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Thread: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Fresh wins.)

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    Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Fresh wins.)

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz

    im thinking 10

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz

    10 is good.

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz

    get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
    we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
    faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
    if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit

    Quote Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz View Post
    Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.
    called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
    u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
    fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
    if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
    what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
    he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to
    Last edited by Fresh; March 11th, 2022 at 10:37 PM

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz

    Ext.

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz

    Guess what’s in store For ya health i be the Coldest wit Help,
    Nobody cares about whatever fresh produce your materials stay the oldest on the Shelf.
    You just a Lame Bitch. You ain’t a killer never Shot to save shit,
    You’ll really understand concrete thoughts after I finish stomping ya head across the pavement.
    Never been in a kitchen. the type to beef or handle a scorching fued,
    Plus only time you ever see fresh on the scales is when he’s portioning Food.
    Bullying is somebody u Can say that i Mistreat for free Bitch quit please.
    Can’t take your well being serious when you spend most ya time moderating staff in league for free!!
    get ya facts straight Pull Up & You Can Get You & ya men misplaced,
    Now you’ll know what 50/50 vision is after I finish punchin your glasses completely into your Face.

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz

    get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
    we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
    pretty weak
    faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
    if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit
    lol good wp

    Quote Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz View Post
    Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.

    called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
    u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
    punch ended up too predicatble. could of flipped it better
    fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
    if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
    weak flip on an old concept
    what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
    he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to
    missed this punch imo. like the wp attempt tho.



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    Guess what’s in store For ya health i be the Coldest wit Help,
    Nobody cares about whatever fresh produce your materials stay the oldest on the Shelf.
    could of been fire but ended flat
    You just a Lame Bitch. You ain’t a killer never Shot to save shit,
    You’ll really understand concrete thoughts after I finish stomping ya head across the pavement.
    light. a better setup would of helped the punch land harder
    Never been in a kitchen. the type to beef or handle a scorching fued,
    Plus only time you ever see fresh on the scales is when he’s portioning Food.
    nice
    Bullying is somebody u Can say that i Mistreat for free Bitch quit please.
    Can’t take your well being serious when you spend most ya time moderating staff in league for free!!
    naw lame
    get ya facts straight Pull Up & You Can Get You & ya men misplaced,
    Now you’ll know what 50/50 vision is after I finish punchin your glasses completely into your Face.
    ehhh light jab


    weak bars overall. got Fresh with the haymaker but that was it honeslty. Rican had a couple decent punches.

    v. rican

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz

    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
    we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
    Decent word association jab.
    faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
    if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit
    Light but funny jab.


    called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
    u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
    This was dope w/the personal tie in.
    fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
    if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
    Not feeling this.
    what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
    he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to
    This whiffed kind of hard, bro.

    Quote Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz View Post
    Guess what’s in store For ya health i be the Coldest wit Help,
    Nobody cares about whatever fresh produce your materials stay the oldest on the Shelf.
    The elements are there. But was to wordy to be effective.
    You just a Lame Bitch. You ain’t a killer never Shot to save shit,
    You’ll really understand concrete thoughts after I finish stomping ya head across the pavement.
    This didn't do much for me. Felt rushed execution-wise.
    Never been in a kitchen. the type to beef or handle a scorching fued,
    Plus only time you ever see fresh on the scales is when he’s portioning Food.
    Light jab. Execution could be tighter.
    Bullying is somebody u Can say that i Mistreat for free Bitch quit please.
    Can’t take your well being serious when you spend most ya time moderating staff in league for free!!
    This bar was a mess. Wasted set up. Wordy punch that hinged on a dated personal.
    get ya facts straight Pull Up & You Can Get You & ya men misplaced,
    Now you’ll know what 50/50 vision is after I finish punchin your glasses completely into your Face.
    This wasnt bad.
    Neither was on their a game. That said, I got Fresh edging it off the strength of his first six lines.

    Vote - Fresh.

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Open for Votes.)

    get mad all u want, it's now the day u get crushed
    we'll see em Grit Teeth after i pound his face into dust
    Light
    faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
    if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit
    Like the wp, execution was so so w/ the diss here
    Quote Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz View Post
    Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.
    called urself a faggot, u about to become a dead clown
    u told a pair a' lies so you'll end up like that from the neck down
    played..
    fuck u up for entertainment, watch him shake as i order the dude a hearse
    if anyone thinks hell sitcom they must be from an alternate universe
    wording ok but eh
    what a little Bitch.. i should smash that melon, dude
    he wont Complacancy the finish line unless i write for and tell him to
    doesn't work both ways, didn't care for the wp

    Rican opener was aight
    rest was played or wording was off

    vote Fresh I guess

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Open for Votes.)

    Fresh, the gaudy bar was good. LOTB to me. The opener was average. The paralyze and sitcom ones are older concepts that you didn’t really flip fresh enough for me to give points for.

    Rican, the fresh produce line is an older concept that I don’t feel you flipped any differently than used in the past. I actually used one of those against Fresh many years ago. Concrete thoughts was ok. Portioning food.. ehh. The last two I’m not really feeling either.

    Expected this battle to be better from both sides but I do have fresh winning with the LOTB.

    v/Fresh

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Open for Votes.)

    Paralyze?? C'mon fresh u know better smh. Played/forced punches thru out this battle
    After reading fresh verse thought Rican had a good chance to take this but he didn't. Gaudy was lotb


    V-fresh

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Open for Votes.)

    Probably the best ive seem from RC, in terms of wording even though some were off problem was alot of the covepts were so old. The concrete ideas bar is like last century and wasnt flipped so... Fresh wasnt that good here either but the Gaudi concept was dope so he wins for me.

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Open for Votes.)

    Grit teeth was decent

    faggot loves womens clothes, it's something he's toyin with
    if he praying to Gaudy hopin not to get caught in flamboyant shit


    Vs

    This was decent


    Both verses were lackluster. Rican had better concepts worded poorly and fresh had one strong bar and a light jab worded nice. Also had the personal attempt but paralyze ruined it. I got fresh his misses were better I guess

    V/Fresh

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    Re: Round 1 - 3.Fresh vs 14.R!canTheoryz (Open for Votes.)

    Fresh wins 6-1.

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