LLL Playoffs Round 2: Unfukwitable vs. Onslaught - ONSLOT WINS

[A. Diction]

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@Unfukwitable @Onslaught

[Unfukwitable]

⚠ warning ⚠

[Wuxia]

check gl

[Wuxia]

unfukwitable/noquear/dissizit/clips
mixtapes - almost famous, hustler's pyramid

Aspirations to be a Historic Goat, then he took a L to me & lost his hope;
Shit left his Pride Rocked with enough emptiness for Mufasa to call it home.

Puttin dude on a mission vs. a nigga w/ Call of Duty precision?. He'll actually melt;
Once these Heat seekers — Lock on this pussy like a Chasity Belt!

U blessed, 100.

I got shot in my arm got no feeling in 2 of my fingers til this day.

son went from gunplay to disney bars, i doubt this stupid faggots legit
u ain't never banged a nina or candice, but its a proven fact that u shafted a nik
talked all reckless to young notti, then u ns'ed and was scared to reply
ur the biggest fuckboy to give nadia cold shoulder since jim from american pie
lost in a close shave with enbombz, he made u a big frickin hater dude
cuz homie wasn't even that great clips, but he still left ur wig split and faded u
i flaunt the wifey cuz she attractive, her breasts get checked from afar
when U flaunt ur girl she gets the same reaction as galactic's letterosexual bar
ill nik-a 6-1'ed u at the lime, the fuck dawg ur hardly buggin and pissed
fall brawl was ur slice of heaven, so when u got carved up it must of been bliss
wow u beat meth? how? flippin old angles into soft creative nonsense?
no wonder u called ur cd hustler's pyramid, ur just a fraud w/ ancient concepts
n chill the political bullshit, u ain't never loaded slugs in a gun chamber
so if u stay with a heckler & koch, it's cuz ur protesting a republican fundraiser
fuck ur fictitious little flesh wound, u got me reelin from pain differently
after i peeped ur retarded chastity belt quote, i stopped feelin my face instantly

[A. Diction]

Unfukwitable's Verse:

don't exaggerate ur jokes, this stupid cornball isn't bringing fire
you dress ur verses with stretched flames, that's Bam Bam Bigelow's ring attire

2011 they admired'em for weeks, now it's harsh when he gets critiqued;
^ the Irony in having a Bigelow bar & not being fire since Ur peak.
those crappy raps he conveys is used poorly & badly displayed;
We consider u AllStar Quality based on decoratin ur votes ina faggoty way.
Slugfest? he'll shake in his boots & fold if I apply fueled pressure;
He's only prepared to draw blood, helpin sketch artist capture PIRU members.

just promise me you won't go over to rb and tell them i'm onslaught, i didn't want anybody to know who i was

His secret got me cackle'n, Being exposed is the saddest to u;
I'll make his Handle sucha laughin stock this body'll be televised on Shaqtin a fool.
49yrs of livin now this ancient geek will be laid to sleep;
U won't make it to turn 50 Broke— like Curtis Jackson's bankruptcy.
Him bag'n crack has nothin 2 do w/ battle rap, I'll have u runnin laps in the yard;
BL Chop O's!?.. so I Guarantee he'll breakout after the bars.
Punches coming by the bunches, He'll truly know what to suffer is;
Paramedics'll have to find a way to Carry ON as I Continue the punishment.
Fuck yappin, I'll grab ur throat & U'll be gasping in an instant,
wringin ur neck 'll have DR.'s wonder if u wore cow bells or studied African traditions.

[Attack of the Muff]

son went from gunplay to disney bars, i doubt this stupid faggots legit
u ain't never banged a nina or candice, but its a proven fact that u shafted a nik
(u lost me atcandice the translation just dropped off abrupt. I might regret this later but this one lost momentum)
talked all reckless to young notti, then u ns'ed and was scared to reply
ur the biggest fuckboy to give nadia cold shoulder since jim from american pie
(oh shit lmao I love this)
lost in a close shave with enbombz, he made u a big frickin hater dude
cuz homie wasn't even that great clips, but he still left ur wig split and faded u
(old concept decent flip)
i flaunt the wifey cuz she attractive, her breasts get checked from afar
when U flaunt ur girl she gets the same reaction as galactic's letterosexual bar
(ha)
ill nik-a 6-1'ed u at the lime, the fuck dawg ur hardly buggin and pissed
fall brawl was ur slice of heaven, so when u got carved up it must of been bliss
(ehok)
wow u beat meth? how? flippin old angles into soft creative nonsense?
no wonder u called ur cd hustler's pyramid, ur just a fraud w/ ancient concepts
(this was cool)
n chill the political bullshit, u ain't never loaded slugs in a gun chamber
so if u stay with a heckler & koch, it's cuz ur protesting a republican fundraiser
(I get heckler but Koch? idgi)
fuck ur fictitious little flesh wound, u got me reelin from pain differently
after i peeped ur retarded chastity belt quote, i stopped feelin my face instantly
(ok)

2011 they admired'em for weeks, now it's harsh when he gets critiqued;
^ the Irony in having a Bigelow bar & not being fire since Ur peak.
(I didn't like what u did here consideringthe quote tbh)
those crappy raps he conveys is used poorly & badly displayed;
We consider u AllStar Quality based on decoratin ur votes ina faggoty way.
(lol this waskinda funny tho)
Slugfest? he'll shake in his boots & fold if I apply fueled pressure;
He's only prepared to draw blood, helpin sketch artist capture PIRU members.
(seen too many blood lines...cees blood etc. that's factssomeone just had one recently)
His secret got me cackle'n, Being exposed is the saddest to u;
I'll make his Handle sucha laughin stock this body'll be televised on Shaqtin a fool.
(ok flip on laughing stock. flow sick too I like it)
49yrs of livin now this ancient geek will be laid to sleep;
U won't make it to turn 50 Broke— like Curtis Jackson's bankruptcy.
(OH SHIT LMAO)
Him bag'n crack has nothin 2 do w/ battle rap, I'll have u runnin laps in the yard;
BL Chop O's!?.. so I Guarantee he'll breakout after the bars.
(this is dope too)
Punches coming by the bunches, He'll truly know what to suffer is;
Paramedics'll have to find a way to Carry ON as I Continue the punishment.
(wooo)
Fuck yappin, I'll grab ur throat & U'll be gasping in an instant,
wringin ur neck 'll have DR.'s wonder if u wore cow bells or studied African traditions
(this is a dope flip on old concept)


Gooddammit these playoffs are turning out well. lol onslaught u didwell ...like a 8.5/10 verse

unfuk impressed me tho. a lot of cool concepts that I fucked with this time around but written w/ a gumption. there was a certain lil flow applied that's not usually applied ot his shit . it was tangible . a 9/10 verse

I got unfuk

but I can see either winning

v/unfuk

[Meth]

unfukwitable/noquear/dissizit/clips
mixtapes - almost famous, hustler's pyramid













son went from gunplay to disney bars, i doubt this stupid faggots legit
u ain't never banged a nina or candice, but its a proven fact that u shafted a nik
--ight so the nina part is throwing me here. i pronounce nina like nee nuh. i think u have it as nine a or can diss? idk. this is a miss for me unless im not seeing it right which is possible since im about to go to bed. let me know if im wrong here, broke.
talked all reckless to young notti, then u ns'ed and was scared to reply
ur the biggest fuckboy to give nadia cold shoulder since jim from american pie
--dope.
lost in a close shave with enbombz, he made u a big frickin hater dude
cuz homie wasn't even that great clips, but he still left ur wig split and faded u
--this is ok.
i flaunt the wifey cuz she attractive, her breasts get checked from afar
when U flaunt ur girl she gets the same reaction as galactic's letterosexual bar
--lol, ok.
ill nik-a 6-1'ed u at the lime, the fuck dawg ur hardly buggin and pissed
fall brawl was ur slice of heaven, so when u got carved up it must of been bliss
--i can dig this.
wow u beat meth? how? flippin old angles into soft creative nonsense?
no wonder u called ur cd hustler's pyramid, ur just a fraud w/ ancient concepts
--yeah i was robbed :/ lmao. this is pretty cool.
n chill the political bullshit, u ain't never loaded slugs in a gun chamber
so if u stay with a heckler & koch, it's cuz ur protesting a republican fundraiser
--blah. the heckler and koch angle was cool but the protesting a republican fundraiser part was kind of bland.
fuck ur fictitious little flesh wound, u got me reelin from pain differently
after i peeped ur retarded chastity belt quote, i stopped feelin my face instantly
--deaddddddddd.

Unfukwitable's Verse:




2011 they admired'em for weeks, now it's harsh when he gets critiqued;
^ the Irony in having a Bigelow bar & not being fire since Ur peak.
--ok
those crappy raps he conveys is used poorly & badly displayed;
We consider u AllStar Quality based on decoratin ur votes ina faggoty way.
--heres where i think u going for multies hurt ur wording. u said used poorly and badly displayed. thats literally the same thing u just said it twice haha. i liked the concept that just kind of killed it for me.
Slugfest? he'll shake in his boots & fold if I apply fueled pressure;
He's only prepared to draw blood, helpin sketch artist capture PIRU members.
--ok flip. seen a lot of blood flips recently.



His secret got me cackle'n, Being exposed is the saddest to u;
I'll make his Handle sucha laughin stock this body'll be televised on Shaqtin a fool.
--haha i can dig it.
49yrs of livin now this ancient geek will be laid to sleep;
U won't make it to turn 50 Broke— like Curtis Jackson's bankruptcy.
--this concept is kind of a reach to me. Broke old but hes like in his mid 30's or something. a exaggeration is usually ok but in this case ur entire bar needs it to work.
Him bag'n crack has nothin 2 do w/ battle rap, I'll have u runnin laps in the yard;
BL Chop O's!?.. so I Guarantee he'll breakout after the bars.
--nice.
Punches coming by the bunches, He'll truly know what to suffer is;
Paramedics'll have to find a way to Carry ON as I Continue the punishment.
--this is pretty cool but i like just seen a carry on bar like a week ago or something. still ight, but loses impact for me a little bit.
Fuck yappin, I'll grab ur throat & U'll be gasping in an instant,
wringin ur neck 'll have DR.'s wonder if u wore cow bells or studied African traditions.
--i like this, tho.

4-3 in quotes. brokes feeling my face shit was lotb for me. misses were about equal

so i got broke by a quote and lotb

some of unfuks shit was preference/wording to me, but sso was some of brokes. so i could see wither winniing, but i got slaught clean

v/ onslaught.

[Aero]

ON:

son went from gunplay to disney bars, i doubt this stupid faggots legit
u ain't never banged a nina or candice, but its a proven fact that u shafted a nik
mehhhh...
talked all reckless to young notti, then u ns'ed and was scared to reply
ur the biggest fuckboy to give nadia cold shoulder since jim from american pie
I like the np and reference. this cool
lost in a close shave with enbombz, he made u a big frickin hater dude
cuz homie wasn't even that great clips, but he still left ur wig split and faded u
old words
i flaunt the wifey cuz she attractive, her breasts get checked from afar
when U flaunt ur girl she gets the same reaction as galactic's letterosexual bar
ha ok.. should've put that bar in your sig with a disgusted face. it's not too late
ill nik-a 6-1'ed u at the lime, the fuck dawg ur hardly buggin and pissed
fall brawl was ur slice of heaven, so when u got carved up it must of been bliss
subject disagreement.. English
wow u beat meth? how? flippin old angles into soft creative nonsense?
no wonder u called ur cd hustler's pyramid, ur just a fraud w/ ancient concepts
ha ok.. good resarch
n chill the political bullshit, u ain't never loaded slugs in a gun chamber
so if u stay with a heckler & koch, it's cuz ur protesting a republican fundraiser
Koch is pronounced Coke bruh... but this is ok
fuck ur fictitious little flesh wound, u got me reelin from pain differently
after i peeped ur retarded chastity belt quote, i stopped feelin my face instantly
ha aight



UN:


2011 they admired'em for weeks, now it's harsh when he gets critiqued;
^ the Irony in having a Bigelow bar & not being fire since Ur peak.
ok.. could've been better
those crappy raps he conveys is used poorly & badly displayed;
We consider u AllStar Quality based on decoratin ur votes ina faggoty way.
nice...
Slugfest? he'll shake in his boots & fold if I apply fueled pressure;
He's only prepared to draw blood, helpin sketch artist capture PIRU members.
cool, seen this concept around
His secret got me cackle'n, Being exposed is the saddest to u;
I'll make his Handle sucha laughin stock this body'll be televised on Shaqtin a fool.
yo LOOOOL at the quote... ok punch
49yrs of livin now this ancient geek will be laid to sleep;
U won't make it to turn 50 Broke— like Curtis Jackson's bankruptcy.
ha ok, doubt he's 49 tho so this a reach
Him bag'n crack has nothin 2 do w/ battle rap, I'll have u runnin laps in the yard;
BL Chop O's!?.. so I Guarantee he'll breakout after the bars.
potential is there but need to know what you wanted to diss him on
Punches coming by the bunches, He'll truly know what to suffer is;
Paramedics'll have to find a way to Carry ON as I Continue the punishment.
ha..
Fuck yappin, I'll grab ur throat & U'll be gasping in an instant,
wringin ur neck 'll have DR.'s wonder if u wore cow bells or studied African traditions.
I really like this concept... to the point i'd use it myself but word it better.. good job on that



Verrrrrry close battle... I'll have to return w vote. Ok I did a mathematical tally.


Onslaught: 20.1/40
Unfuk: 20.0/40


V: Onslaught

[slecht]

son went from gunplay to disney bars, i doubt this stupid faggots legit
u ain't never banged a nina or candice, but its a proven fact that u shafted a nik
talked all reckless to young notti, then u ns'ed and was scared to reply
ur the biggest fuckboy to give nadia cold shoulder since jim from american pie
i flaunt the wifey cuz she attractive, her breasts get checked from afar
when U flaunt ur girl she gets the same reaction as galactic's letterosexual bar
wow u beat meth? how? flippin old angles into soft creative nonsense?
no wonder u called ur cd hustler's pyramid, ur just a fraud w/ ancient concepte


vs


those crappy raps he conveys is used poorly & badly displayed;
We consider u AllStar Quality based on decoratin ur votes ina faggoty way.
49yrs of livin now this ancient geek will be laid to sleep;
U won't make it to turn 50 Broke— like Curtis Jackson's bankruptcy.
Fuck yappin, I'll grab ur throat & U'll be gasping in an instant,
wringin ur neck 'll have DR.'s wonder if u wore cow bells or studied African traditions.

felt if one set up his lines better his punches would of hit alot stronger other then that good battle to both. mvgt broke

[A. Diction]

son went from gunplay to disney bars, i doubt this stupid faggots legit
u ain't never banged a nina or candice, but its a proven fact that u shafted a nik
--- this is fire imo. Np on dissizit.............
talked all reckless to young notti, then u ns'ed and was scared to reply
ur the biggest fuckboy to give nadia cold shoulder since jim from american pie
--- damn. Fire again.............
lost in a close shave with enbombz, he made u a big frickin hater dude
cuz homie wasn't even that great clips, but he still left ur wig split and faded u
--- cool...........
i flaunt the wifey cuz she attractive, her breasts get checked from afar
when U flaunt ur girl she gets the same reaction as galactic's letterosexual bar
--- lmao nice............
ill nik-a 6-1'ed u at the lime, the fuck dawg ur hardly buggin and pissed
fall brawl was ur slice of heaven, so when u got carved up it must of been bliss
--- aite...........
wow u beat meth? how? flippin old angles into soft creative nonsense?
no wonder u called ur cd hustler's pyramid, ur just a fraud w/ ancient concepts
--- damn aite..............
n chill the political bullshit, u ain't never loaded slugs in a gun chamber
so if u stay with a heckler & koch, it's cuz ur protesting a republican fundraiser
--- this an intellectual bar. I like it. Heckler, as in heckling someone speaking on stage. And koch as in the koch brothers I assume. This is actually nice............
fuck ur fictitious little flesh wound, u got me reelin from pain differently
after i peeped ur retarded chastity belt quote, i stopped feelin my face instantly
--- lmao jeeeeeeez...........


Vs.


2011 they admired'em for weeks, now it's harsh when he gets critiqued;
^ the Irony in having a Bigelow bar & not being fire since Ur peak.
--- aite.............
those crappy raps he conveys is used poorly & badly displayed;
We consider u AllStar Quality based on decoratin ur votes ina faggoty way.
--- lol aite............
Slugfest? he'll shake in his boots & fold if I apply fueled pressure;
He's only prepared to draw blood, helpin sketch artist capture PIRU members.
--- I like it.............
His secret got me cackle'n, Being exposed is the saddest to u;
I'll make his Handle sucha laughin stock this body'll be televised on Shaqtin a fool. 
--- fire..........
49yrs of livin now this ancient geek will be laid to sleep;
U won't make it to turn 50 Broke— like Curtis Jackson's bankruptcy.
--- damn this woulda been dope if u worded it without the simile. Still good tho............
Him bag'n crack has nothin 2 do w/ battle rap, I'll have u runnin laps in the yard;
BL Chop O's!?.. so I Guarantee he'll breakout after the bars.
--- seen el chapo lines before but this is a nice concept. Thought the flip coulda been harsher tho. Sucks cuz the concept and np/wp is dope..............
Punches coming by the bunches, He'll truly know what to suffer is;
Paramedics'll have to find a way to Carry ON as I Continue the punishment.
--- I like this BUT I can't give it too much credit. I put ON np's in the same boat as UN np's on u, or EN np's on Enbombz............
Fuck yappin, I'll grab ur throat & U'll be gasping in an instant, 
wringin ur neck 'll have DR.'s wonder if u wore cow bells or studied African traditions.
--- damn, not really feelin this. I mean, its aite. Just not for a closer, esp after a verse like this. Its aite tho...........



Overall: so far this the battle of the round, and HOF worthy imo. Onslaught had the best verse of the round and unfuk was in a very very close second. Unfuk's last two bars is what my decision was made on. They were good but they just wasn't up to the same quality as the rest of his verse. And onslot's verse had zero misses and only one bar that wasn't up to par with quality of this battle.


DOPE BATTLE!



V. Onslaught

[Ryno]

son went from gunplay to disney bars, i doubt this stupid faggots legit
u ain't never banged a nina or candice, but its a proven fact that u shafted a nik
talked all reckless to young notti, then u ns'ed and was scared to reply
ur the biggest fuckboy to give nadia cold shoulder since jim from american pie
lost in a close shave with enbombz, he made u a big frickin hater dude
cuz homie wasn't even that great clips, but he still left
wow u beat meth? how? flippin old angles into soft creative nonsense?
no wonder u called ur cd hustler's pyramid, ur just a fraud w/ ancient concepts
fuck ur fictitious little flesh wound, u got me reelin from pain differently
after i peeped ur retarded chastity belt quote, i stopped feelin my face instantly

Vs

2011 they admired'em for weeks, now it's harsh when he gets critiqued;
^ the Irony in having a Bigelow bar & not being fire since Ur peak.
His secret got me cackle'n, Being exposed is the saddest to u;
I'll make his Handle sucha laughin stock this body'll be televised on Shaqtin a fool.
49yrs of livin now this ancient geek will be laid to sleep;
U won't make it to turn 50 Broke— like Curtis Jackson's bankruptcy.

V/Broke. Thought he was a lot more consistent.