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How u got ur LLL HoF is beyond me, some shady shit my g…
Its clear the only thing that’s beneficial… Is the fact u got carried by an Elite
I hate you. Why the fuck you gotta gel ur hair, and style it by flickin it up?
My accident ya facial features and believe me when I say it was everything but
Your image is shit, you’ll never tip the scales n its something you’ll have to accept
So while I’m at a ten, ure still grasping the basic fundamentals of holding respect
You’re softer than a soup sandwich, this faggot been getting fathered since birth
If you ever breathe a sigh of relief, s’cos my ninja skills took ur sorry ass off of this earth
I’ll fuck yo bitch, take her to the shower god damn it sounds like a dandy plan
I’ll slap her w/ my nuts n washer and after the abuse? She’ll no longer find u handy, man
I'm a GOAT to this sacrificial lamb, this fags got no way to wreck this
facing me will just leave this bitch a garner when one choke leaves him breathless
Originally Posted by Master Zelph
return of the basement dweller? lack of sun got this kid on end
it's weird u banned the guy who took Feebs yet its u who cant get any F.r.i.e.n.d.s
plus ur chicks a whale fresh, everyone knows she's an obese creature
If that fat slut got choked out Wikipedia would redefine the term 'heavy sleeper'
this tortures straight rippin' him.. ask anyone I'm harsh, honestly
I'm going over the line so much i'll get a PM off Orc demanding an apology
nd beefin' w/ $pit over votes? lol he's ur superior in every form & trace
cuz $pits ballin'.. nd ur just the nerd that gets left w/ them stuck to ur face
Quick 10.
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
Fresh
Your image is shit, you’ll never tip the scales n its something you’ll have to accept
So while I’m at a ten, ure still grasping the basic fundamentals of holding respect
I’ll fuck yo bitch, take her to the shower god damn it sounds like a dandy plan
I’ll slap her w/ my nuts n washer and after the abuse? She’ll no longer find u handy, man
Mimic
return of the basement dweller? lack of sun got this kid on end
it's weird u banned the guy who took Feebs yet its u who cant get any F.r.i.e.n.d.s
nd beefin' w/ $pit over votes? lol he's ur superior in every form & trace
cuz $pits ballin'.. nd ur just the nerd that gets left w/ them stuck to ur face
I have both tied here with 2 quotes each I felt Mimic was more creative had a personal flip and a personal wp/np flip. Fresh had bars that could've potentially hit and carried him the win here the sigh of relief bar was cool but the ninja skills threw me off it didn't land hard. Accident axe a dent ur face seen before I just didn't like the way it was displayed.
V/Mimic
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
LLL hof, respect, dandy was ehhh....
Vs.
Friends, spit$, and orc was ehh....
both were pretty tied in but at the end of the day it came to who was fresher.... and I got mimic the LLL hof I used referencing him but it wasn't against him.. lol. But I got mimic with a more fresh verse with the flips he pulled.
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
up'n
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
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I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
Fresh: elite, ninja skills
Vs
Mimic: heavy sleeper, stuck to your face
Overall: fresh was okay at best, not his greatest performance. & mimic went pretty decent, not great but decent, he also came with more punches, therefore I got mimic taking this barely.
Vote: Mimic
both verses came a little weak. fresh verse was very all over the place and it seemed more like hes upset and demanding respect rather than attacking the opponent. mimic came pretty nice although the quotes i think imo are just extra and shouldnt be needed in a text battle. mimic had a lot more punches and a strong start/finish compared to fresh..
i am giving this one to Mimic.
....Unkn0wn....
Try Your Luck Brah
How u got ur LLL HoF is beyond me, some shady shit my g…
Its clear the only thing that’s beneficial… Is the fact u got carried by an Elite
Concept there, lacks sting/harshness. No real substance behind this.
I hate you. Why the fuck you gotta gel ur hair, and style it by flickin it up?
My accident ya facial features and believe me when I say it was everything but
Same as above. This one was a little better tho. Potential haymaker if worded/delivered harsher.
Your image is shit, you’ll never tip the scales n its something you’ll have to accept
So while I’m at a ten, ure still grasping the basic fundamentals of holding respect
Again, concept there but delivery was soft.
You’re softer than a soup sandwich, this faggot been getting fathered since birth
If you ever breathe a sigh of relief, s’cos my ninja skills took ur sorry ass off of this earth
Wasn't feeling this much. Think you could have done more with the concept tbh.
I’ll fuck yo bitch, take her to the shower god damn it sounds like a dandy plan
I’ll slap her w/ my nuts n washer and after the abuse? She’ll no longer find u handy, man
I think if worded better. This had potential as well.
IDK if it's just me or the short amount of time you spent writing this/putting this together but your delivery/execution on your bars was soft as shit, bro. You had some decent concepts man but the executions were off. It's like you tape your fists and placed them in pillows and then entered the boxing ring. If that makes any sense? I think you had a few potential concepts that could have been fire but your executions hindered them. As I've told you previously, try and jot down your concepts multiple times and choose the more harsher one out of the bunch. It will help you until you develop the rhythm of dropping bars on the 1st take, feel me? You're getting there, bro. Just a slow progression.
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I'm a GOAT to this sacrificial lamb, this fags got no way to wreck this
facing me will just leave this bitch a garner when one choke leaves him breathless
Tired of seeing these already, lol. Execution was mild as well.
return of the basement dweller? lack of sun got this kid on end
it's weird u banned the guy who took Feebs yet its u who cant get any F.r.i.e.n.d.s
Didn't like this.
plus ur chicks a whale fresh, everyone knows she's an obese creature
If that fat slut got choked out Wikipedia would redefine the term 'heavy sleeper'
Dope concept, execution was mild. You could have been a little more creative, IMO.
this tortures straight rippin' him.. ask anyone I'm harsh, honestly
I'm going over the line so much i'll get a PM off Orc demanding an apology
This was ok.
nd beefin' w/ $pit over votes? lol he's ur superior in every form & trace
cuz $pits ballin'.. nd ur just the nerd that gets left w/ them stuck to ur face
This was ok.
I've seen better from you. Seems you and Fresh just dropped some quick shit. All in all you did have the mildly better verse but not by much. Fresh could have taken this had he re-worded some of his concepts but w/e. You both have been doing this for a while, so not much feed I can give that you dudes don't already know.
v/Mimic - Punches a tad bit more effective.
Mimic wins!!!
Congratulations asshole lol
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