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    The Fall Of Slavery

    The Fall of Slavery (1838)

    Musing by a mossy fountain,
    In the blossom month of May,
    Saw I coming down a mountain
    An old man whose locks were grey;
    And the flowery valleys echoed,
    As he sang his earnest lay.
    "Prayer is heard, the chain is riven,
    Shout it over land and sea;
    Slavery from earth is driven,
    And the manacled are free;
    Brotherhood in all the nations;
    What a glorious Jubilee!

    "God has answered, fall before Him,
    Laud His majesty and might;
    On thy knees, O earth, adore Him:
    Now the black is as the white;
    Hallelujah! hallelujah!
    Every bondsman free as light.

    "Whip and scourge, and fetter broken,
    Far away in darkness hurled;
    This a grand and glorious token,
    When millennium fills the world.
    Hallelujah! O'er the nations
    Freedom's snowy flag unfurled.

    "God has answered! Glory, glory!
    O'er the green earth let it speed;
    Sun and stars take up the story,
    Nevermore a slave shall bleed;
    Shout deliverance for the freeman,
    Send him succour in his need.

    Glory be to God the Giver.
    Slavery now shall brand no more;
    From the fountain to the river
    Freedom breathes on every shore.
    Hellelujah! Hallelujah!
    Brotherhood the wide world o'er."

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    Re: The Fall Of Slavery

    feed?

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    Re: The Fall Of Slavery

    this wasa somewhat a nice piece here man... the content was allright but the point of rhyming in this was just somewhat ina way kinda limiting the fantasy in this mn seriously...just this was justa nice idea and concept and wording but the damn rhyming kinda took away from it and made it pretty much basic in a certain way..but nice vocab to compliment it and shit... nice job man.

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    Re: The Fall Of Slavery

    Closed- Too many open.

    Learn the rules dude.
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    Re: The Fall Of Slavery

    My bad, I thought you had three poems open, But obviously not. Closed the other one you spelt wrong instead.
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    Re: The Fall Of Slavery

    Closed...and Perm Banned for biting

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