too If You Use Them...
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I Don't Give A Fuck Who You Are, So Fuck Who You Are!
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nani u can only up it 5 times afta both verses are droped or ull be dqued so u can upp it 3 more times
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iight here goes
cs
Yo, I got the rhymes that created the asian tsunami
I got the dick that made me have for 1 buck ur mommy
nope
Miss Poonani, i'll make u call ur nanny
Cuz when I start to rap i frighten any wannabee
nah
Ur just a bee...n i am the big bear
I know it aint fair, but u gotta admit lifes unfair
iight
Ur crew is kritical, yeah u need to say more
how come ur a biatch and u r to the core
wack
like would say jay-z encore?(do u want more?)
Why? im sayin like jadakiss
Can I rap when u can only piss
ok
I dont know, I just got the flow
And for rite now i'd say ciao if i was italiano
lol nah
nani
i'll leave those lyrics just as broke as ya buget
its funny watch me throw a penny and give u a run 4 ya money
ok
you shouldn't have neva said nuffin
so i'll rip out ya vocal cords nigga end of discussion
nah
i'm spittin dat fire but first u get doused in gas cut u off at the wrist da shits getin out of hand
lol
i'll just toy wit u... u wack dun avoid the truth
i'll gouge ya fuckin eyes out and change ya point of view
yes nice
i'm the truth u need to change ya name 2 cs 2 BS
cuz u gotta be bullshittin me
get ya shit together b4 u come and step 2 me
lol ok
but really it would b no point 4 u to uppin ya game
ya status would only grow from nuffin 2 lame
yeh not bad
ok cs ur structure was ok but ur flow was off u had wack punches 1 personal no multis notthing really standin out ur openin line was wack but keep elivatein
nani ur structure was off but u had sum good funny punches in there and personals sum multis ur flow was a bit chopy but not 2 bad
overall both were ok but my vote goes to nani for betta punches n betta everythin
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nice shit nani......I knew you had this one.....Krytikal reppa......Katrina go vote on my battles I got poppin....you look good katrina
Aight I feel like votin' in this 'cause these two blessed me with a short 4 word per line battle.
Anyway:
CS - you dont know, you just got the flow
And for [spelling error alert] now you'd say "ciao"? if you was italiano <- (your wack as shit you fuckin NOOB....... No hate <3) Ah just playin' keep elevatin' if your wires aint broke yet.
Miss Nani - You coulda just posted
Yo yo yo yo yo G
It hurts when I pee
I get so fucked up I cant see
And YOU FUCKIN WITH ME!?!?!?!?!!
Boo Boo boob oo o b o b ob b o b o bo b o bobbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
And won. v/ - Miss Nani
Peace.
yo speakin of spelling error alert alphabetical n not alphebetical chump
plus rite is a way to write faster
go to skool n get instructed b4 u make comments on thangs that go beyond ur intelligence
cs
Originally posted by:CS
Yo, I got the rhymes that created the asian tsunami
I got the dick that made me have for 1 buck ur mommy
^^NO REAL PUNCH HERE WHICH MEANS' WEAK OPENER
Miss Poonani, i'll make u call ur nanny
Cuz when I start to rap i frighten any wannabee
^^DIDN'T RHYME
Ur just a bee...n i am the big bear
I know it aint fair, but u gotta admit lifes unfair
^^NO REAL PUNCH
Ur crew is kritical, yeah u need to say more
how come ur a biatch and u r to the core
^^MEH PERSONAL
like would say jay-z encore?(do u want more?)
Why? im sayin like jadakiss
Can I rap when u can only piss
^^HELL NO WEAK
I dont know, I just got the flow
And for rite now i'd say ciao if i was italiano
^^DEFINATELY NOT
no real punches....you had one attempt at a personal but that was about
it pz.....
Originally posted by:Miss Nani
i'll leave those lyrics just as broke as ya buget
its funny watch me throw a penny and give u a run 4 ya money
^^MEH OPENER DIDN'T RHYME
you shouldn't have neva said nuffin
so i'll rip out ya vocal cords nigga end of discussion
^^S.G BUT HEY IT WAS OK I GUESS
i'm spittin dat fire but first u get doused in gas cut u off at the wrist da shits getin out of hand
^^WHERE'S THE OTHER LINE AT TO END THE BAR YOU GOTTA WORK ON THAT PLUS THIS LINE WAS STRETCHED TO SHIT KEEP WORKIN ON THAT PZ..
i'll just toy wit u... u wack dun avoid the truth
i'll gouge ya fuckin eyes out and change ya point of view
^^THIS IS PROBLY THE BEST BAR IN THE WHOLE BATTLE
i'm the truth u need to change ya name 2 cs 2 BS
cuz u gotta be bullshittin me
get ya shit together b4 u come and step 2 me
^^NO REAL PUNCH HERE
but really it would b no point 4 u to uppin ya game
ya status would only grow from nuffin 2 lame
^^MEH CLOSER WASN'T REALLY THAT TIGHT....
keep workin on ya punches and ya flow and keep elevating pz....
V/Miss Nani
for having better attempt at punches and personals
hit one of the links back wit an honest vote pz.....
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