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@King Dee Bee
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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@King Dee Bee
This my check I’ll be posting last minute Thursday night
Last edited by Phalanx; November 6th, 2022 at 05:07 PM
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3 Kingz Cartel....2 time B-R-V Text Rap Heavyweight champ
@King Dee Bee
Listen…
Ya wife pulled the whore card & I gave it to her more hard
Time to face RealityKing, that bitch takes more dick than 1 of those porn stars
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They like when my punch serve him, yeah I've bodied all lames_
Guaranteed they won't 'Dig Kills'...like points scored in a Volleyball game_
3 Kingz Cartel....2 time B-R-V Text Rap Heavyweight champ
Kills punch was very cleanly worded and well delivered. A good king name flip I’ve never seen before too so props on that
King - not bad but I feel like the punch lacked a little bit of sting towards the end
V/kill
v/spree
good concept King but i think the wording stopped it from being as affective. "they wont dig kills' " then you let him off easy with the follow up. spree good nameflip
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this could have been alot better ...the setup was iight but the follow through needs workListen…
Ya wife pulled the whore card & I gave it to her more hard
Time to face RealityKing, that bitch takes more dick than 1 of those porn stars
this could have also been better .. though you do get points for originality (the volleyball/kills reference)They like when my punch serve him, yeah I've bodied all lames_
Guaranteed they won't 'Dig Kills'...like points scored in a Volleyball game_
so b/c KS's concept is more used KDB gets my vote
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
Kills set up was ok, "gave it to her more hard" is lazy, followed up with a solid second line though.
KDB linked the set up with the punch in almost scheme like fashion with the serving reference, "bodied all lames" rhymes well although it's kind of out of place with what's written before & after. Niche reference but works.
This could go either way, for me it's kill having a punch formed more cleverly than with a simile Vs KDB having a bar which is tailored to his opponent. Ridiculously close but gonna edge KDB based on the more tailored approach.
Vote KDB
V.Spree
Simple yet effective.King punch was ok the finish was kinda bland
I got spree here cuz it made me chuckle. Kings bar wasn’t really bad either but this one is more of a personal taste.. I got kill with the humor factor
This was a solid champ match. Both had good nameflips, which is obviously up my alley. Sprees was simpler, but cleanly executed. KDB had a dope concept, and set it up decently enough. I feel like you got lazy on the wording at then end. I think you could gave gotten more sting out of the concept if you had flipped it any other way than "like points scored in volley ball". This could have been a haymaker.
Honestly Ive gone back & forth on this. I can see why voters are split. Because its as close to a tie as it gets. And when I can't decide, I try to objectively ask which bar would get the better reaction live. And that, I feel would be Spree 9/10 times. (The other 1/10 being that half the crowd wandered over from the volleyball tournament at the convention center next door. In this scenario, the crowd goes spastic.)
Respect to both.
Vote - Spree
Shit, I was pretty tired when I voted. Last part of my vote edged it to KDB for being more tailored but Reality King is equally so. My bad I got Kill winning this if I can change my vote.
Spree wins 5-2 (Or 6-1? Wtf Bag?)
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