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    "the Abyss" Crazy Shyt Peep Dis

    Standing on the precipice of love,
    well, what disguises itself as love
    to those who know not
    (ignorant/blind to the qualities thereof)

    as I was saying…

    standing on the edge of inexperience,
    misconception, no direction
    (subsequently, NO protection) ~
    as if we need to protect ourselves…

    see,
    we be like,
    sleep walking
    fast talking ourselves into the unknown

    but
    it don't have to be so
    others have gone this way
    befo

    & lived to tell
    about the living hell
    inside life's deepest,
    darkest well

    of that bottomless pit
    of the ego trip
    the ugly underbelly
    of vain glory
    (can a sista TELL the story?)

    of the flip side
    of the joy ride…

    the domestic violence
    the miseducation
    the NON sense

    the "BUT I LUV HIM"
    syndrome
    wheneva he goes upside
    yo dome

    the neverending nightmare
    of PO leece cars
    when they sirens blare

    wakin neighbors
    all times of night
    another ghetto nikka fight

    & neva wanna let
    tha charges stick
    can't STAND to be
    without tha~dikk…

    cycle, vicious
    life? HELL!
    love? WHAT?
    then death…

    oh well

    we stand upon the precipice of something
    that could be everything beautiful
    if we would but look
    before we leap

    into the deep

    abyss…
    21-13-0

    ~~B~~ aka Synickle AKA Str8killa



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    ShaYneA
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    very crazy indeed kin ahad a nice flow going though was feelin it ........maybe you should take a nap and get this kinda ish outta your head lol

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    Gunz -N- $tackZ
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    so i be a crazy nigg. thnx 4 holdin me down anywayz lol. 100
    21-13-0

    ~~B~~ aka Synickle AKA Str8killa



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    This poem took me away ...
    such rawness , had real depth &
    meaning ...

    Props

    Fav linessee,
    we be like,
    sleep walking
    fast talking ourselves into the unknown

    but
    it don't have to be so
    others have gone this way
    befo

    & lived to tell
    about the living hell
    inside life's deepest,
    darkest well

    Keep doin ur thang,

    Pz
    ~1~

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    fookin 'ell...this was a piece and a half...

    ...like you were sailing on the edge...the bordeline if you would...but you pulled it off for sure...

    ...had some real depth to it....at times it seemed too deep within yourself for most to comprehend...which is all good..(cos that happens a lot with me too)....

    anyway..heavy piece...respect...
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    that was amazin' i had a friend who had the "but I love him syndrom" he put her in the hospital a few times, she learned tho... that was a powerful peice, it was like you knew both sides & felt from every angle, Veiwpoints. I was feeing this peice, it was deep, peace boo
    Formerly known as ThundaThighz
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    "...For life is not a paragraph.
    And death I think is no parenthesis"-E.E. Cummings

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    RealityLives
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    i like that ish...oh by the way im starting to see everyone edits or at least some edit thier cussing...do i need to edit mine...

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    this was a trip had a crazy flow mixxed into it. the actual peice has mad wordplay into it. tight stuff stay up.
    joey

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    Gunz -N- $tackZ
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    thanx yall nuttin but luv keep UPPIN!!!!!!!!1
    21-13-0

    ~~B~~ aka Synickle AKA Str8killa



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