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    The Page

    The Page:


    I put my problems on the page and they jus seem to fall apart
    I put my feelings deep into this it’s the gateway to my heart
    A piece of paper to me is like diamonds to most
    My way of escape is usually a challenge or a problem for most
    My ability to write versus the ability to think
    My ability to put words on the pad with the lead or the ink
    I feel so free when the pen strikes the pad
    And releases all the antagonism or animosity that I have ever had
    The beauty of the poet’s sheet
    It’s like the invoice of the mind I strive to make ends meet
    My reference of what I’ve done in my precedent helps me to cope with the present
    To liberate myself of all the demons and foes within my presence
    The page brings me freedom and tranquility
    And relieves the guiltiness I feel when I blame my fears on temporal insanity
    Time flies when I insert intrusion mixed with delusion
    The page feels my rage not meant to degrade
    But I ensure that wicked thoughts invade the progress that’s been made
    Beauty written with divine thoughts like treasure on an island
    With punches like a boxer so many hits I land
    The page goes on and like everyday life
    Till the end of my life the page carries my strife
    Last edited by AngelHaze; March 11th, 2006 at 11:27 PM
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    good drop I like how your puttiing your emotions and all your feeling out's there not giving a fuck what people think just going at it.

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    thanks for the feedback grim reap rise
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    meh this was a decent drop way different from your OM Love you could of came more creative with the topic it just made me the reader to feel different about the topic title then the actuall OM nothen as good as the other one but still hope you keep dropen 1 <3


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    I really like it, It a song that any writer can relate to cause thats how most writers feel, real nice keep doing
    to cool for a sig..

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    thanks ya for tthe good feedback i agree wit u r.shaw about the title and the actual poem they were on two different levels i should've changed the title of it or sumthin
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