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    Brand New Freestyle

    Actin-Trife Slashin-Dykes Wit This Stack-Of-Knifes
    Cats-Is-Sliced Back-Wit-Rhymes While Caps-Devide
    Stash-The-Clines Stack-The-Lives Of Wacks-That-Lie
    Trouble-Soon When I Pass The Crowd And Bubble-Threw
    I Have A Couple-Foos That Will Straight Slumble-You
    Grind-Unfair Wit Knives-N-Spares N Clam-Some-Peeps
    Trashed-Is-Clean Then Drop A Masterpiece N Stackin-G's
    Who Dares Laugh-At-Me With So Much-Of-Metahphors
    Crush-Attend-The-Swords N Bust-A-Friend-With-Cords
    Too Fast When I Slice-The-Layers..No Time-For-Prayers
    Grindin-Straight-Herbs N You Freaks Lie'in-Dead-Nerds
    But Now Im Just Fuckin-Wit-Ya'l With Somethin-So-Raw
    Dont Be Trustin-The-Claws Coz They Be Bumpin-The-Law
    This Some Crazy-Shit That Made-Me-Slit My Babys-Wrist
    Lazy-Kid With A Wavy-Dick..Non Ya'l Can Phaze-Me-Bitch
    Unless You Shootin With A Uzi N Recieves Eighteen-Clips...
    Inside Crackin-My-Heart N Fuckin Clampin-My-Smarts
    Steppin By Gettin High Still Takes Me Back-To-The-Stars..
    Then Im Back Actin-So-Hard Just Like I Fuckin Did-At-First
    Spit-The-Verse Rip-A-Hearst With A Clip-Thats-Cursed
    Man..Im Fuckin Tired Of Writing-Rhymes Its Time-To-Die
    Fly-To-Sky Coz My Spine-Is-Lied Coz Beneath Ima A Trybe-Inside

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    S-CuL-E
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    this was aight vocab cool flowed tite ..................

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    Ahhh, dunno what that was, need some structure, vocab was ehhhh, couple words used a couple times, flowed well together, keep on keepin on. 7.5/10

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    Im -not- BacK
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    gd rhymin
    rest of it wsnt over gd
    elevate

    need real title in future, and need leave links or itll get closed (no h8)

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    PhillyKat
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    You switched it up with double and triple multis. Those type of rhymes put to a good topic might make a nice piece. You had a lot of rhymes in there, so it has potential as sounding good on audio.

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    PhillyKat
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