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GL
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Psykek
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GL
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youve dusted the shelves out of all your rhymes noting was felt
an in this battle like a 'nympho contortionist' ur fucking yourself
should of know this guy was bogus all your rhymes sound atrocious
cuz u got wack rhymes but every pun i 'land mine' like ground explosive
you'll be bleeding outta no where like this shit stigmata
im spiting lava beatin on this pussy like a Clit piniata
this unknown vereran smart my text shit is art an im perfectin my part
agenist me.. u'll never see who u fucking with like sex in the dark
im a finish this,
but hold the applause only time you keep it gutta is when u bowlin dogs
so you beat'in me?, HA!.. nigga you 'full of shit' like ur colon clogged
why keep posting here? Don't you know we want you gone yet?
punch you so hard you'll flip 20 times...Just like all your concepts
What are you doing? Doping wack and hoping to climb the ranks?
Text couldn't tell the value a good drop if he was smashing piggy banks
Quit RB, Click the X on your screen and you'll be done in under a minute
Your battle verses remind me of a happy home...nothing dissfunctional in it
This battle is over, I always get applause becasue of the blows I delt
when this is over you'll hear aplaus...ible way to kill yourself!
Yeah, I have a girl. While pimpled-faced Text is basically gay
So while I’m busting the pus’, he’s home...doing the same to his face
[ tilt my hat towards my opponit ]
nice drop
this should be a good one
Bump this for more. Votes
why keep posting here? Don't you know we want you gone yet?
punch you so hard you'll flip 20 times...Just like all your concepts
-ok
What are you doing? Doping wack and hoping to climb the ranks?
Text couldn't tell the value a good drop if he was smashing piggy banks
-ok
Quit RB, Click the X on your screen and you'll be done in under a minute
Your battle verses remind me of a happy home...nothing dissfunctional in it
-ok
This battle is over, I always get applause becasue of the blows I delt
when this is over you'll hear aplaus...ible way to kill yourself!
ok
Yeah, I have a girl. While pimpled-faced Text is basically gay
So while I’m busting the pus’, he’s home...doing the same to his face
-lol ok
vs
youve dusted the shelves out of all your rhymes noting was felt
an in this battle like a 'nympho contortionist' ur fucking yourself
-ok
should of know this guy was bogus all your rhymes sound atrocious
cuz u got wack rhymes but every pun i 'land mine' like ground explosive
-played but ok
you'll be bleeding outta no where like this shit stigmata
im spiting lava beatin on this pussy like a Clit piniata
-smh no
this unknown vereran smart my text shit is art an im perfectin my part
agenist me.. u'll never see who u fucking with like sex in the dark
-eh
im a finish this,
but hold the applause only time you keep it gutta is when u bowlin dogs
so you beat'in me?, HA!.. nigga you 'full of shit' like ur colon clogged
-eh
decent vers from psy.. text had some ok concepts but he just didnt word em properly vote to psy for a better overall verse
rtf on my battle vs supree sity!!!
Vote DQ'ed
-CAS
Last edited by Leonidas; October 20th, 2009 at 07:50 PM
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ment to post this in my breakdown.. but RTF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...789/index.html
*QUACK QUACK*
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v/psy for having the better battle verse...text's verse was iight but seemed a bit underdeveloped wit the punches
hit this up for me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...808/index.html
Vote DQ'ed
-CAS
Last edited by Leonidas; October 20th, 2009 at 01:30 PM
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you know that crew vote wont rock
and also that 1 sentence vote wont count either
should of know this guy was bogus all your rhymes sound atrocious
cuz u got wack rhymes but every pun i 'land mine' like ground explosive
vs.
Quit RB, Click the X on your screen and you'll be done in under a minute
Your battle verses remind me of a happy home...nothing dissfunctional in it
Yeah, I have a girl. While pimpled-faced Text is basically gay
So while I’m busting the pus’, he’s home...doing the same to his face
^ Even Though That Last Bar Had A Little Grit In It, It Was Still Ok-ish...
v/ Psy - For Having The Better Verse & Something More Understandable...Sic Said Some Things That Just Didnt Seem To Make Sense...And Overall His Consistency Failed Him Cuz He Tried To Be Complex & Use Multis To Aid His Punch, Only To Ruin The Punch By Just Rhyming Whatever With The Ending Punchline...
RTF On This Battle
why keep posting here? Don't you know we want you gone yet?
punch you so hard you'll flip 20 times...Just like all your concepts
Quit RB, Click the X on your screen and you'll be done in under a minute
Your battle verses remind me of a happy home...nothing dissfunctional in it
Yeah, I have a girl. While pimpled-faced Text is basically gay
So while I’m busting the pus’, he’s home...doing the same to his face
vs
should of know this guy was bogus all your rhymes sound atrocious
cuz u got wack rhymes but every pun i 'land mine' like ground explosive
vote psykek
psykek i must say ur new style n shit is viscious
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