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castro
Week rhymes
no flow
bad structure
opener was ok
no wordplay
s.
hypnotical
didnt rhyme
imagery was good
lost on punches
...I recon u could do heaps better coz your visuals were nice and wording too.
try topicals, punch battles suck any way
v/castro
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CASTRO Took this better flo structure and all the punches were hard
castro
Have ya moms “ashes” in my pocket, and in the other side is “bud”
But even wit all this bud I smoke, You and ya mom is the one who’s dumb
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Shit Youngz Niggaz Will eat that up,To fill they bellies right?..
But my real niggaz Will now when they vote,Who running this battle tonight..
castro101 u got ma vote wen i got enuf posts. gd luk in future polls
v/castro101
castro101 u got ma vote wen i got enuf posts. gd luk in future polls
v/castro101
A ring around the mother fucking rosie..
wit a pockets full of Ashes and Bud..
^^nah, that was whack
This Nigga Tried to rip,Ending Up In a puddle..
A puddle beneath my feet of his own Blood..
^^not really
Let me rip him once,Tear open his Throat..
And Let the rhymes flow Thru to the Flood..
^^nah, no punch?
Now Your Rhmyes Was Straight,But the Flow wasnt ready..
In other words,Like Peanut Butter,Without The Jelly..
^^nah
Shit Youngz Niggaz Will eat that up,To fill they bellies right?..
But my real niggaz Will now when they vote,Who running this battle tonight..
^^no
Well I understand you put you heart into this shit Bruh..
But you Spit Was Wrecked,Get the fuck out my thread Cuz..
^^nah
What’s wrong wit this kid and his nursery rhyme man
Skills must be on the level far below even pre-kindergarten
^^aight
Have ya moms “ashes” in my pocket, and in the other side is “bud”
But even wit all this bud I smoke, You and ya mom is the one who’s dumb
^^fed off his verse
Cuz bitch burn in the hell of pit way before she was sentence to it
And you, not even sellin ya soul to the devil will help you let you win in this
^^not really
When I spit I spits sick, my shit be poisonous, havin my opponents dead quick
Fuck a Hypnotic, contagious sickness, be killin him like lead to kindergarten kids
^^feelin that but a lil stretched
It’s Castro recognize the name let me end up, wit a shut the fuck up
Cuz not even if he was God’s Son will he win in this one
^^not really
overall hypnotical you need to elevate alot kidd that shit was mostly garbage and im not hatin we all gotta start somewhere but you had no or weak punches throughout.......castro you need to work a lil bit too come a little bit harder but i think your verse was more complex so you got the vote
v//Castro
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