quit swaying lil niggaOriginally Posted by Young Philly
quit swaying lil nigga
Savir
MM's a deadbeat ass. only 19..who'da known he fathered kids
just found out he's been a dad a few months...before his daughter did
--- Nice
now call it quits with audio. you couldn't be great if it saved ya
dude been singapore rap..before hip hop even immigrated to Asia
--- Naw, I've used the singapore wordplay
i LITERALLY key in minutes. get it..on the spot shit is advanced
sav's always nice on the fly...M~M's always at the zip of my pants
--- Not really feelin it
never stress the effort. if i try force..you'd get sent i tell ya
cuz if i tri-force...i'd punch you further away from links than zelda
--- Clever, pretty good punch
so focus kid. what funner than for my knife to poke the ribs
of a loser who's buggin me on aim begging me for some poker tips
--- Not feelin it
that's real talk. cuz poker n text won't get you a meal dog
you have a baby motherfucker....go find yourself a REAL JOB!!!
--- Solid punch
cuz spit aint paying. 's okay..at least ya got ya health, boss
M~M stays sippin that Ensure..so ima ensure him of a text loss
--- Decent
ya need skills to pass em down..n every protege's an inept maggot
got an eye for talent..& look what happened to that exempt faggot
--- Naw
M~M
Underrated, overachieving?! Nah, you're a bum expected
& u gotta be the 1st champ to be undisputedly… unrespected
--- Ok punch... I liked the wording
Neglected… but to be honest this isn’t you so don’t fake it
Because I DO respect your position… enough to take it
--- Not feelin that style of punch
This dame is wasted I’m shootin straight to the 1st place
Grown man at home?! only thing splittin from Cali is earthquakes
--- Not really feelin it
Your worth’s fake, so now I’ma have to pick you apart kid
& u really SHOULD keep the title… to ur mom’s apartment
--- Dont like that style of punch
I don’t miss the mark n I pinpoint, pause, & then pounce
So I’ll be using your mouth like a strike zone... balls in n out
--- Funny&Clever... ok punch
I’m dissolving your clout, Sav I’m just stampin ya guy
Retard, Even ya bandwagons got slidin doors & a ramp on the side
--- Pretty nice
Hand you your spine, thought u had the win & I’ll foil it…
Cuz u stay on ur moms pad… but u shoulda been a stain in the toilet
--- I laughed at this one, pretty good
Overall: I've gotta go with Savir.
His personals took this one.
thanks for voting..
2-2
good battle mr. murdera
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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MM's a deadbeat ass. only 19..who'da known he fathered kids
just found out he's been a dad a few months...before his daughter did
that's real talk. cuz poker n text won't get you a meal dog
you have a baby motherfucker....go find yourself a REAL JOB!!!
cuz spit aint paying. 's okay..at least ya got ya health, boss
M~M stays sippin that Ensure..so ima ensure him of a text loss
vs
Underrated, overachieving?! Nah, you're a bum expected
& u gotta be the 1st champ to be undisputedly… unrespected
Neglected… but to be honest this isn’t you so don’t fake it
Because I DO respect your position… enough to take it
This dame is wasted I’m shootin straight to the 1st place
Grown man at home?! only thing splittin from Cali is earthquakes
Your worth’s fake, so now I’ma have to pick you apart kid
& u really SHOULD keep the title… to ur mom’s apartment
I’m dissolving your clout, Sav I’m just stampin ya guy
Retard, Even ya bandwagons got slidin doors & a ramp on the side
I Would Have To Say M~M Edged This Out....I Just Felt His Punches Were More Witty, Harder Hitting...
So v/ M~M
Oh Yeah, Savir. It's Also Fucked Up To Bring Somones Kid's Into A Battle!!!
Pz. A Pz. A
^^the aim of the battle is to diss em as much as possible! heh, the only thing I wouldn't use is dead relatives in a diss
Also, dudes, since I voted, can I get some feedback on my verse cos Tag no-showed? Thanks, appreciate it
^ like me
AI[/size]fuck you.
3-2...
alls fair in a battle.
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Savir
MM's a deadbeat ass. only 19..who'da known he fathered kids
just found out he's been a dad a few months...before his daughter did
o focus kid. what funner than for my knife to poke the ribs
of a loser who's buggin me on aim begging me for some poker tips
M~M
Your worth’s fake, so now I’ma have to pick you apart kid
& u really SHOULD keep the title… to ur mom’s apartment
I’m dissolving your clout, Sav I’m just stampin ya guy
Retard, Even ya bandwagons got slidin doors & a ramp on the side
Hand you your spine, thought u had the win & I’ll foil it…
Cuz u stay on ur moms pad… but u shoulda been a stain in the toilet
i got m~m here, cool battle i guess
v/ m~m
4-2
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if i am able to vote, i will vote fairly.
NO FUCK THAT!
yeah right, g' head.
I wanna know who sneeky is though..and why he decided
to make his first LLL appearance.
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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Oh yeah, I forgot sneek wasnt in the league.
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MM's a deadbeat ass. only 19..who'da known he fathered kids
just found out he's been a dad a few months...before his daughter did
now call it quits with audio. you couldn't be great if it saved ya
dude been singapore rap..before hip hop even immigrated to Asia
i LITERALLY key in minutes. get it..on the spot shit is advanced
sav's always nice on the fly...M~M's always at the zip of my pants
vrs.
Underrated, overachieving?! Nah, you're a bum expected
& u gotta be the 1st champ to be undisputedly… unrespected
Neglected… but to be honest this isn’t you so don’t fake it
Because I DO respect your position… enough to take it
This dame is wasted I’m shootin straight to the 1st place
Grown man at home?! only thing splittin from Cali is earthquakes
Retard, Even ya bandwagons got slidin doors & a ramp on the side
Hand you your spine, thought u had the win & I’ll foil it…
Cuz u stay on ur moms pad… but u shoulda been a stain in the toilet
v/MM
even though i quoted 2 more lines for MM, savir you came fuckin' nasty. MM just got you with a few more personals n' a couple funny lines.
in my opinion.. this was a sick battle.
Underrated, overachieving?! Nah, you're a bum expected
& u gotta be the 1st champ to be undisputedly… unrespected
good battle, but my feedback is that you should've changed it to 'undisputed...as unrespected'... champs aren't "undisputedly" they're "undisputed" .. i think the line would've been worded much better like that. but chea good battle guys. just figured giving actual feedback on even one bar is better than saying if i like each one or not.
"I don’t miss the mark n I pinpoint, pause, & then pounce
So I’ll be using your mouth like a strike zone... balls in n out"
^ Im sorry but LMAO
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