LLL Week 9: Blanco 2-0 vs. Onslaught 2-0 - ONSLOT WINS

[A. Diction]

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@Blanco. @Onslaught

[Blanco.]

word up. 14.

[Wuxia]

Check.

[Wuxia]

Going to need an extension.

[Blanco.]

extended 24 hrs.

[Wuxia]

14 sent to useless

[Blanco.]

Thanks Blanco, maybe somewhere down the line after I've proven myself to be an active member you will consider joining EH, at the very least participating in our 1-2 league.

u invited me to ur crew but now its decayin n scattered w/ scars
fuck a crew.. if im joinin eh its w/ the voters sayin it after ur bars
u geeked over a wack ass crew. you all suck n know ur hoes
but yea hopefully ur activity down the line.. leads to a fuckin overdose
yo.. ill throw roundhouses till ur eyes are swellin, cut n closed
the last time ur kicks had someone on the floor..
..they were yellin what are those
your bars are comic book corny, soundin shakey n slightly nervous
battlin aint ur strong suit .. u just wear a hulk outfit while writin verses
im a fuckin animal. killin faggots n completin some crazy sins
ill leave u so moldova ull be leavin the hospital speakin romainian
your mixtape is prolly trash so you dont earn n see g's
cuz if someones nero w/ good music.. they're just burnin CDs
all ur spittin is filler n lies. im here to prove i shouldnt be slept on son
when it comes to this bum bull, B ended his buzz like i stepped on one

[A. Diction]

Onslaught's verse:

damn next month i hit 10 years on rb. what am i doin with my life

them bitches are crazy tho.. my ex is mexican i moved in with her n barely 2 months later i moved outwhile she was at work

there's little doubt that u suck, i yaaawned at ur greasiest rhyme
hopefully this 1's ur breakout year tho, we been wanting u gone since the previous 9
u wasted a decades worth of ur life, its an unfortunate fact mane
ur career hit a rough stretch that's a 1000x longer than dhalsim's normal attack range
cuties think ur too foul to smash, u should of cherished ur old boo
im just saying its no surprise a mexican performed a dirty job that americans wont do
dawg ur getting stomped tonight, u better call or nudge ur friends
cuz its obvious u have powerful allies, the way they singlehandedly prop u up for wins
whoever said blanco. drops the hottest bars was a crazy effing liar
blame me when all of ur popularity tanks, cuz ur front lines image is taking heavy fire
when its time to man up? ur slipping clear no interference allowed
ur exit strategy's to find the nearest one, run through it, then disappear in the crowd
hey don't be sad ur a disappointment, u basically formed ur niche
consider how ur Overreacting, that would explain why ur such a raging hormonal bitch

[Meth]

u invited me to ur crew but now its decayin n scattered w/ scars
fuck a crew.. if im joinin eh its w/ the voters sayin it after ur bars
--cool, personal, solid punch
u geeked over a wack ass crew. you all suck n know ur hoes
but yea hopefully ur activity down the line.. leads to a fuckin overdose
--haha, ok
yo.. ill throw roundhouses till ur eyes are swellin, cut n closed
the last time ur kicks had someone on the floor..
..they were yellin what are those
--bleh. i can see some people liking this just aint for me
your bars are comic book corny, soundin shakey n slightly nervous
battlin aint ur strong suit .. u just wear a hulk outfit while writin verses
--nah
im a fuckin animal. killin faggots n completin some crazy sins
ill leave u so moldova ull be leavin the hospital speakin romainian
--cool
your mixtape is prolly trash so you dont earn n see g's
cuz if someones nero w/ good music.. they're just burnin CDs
--good wp but im missing where it connects. like what is nero, obviously i get near o... pm me if im wylin' lmfao
all ur spittin is filler n lies. im here to prove i shouldnt be slept on son
when it comes to this bum bull, B ended his buzz like i stepped on one
--nah

Onslaught's verse:





there's little doubt that u suck, i yaaawned at ur greasiest rhyme
hopefully this 1's ur breakout year tho, we been wanting u gone since the previous 9
--ok, lil staementy for my taste
u wasted a decades worth of ur life, its an unfortunate fact mane
ur career hit a rough stretch that's a 1000x longer than dhalsim's normal attack range
--ok
cuties think ur too foul to smash, u should of cherished ur old boo
im just saying its no surprise a mexican performed a dirty job that americans wont do
--not feeling
dawg ur getting stomped tonight, u better call or nudge ur friends
cuz its obvious u have powerful allies, the way they singlehandedly prop u up for wins
--just a statement. no creativity or harshness/sting
whoever said blanco. drops the hottest bars was a crazy effing liar
blame me when all of ur popularity tanks, cuz ur front lines image is taking heavy fire
--good
when its time to man up? ur slipping clear no interference allowed
ur exit strategy's to find the nearest one, run through it, then disappear in the crowd
--seen this exact concept. nothing new or special about it to make it stand out for me, good execution tho bro
hey don't be sad ur a disappointment, u basically formed ur niche
consider how ur Overreacting, that would explain why ur such a raging hormonal bitch
--nah. never seen that wp tho

cool battle bros

a lot of misses in this one tho

2-1 quotes for blanco over onslaught

some decent stuff from both but i got blanco with the more consistent verse

stay up

V/ Bishop

[Attack of the Muff]

u invited me to ur crew but now its decayin n scattered w/ scars
fuck a crew.. if im joinin eh its w/ the voters sayin it after ur bars
(this is nice)
u geeked over a wack ass crew. you all suck n know ur hoes
but yea hopefully ur activity down the line.. leads to a fuckin overdose
(eh. drug reference came out of left field. I think the setup should have had some notice of drug usuage. but its barely ok imo)
yo.. ill throw roundhouses till ur eyes are swellin, cut n closed
the last time ur kicks had someone on the floor..
..they were yellin what are those
(lmao. hilarious)
your bars are comic book corny, soundin shakey n slightly nervous
battlin aint ur strong suit .. u just wear a hulk outfit while writin verses
(nahnah not feelingthe concept. strong suit/ hulk outfit writin a verse sounds a lil too silly. and not in the humorous way imo)
im a fuckin animal. killin faggots n completin some crazy sins
ill leave u so moldova ull be leavin the hospital speakin romainian
(mold ova. am I pronouncing it right? mauled ova? iono fkn know. either way I missed this one. EDIT: ok its started bothering me so I looked it up. its pronounced mauled over in the way I just heard it. nice line )
your mixtape is prolly trash so you dont earn n see g's
cuz if someones nero w/ good music.. they're just burnin CDs
(the nero/burning association is light. because ur talkin boutburning cds. im sure you could have incorporated something more significant. or maybe ur talking about something else entirely n if u are im not familiar w/ the reference if ur not talkin bout nero/rome/burning ...see? if im wrong its easy to see how I came to that conclustion)
all ur spittin is filler n lies. im here to prove i shouldnt be slept on son
when it comes to this bum bull, B ended his buzz like i stepped on one
(mm ok)

opener, n what are those, moldova r ur quotes. the rest was either ok to eh


there's little doubt that u suck, i yaaawned at ur greasiest rhyme
hopefully this 1's ur breakout year tho, we been wanting u gone since the previous 9
(mmm not feeling thistbh)
u wasted a decades worth of ur life, its an unfortunate fact mane
ur career hit a rough stretch that's a 1000x longer than dhalsim's normal attack range
(this is played bro. u did a lil more w/ it but the stretch/dhalsim shit been done todeath)
cuties think ur too foul to smash, u should of cherished ur old boo
im just saying its no surprise a mexican performed a dirty job that americans wont do
(ha lol)
dawg ur getting stomped tonight, u better call or nudge ur friends
cuz its obvious u have powerful allies, the way they singlehandedly prop u up for wins
(mm ok)
whoever said blanco. drops the hottest bars was a crazy effing liar
blame me when all of ur popularity tanks, cuz ur front lines image is taking heavy fire
(nice word association)
when its time to man up? ur slipping clear no interference allowed
ur exit strategy's to find the nearest one, run through it, then disappear in the crowd
(played but slick flip)
hey don't be sad ur a disappointment, u basically formed ur niche
consider how ur Overreacting, that would explain why ur such a raging hormonal bitch
(eh concept ok wording)

3 quotes as wel

man this was close. a cpl of Blanco's totally missed me..n iono if It was just my interpretation...for example the association on nero was loose . but then again im not sure if theres some app called nero that helps u burn cds. just an instance of crowd perspective yknow. hopefully im of the minority.

onslaught started off badly but picked up a bit. nothing too original but some nice flips on olden concepts imho

tied in quotes. lotb goes to what are thooooooooooose. made me smirk

lookin at my breakdown I have blanco by a very small margin

v/Blanco

gs guys

[Aye BRUH]

u invited me to ur crew but now its decayin n scattered w/ scars
fuck a crew.. if im joinin eh its w/ the voters sayin it after ur bars
---1/2 Ok
u geeked over a wack ass crew. you all suck n know ur hoes
but yea hopefully ur activity down the line.. leads to a fuckin overdose
---0/2 nah
yo.. ill throw roundhouses till ur eyes are swellin, cut n closed
the last time ur kicks had someone on the floor..
..they were yellin what are those
---2/2 nice
your bars are comic book corny, soundin shakey n slightly nervous
battlin aint ur strong suit .. u just wear a hulk outfit while writin verses
---0/2 idea was nice but not the punch
im a fuckin animal. killin faggots n completin some crazy sins
ill leave u so moldova ull be leavin the hospital speakin romainian
---0/2 not feeling this either
your mixtape is prolly trash so you dont earn n see g's
cuz if someones nero w/ good music.. they're just burnin CDs
---1/2 ok
all ur spittin is filler n lies. im here to prove i shouldnt be slept on son
when it comes to this bum bull, B ended his buzz like i stepped on one
---0/2 nah

Vs

there's little doubt that u suck, i yaaawned at ur greasiest rhyme
hopefully this 1's ur breakout year tho, we been wanting u gone since the previous 9
---2/2 i dig
u wasted a decades worth of ur life, its an unfortunate fact mane
ur career hit a rough stretch that's a 1000x longer than dhalsim's normal attack range
---0/2 nah
cuties think ur too foul to smash, u should of cherished ur old boo
im just saying its no surprise a mexican performed a dirty job that americans wont do
---1/2 set up deff helped
dawg ur getting stomped tonight, u better call or nudge ur friends
cuz its obvious u have powerful allies, the way they singlehandedly prop u up for wins
---0/2 assuming this is a personal, as id it was bland
whoever said blanco. drops the hottest bars was a crazy effing liar
blame me when all of ur popularity tanks, cuz ur front lines image is taking heavy fire
---1/2 ok
when its time to man up? ur slipping clear no interference allowed
ur exit strategy's to find the nearest one, run through it, then disappear in the crowd
---0/2 not feelin
hey don't be sad ur a disappointment, u basically formed ur niche
consider how ur Overreacting, that would explain why ur such a raging hormonal bitch
---0/2 ovary is a bit played. I'd quote if it had a better angle

Blanco - 4/14
Onslaught- 4/14

Vote/Blanco ... Tied in quotes but he had better/fresher misses

[Blanco.]

2-0. to the top.

[A. Diction]

2-0. to the top.

Its actually 3-0. But now its 3-1, sorry bro.


u invited me to ur crew but now its decayin n scattered w/ scars 
fuck a crew.. if im joinin eh its w/ the voters sayin it after ur bars 
--- fire...........
u geeked over a wack ass crew. you all suck n know ur hoes 
but yea hopefully ur activity down the line.. leads to a fuckin overdose 
--- not really feeln this tho.......
yo.. ill throw roundhouses till ur eyes are swellin, cut n closed
the last time ur kicks had someone on the floor.. 
..they were yellin what are those
--- this the second punch i seen like this n I still don't like it lol...........
your bars are comic book corny, soundin shakey n slightly nervous
battlin aint ur strong suit .. u just wear a hulk outfit while writin verses
--- lol aite..........
im a fuckin animal. killin faggots n completin some crazy sins 
ill leave u so moldova ull be leavin the hospital speakin romainian 
--- didn't like the wording, I'll leave u so Moldova doesn't sound right.....
your mixtape is prolly trash so you dont earn n see g's 
cuz if someones nero w/ good music.. they're just burnin CDs 
--- one letter np...I like it tho.........
all ur spittin is filler n lies. im here to prove i shouldnt be slept on son 
when it comes to this bum bull, B ended his buzz like i stepped on one
--- what is a bum bull? I like word play like this that's creative, I don't care about a pause or if it doesn't sound right out loud BUT WTF is a bum bull. Are there bulls roaming the pastures who are constantly asking other bulls for loose change? Where are these mythical mystical bum bulls because I would love to go see them. Why are they bums? Do they have an addiction problem? Alcoholics? Or did some sort of traumatic experience fuck their head up and now they just can't hold down a stable job. Did they serve in some sort of bull war where they saw all their bull friends get slaughtered .. but he was the only one that made it out alive. FUCKING! BUM! BULLS!

GET A JOB U FUCKN BUMS!!!!!!!!!


Vs.


there's little doubt that u suck, i yaaawned at ur greasiest rhyme
hopefully this 1's ur breakout year tho, we been wanting u gone since the previous 9
--- this is OK. I like statement personals but this one didn't do a lot for me. Still aite tho............
u wasted a decades worth of ur life, its an unfortunate fact mane
ur career hit a rough stretch that's a 1000x longer than dhalsim's normal attack range
--- lmao this is cool.............
cuties think ur too foul to smash, u should of cherished ur old boo
im just saying its no surprise a mexican performed a dirty job that americans wont do
--- lmao fire quote personal............
dawg ur getting stomped tonight, u better call or nudge ur friends
cuz its obvious u have powerful allies, the way they singlehandedly prop u up for wins
--- now this is a statement. No personal, no punch............
whoever said blanco. drops the hottest bars was a crazy effing liar
blame me when all of ur popularity tanks, cuz ur front lines image is taking heavy fire
--- nice, like the wording...........
when its time to man up? ur slipping clear no interference allowed
ur exit strategy's to find the nearest one, run through it, then disappear in the crowd
--- seen a lot of exit lines but none quite this smooth. Still super played tho...........
hey don't be sad ur a disappointment, u basically formed ur niche
consider how ur Overreacting, that would explain why ur such a raging hormonal bitch
--- not feeling this........

Overall: this is closer than the votes indicate and I'm actually going against the grain. I thought onslot took this battle, barely...both had a bunch of almosts and some misses. The wording made it an easy read but it wasn't a great battle tho. Each had a couple I really liked but onslot had like one more bar I liked. And because, of course, BUM BULLS!



V. Onslaught aka bum bulls.

[Smog]

Blanco


Opener was nice
Activity down the line was weak
Kicks havin someone in the floor was ehh
Strong suit was pretty cool, set up n all
Mold over was ehh, cool wp but bad execution on the way u used it
Nero was a decent play, bar was cool from a creative standpoint
Didn't really Dig that closer, felt the b was unnecessary, or made it sound awkward,


Vs

Slot


I thought the opener was pretty cool
Rough stretch was dope actually
Dirty job was slick as hell dope shit
Powerful allies was ehh
Popularity tanks was nice too, creative
Exit strategy was good
Closer was light...



Iight overall pretty good shit yall, I got slot with more quotables n less misses tho plus dirty job was lotb props for that but basically consistency took this for slot.. Good read gents


Vote slot

[Greedy]

Blanco:
Opener.
Strong suit

Onslot:
Opener.
Ehh dalsim
Mexican is nice but dont work. He not Mexican
Heavy fire


Vote onslaught
Overall better material