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    Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm (Exalted wins.)

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    @EXalted @Justice Grimm
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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm

    Here

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm

    Yeah 10

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm

    Ext needed

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm -Ext

    This guy’s who? Barely washed up… but I’ll give him a fast rinse
    Been ages since we could exalt his posts, so this week I put him back in the past tense
    Enough w/ the swagger chump… quick stab’ll have him slump
    Closest he’s been to big guns? It’s his career mirroring Lil Pump’s
    This week’s bye for me… why you take this disgrace further?
    When voters see this smoke n gun the match’ll be open and closed like it was evidence for murder
    Your names snuffed, n for me its on to the next
    Do this so Swiftly I got Taylor applauding how I’m moving in from an Ex
    Carve you that joker smile, forever laughing but w/o any gratitude
    Make ya stock fall n have u eating out cans till your diet mirrors a positive attitude
    10

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm -Ext

    I'm an evil bastard

    Act like your best friend: I'm secretly planning a lethal stabbin
    I see ur backturn then knife where ya Lattice go in & out in a weaving pattern
    With poor reading comprehension his parents paid for classes..
    Teachers graded that Literacy on tests. u'd take it home & they would TRASH it
    Slime saying he'll win a fantasy Tolkien would laugh at, feel me?
    Grim a worm, tongue in cheek; It's jokes you tryna pass lies off to a real king
    After I kill em, any credit to his name is gone there's nothing left
    Structured debt, w/ JG Wentworth when I do a number on em y'all won't forget
    He don't get salutes in the streets, even if amended free speeches
    Cancel 'Justice for alll' to see, I just Outclass em like the pledge of allegiance
    Last edited by Exalted.; March 14th, 2022 at 07:11 AM

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm -Ext

    This guy’s who? Barely washed up… but I’ll give him a fast rinse
    Been ages since we could exalt his posts, so this week I put him back in the past tense
    ehhh not feelin this one
    Enough w/ the swagger chump… quick stab’ll have him slump
    Closest he’s been to big guns? It’s his career mirroring Lil Pump’s
    nahhh
    This week’s bye for me… why you take this disgrace further?
    When voters see this smoke n gun the match’ll be open and closed like it was evidence for murder
    weak punch
    Your names snuffed, n for me its on to the next
    Do this so Swiftly I got Taylor applauding how I’m moving in from an Ex
    weak again
    Carve you that joker smile, forever laughing but w/o any gratitude
    Make ya stock fall n have u eating out cans till your diet mirrors a positive attitude
    super weak



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    Act like your best friend: I'm secretly planning a lethal stabbin
    I see ur backturn then knife where ya Lattice go in & out in a weaving pattern
    worded bad but i like the wp
    With poor reading comprehension his parents paid for classes..
    Teachers graded that Literacy on tests. u'd take it home & they would TRASH it
    nahh
    Slime saying he'll win a fantasy Tolkien would laugh at, feel me?
    Grim a worm, tongue in cheek; It's jokes you tryna pass lies off to a real king
    weak
    After I kill em, any credit to his name is gone there's nothing left
    Structured debt, w/ JG Wentworth when I do a number on em y'all won't forget
    dope
    He don't get salutes in the streets, even if amended free speeches
    Cancel 'Justice for alll' to see, I just Outclass em like the pledge of allegiance
    ehh decent punch


    use to seeing a few good punches from Grimm but didnt feel these bars imo. Ex had the JG wentworth bar that was dope and then a could decent wp's.

    v. ex

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm (Open for Votes.)

    Quote Originally Posted by Justice Grimm View Post
    This guy’s who? Barely washed up… but I’ll give him a fast rinse
    Been ages since we could exalt his posts, so this week I put him back in the past tense
    Decent jab to open.
    Enough w/ the swagger chump… quick stab’ll have him slump
    Closest he’s been to big guns? It’s his career mirroring Lil Pump’s
    Pretty light
    This week’s bye for me… why you take this disgrace further?
    When voters see this smoke n gun the match’ll be open and closed like it was evidence for murder
    Decent concept, but got too wordy. Execution-wise this flopped for me.
    Your names snuffed, n for me its on to the next
    Do this so Swiftly I got Taylor applauding how I’m moving in from an Ex
    Typo in the rhyme scheme (on instead on in) could be cleaned up, but think this was nice.
    Carve you that joker smile, forever laughing but w/o any gratitude
    Make ya stock fall n have u eating out cans till your diet mirrors a positive attitude
    Whiffed for me. Maybe Im missing something?
    10

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    I'm an evil bastard

    Act like your best friend: I'm secretly planning a lethal stabbin
    I see ur backturn then knife where ya Lattice go in & out in a weaving pattern
    This was solid. Good stuff.
    With poor reading comprehension his parents paid for classes..
    Teachers graded that Literacy on tests. u'd take it home & they would TRASH it
    Nah. Concept was there, execution, not so much.
    Slime saying he'll win a fantasy Tolkien would laugh at, feel me?
    Grim a worm, tongue in cheek; It's jokes you tryna pass lies off to a real king
    I feel like Im missing a reference here.
    After I kill em, any credit to his name is gone there's nothing left
    Structured debt, w/ JG Wentworth when I do a number on em y'all won't forget
    Not bad. Good jab.
    He don't get salutes in the streets, even if amended free speeches
    Cancel 'Justice for alll' to see, I just Outclass em like the pledge of allegiance
    [B]Its not bad. But I just did a justice for all/pledge of allegiance flip a few weeks back so it feels stale.
    Close match up. I got Exalted edging it. 3-2.

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm (Open for Votes.)

    JC wasn't a big fan of your verse this week. Thought evidence for murder was your best bar

    Ex had lattice and wasn't feeling anything else.

    Super close but thought ex had the better misses

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm (Open for Votes.)

    Your names snuffed, n for me its on to the next
    Do this so Swiftly I got Taylor applauding how I’m moving in from an Ex

    vs

    After I kill em, any credit to his name is gone there's nothing left
    Structured debt, w/ JG Wentworth when I do a number on em y'all won't forget

    Ok I’ve seen better from Grimm, this was a light verse but maybe it was purposely? Taylor Swift line was a decent concept and the evidence for murder one had potential but the execution was off. Ex doesn’t really have the typical insult/punch format so his material does really land to me alot but the JG Wentworth concept was actually really good. Could’ve been worded alot better but I’ll give you credit for the attempt because I actually think it was the best one of the battle. I gotta go with Ex based off that.

    v/Ex

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm (Open for Votes.)

    Grimm started out with past tense didnt really hit for me, and then the little pumps i found confusing, was it a perse? Did Ex work in a shoe shop? I dunno. Smokin gun had potential but wording. Swift was good but closer didnt hit.
    Ex opener was worded weird but it worked after a couple of reads, think it needed a comma after lattice. Actulaay didnt mind the trash bar, think the litter a C might have gone over some heads. I got the tolkien, wormtounge, king connection, bar was ok/good. Had to google wentworth was ok/good. Didnt feel the closer.
    V Ex was feeling more of his concepts, Grimms smoking gun and swift bars werent bad tho

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    Re: Round 1 - 7. Exalted vs 10. Justice Grimm (Open for Votes.)

    Exalted wins 5-0.

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