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  1. October 6th, 2005, 11:27 PM #1
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    A Wise Man Once Told Me

    Looking me in the eyes….he was slowly fading away
    Tear rolling down his face…built up enough strength to say
    Son…..my time is here….though I’ve had a god run
    Time to face god………..time for my place in the sun
    Take my advice…………………….listen to me Chris
    Make sure you put the seat down………… after you piss
    This one day will save your life …wont anger your wife
    And make sure you always…………………………….
    He died that instant, ill never know what he meant to say
    But starting that day, I used his advice, he wanted it that way
    Now this aint a problem for the lesbos, don’t matter to fags
    But for me……I t became do, or seeing the inside of body bags
    From rags to riches……..……………to dirt to the cleanest
    Girls cant aim when they piss……….see we got our penis
    I never forgot to put the seat down……everyday it was my duty
    Cus my girls might fall threw…………rather its pissing or dooty

    Serious verse coming soon
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  2. October 6th, 2005, 11:30 PM #2
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    LMFAO HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA it seemed so sad at first then you just completley changed it around that shit is fucken tight nigga lol........fuck the serious verse lol 9.9/10 in humurous lol
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  3. October 6th, 2005, 11:31 PM #3
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    thanx

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3257113
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...55#post3257155
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  4. October 6th, 2005, 11:38 PM #4
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  5. October 6th, 2005, 11:41 PM #5
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    Funny shit kid.....butttttt....


    Quote Originally Posted by flavin
    A Wise Man Once Told Me

    Looking me in the eyes….he was slowly fading away
    Tear rolling down his face…built up enough strength to say
    Son…..my time is here….though I’ve had a god run
    Time to face god………..time for my place in the sun
    Take my advice…………………….listen to me Chris
    Make sure you put the seat down………… after you piss
    This one day will save your life …wont anger your wife
    And make sure you always…………………………….
    He died that instant, ill never know what he meant to say
    But starting that day, I used his advice, he wanted it that way

    >>>>>>It fell off right here

    Now this aint a problem for the lesbos, don’t matter to fags
    But for me……I t became do, or seeing the inside of body bags
    From rags to riches……..……………to dirt to the cleanest
    Girls cant aim when they piss……….see we got our penis
    I never forgot to put the seat down……everyday it was my duty
    Cus my girls might fall threw…………rather its pissing or dooty

    Serious verse coming soon

    The only thing that was funny was how you expec one thing while starting to read it and you flipped it up....but after that initial shock it just fell off kid.....After you flipped it up out of no where like that u just expect it to follow up with some funny shit....but it dont
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  6. October 6th, 2005, 11:43 PM #6
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    yeah it was a real quick thing im righting the serious verse right now......just thought id drop something stupid while im waiting
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  7. October 6th, 2005, 11:44 PM #7
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    I Got To Give It To U ...the Verse Was Nice ..i Really Didnt See Anything Wrong With It.....good Shit.one!!!
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  8. October 7th, 2005, 12:23 AM #8
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    aaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahaha... dis shit was halarious, had me rollin, lol, yo, funny shit homie, original as fuck, "put the seat down" ahahahahahahaha, classic, good drop homie, nice rhyming too, oh man, you gotta drop more shit like dis lol, good stuff homie, entertaining...
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  9. October 7th, 2005, 12:27 AM #9
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    this was a amazing piece homie,
    u had a good structure
    u were creative
    u had a good topic
    u cud always use better vocab
    overall dope
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    keep it up
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  10. October 7th, 2005, 12:31 AM #10
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    heh...that was kind of weird...I was reading what I thought was going to be sad...or maybe a good pointer...but it turned out halarious and not good advice at all!!! I piss on the seat all the time and my woman don't get pissed! lol Jk dogg, lol good verse, very....ummm....creative? Lol Made me giggle....Can't wait to see it when you "TRY" to be funny lol. Peace
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