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    Arrow The Pain of Betrayal

    yes Im'a Phillipina grew up from a bunch of rules
    stereotype just a bit but heres how the story goes
    mamma gave birth, and daddy just stuck around
    I was just a project an element a compound
    GOD DAMMIT you couldn't use protection? c'mon now
    how could you do this just look how i turned out
    a burnt out~ prostitute haha, you scared now
    yea...I mean I think you should be how'd you think I got my money "what?"
    child support what the fuck I swear you never paid it daddy
    that's what mommy told me then again we grew on welly
    mamma did meth daddy did you know that she was phony
    comes to mind everytime is that the reason why you left me
    ...I think it is but then again dont know the whole story
    people tried to help including me and Tita Lori
    thinkin of the past it kinda hurts a lil really
    the pain or betrayal thats to name a broken family
    then i sing

    I'll be here...but your gone
    my daddy sing me a song
    mommy's here...here to stay
    but daddy's long gone away
    I've been hit by the pain of betrayal
    no one to save me daddy its painfull
    but i must move on, must move on, must move on, must move on
    and i must move on, must move on, must move on, must move on

    yea alright
    lyricly speaking I'ma threat to human beings
    step dad's beating me im calling C.A.S. for meetings
    see how much you missed daddy could've helped instead of leaving
    now im by myself thoughts in my head no speaking
    no screaming~ cant even show my own feeling
    I'ma dead soul no breathing~...my heart just froze it aint beating
    you and mommy should've thought twice before conceiving
    bet ya in labour mamma was puffing and heaving
    so i guess its obvious i was a pain from the start
    put myself on sale ended up in niggas grocery carts
    mamma was a meth~ addict and you left
    I was born without a heart~ so right now were far apart
    but that's okay daddy people make mistakes you know
    without your help and no money i was a full time hoe
    why would you care anyway i thought your heart dropped that low
    this my family my life end of story case closed
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    Re: The Pain of Betrayal

    I liked this. Your flow was good as was your lyrical content. but you could use work on it.

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    Re: The Pain of Betrayal

    Yeah this was cool keep them coming
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    Re: The Pain of Betrayal

    thanks for the feedback.
    One.
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