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Mac
Bos
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Take a Look at my Life
checlk
72h ext im having hard internet problems ... . . prolly i wont even drop anything cuz of the net
Aight, no prob
i'm checked
Take a Look at my Life
ok i think net is fixed, here goes drop & links.
I shoot myself when i imagine Bos face
I've battled vets, but this isn't your case
" school " what the fuck is that? please define that sentenceOriginally Posted by Bos
18 and in the school, university/school, see the difference?
Boston, you suck more than a fatty trucker
Ya should leave this, continue being dick sucker
Only i need to defeat ya is a punch, and a big Mac
You go around like a boss; his wish is being a staff
Venezuela, we've been owning whoever gets on our way
And now, this is your judgment day, away from Boston, man..
LINKS:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...537/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...724/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...542/index.html
gl man
I just noticed you dropped, i'll have my verse soon
Take a Look at my Life
How many times do have to lose to Jeff, 'fore u realize ur shit
U aint no awesome, ur just the favorite school lunch of any fat kid
U aint representing ur country, they feel embarassed when they see u
Ur just a fat guy who cant rap..dont be no father figure cuz nobody wants to be u
When I say ur whack, im actually lyin..cuz nobody knew of it till u invented it
U first inflicted ur rhymes with it till u came on a rapsite and presented it
Now we got all sorts of whack cats like u with no rap abilities
Its not just me, even retards in wheelchairs laugh at ur disabilities
U'll never elavate, hence ur title 'I always will be Mac.'
For the people who dont know this cat..he'll always be lower than whack
Take a Look at my Life
nice drop bro remember drop the links
up for votes
Lol @ disability line from Bos, probly the LOTB Mac you gotta learn how to throw punches and incorporate wordplay into your verses. Also with that school line.. u really should never use the same word twice in one line unless theres some sorta wordplay involved.. otherwise it really effects the sting of the punch. You really need to add sting to your lines
V-Bos
LEGION OF LEGENDS
Jack Herrera, Sour Ina Dutch..AC On High Flyin On The Hutch
I shoot myself when i imagine Bos face
I've battled vets, but this isn't your case
weak opener
" school " what the fuck is that? please define that sentence
18 and in the school, university/school, see the difference?
nahh
Boston, you suck more than a fatty trucker
Ya should leave this, continue being dick sucker
lol no
Only i need to defeat ya is a punch, and a big Mac
You go around like a boss; his wish is being a staff
what? not feeling this
Venezuela, we've been owning whoever gets on our way
And now, this is your judgment day, away from Boston, man..
nope..
vs
How many times do have to lose to Jeff, 'fore u realize ur shit
U aint no awesome, ur just the favorite school lunch of any fat kid
ehh
U aint representing ur country, they feel embarassed when they see u
Ur just a fat guy who cant rap..dont be no father figure cuz nobody wants to be u
okk
When I say ur whack, im actually lyin..cuz nobody knew of it till u invented it
U first inflicted ur rhymes with it till u came on a rapsite and presented it
decent
Now we got all sorts of whack cats like u with no rap abilities
Its not just me, even retards in wheelchairs laugh at ur disabilities
good
U'll never elavate, hence ur title 'I always will be Mac.'
For the people who dont know this cat..he'll always be lower than whack
weak closer
thought this was quite one sided tbh..Mac had nothing really, some of his lines werent even a punch and didnt make sense..Bos attempted punches and landed punches.
vote= Bos
U aint representing ur country, they feel embarassed when they see u
Ur just a fat guy who cant rap..dont be no father figure cuz nobody wants to be u
When I say ur whack, im actually lyin..cuz nobody knew of it till u invented it
U first inflicted ur rhymes with it till u came on a rapsite and presented it
Now we got all sorts of whack cats like u with no rap abilities
Its not just me, even retards in wheelchairs laugh at ur disabilities
vs
nothing
Bos came much harder and much more polished. he had some ok lines in there that hit. Mac, you didn't really have much man, no hate..you dropped a weak verse. you really weren't saying much. so my vote goes to Bos for having an overall better verse.
v/Bos
weak drops from both to be comletely honest. Mac, if u aint gonna throw punches, atleast use multies. Bos, your verse was mediocre at best. But, he knows how to attempt a punch, so vote him.
The blue stuff.
bos took this with a better grasp on concepts/wording and had a better attempt at punchlines.
both were kinda all over the place with statements/impactless bars but still bos edged.
Bos drop some links asap
LEGION OF LEGENDS
Jack Herrera, Sour Ina Dutch..AC On High Flyin On The Hutch
^working on it
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