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@Kill Spree
@Plot
Last edited by Wuxia; September 19th, 2023 at 08:47 PM
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Im here
Plottin your demise.
Kill Spree is good to go. He sent his verse in.
Sent ten
-KS Edit
Aight I'll have my bars up tommorrow..
Got my set-ups all done just gotta write the punches
Plottin your demise.
What the fuck lmao who writes random filler setups like this
Punch always comes first, with a setup written after to fit it.
Absolutely wild.
Been a real one.
Dudes a mess, careers on the rocks & futures a gamble,
So it's ironic to me...
He drinks his whiskey neat while his life is in shambles.
Such a failure, only a desperate hoe would let him nail her,
Coz all dogs that rode Kill..
Look like they've been hit by a semi-trailer.
Now Spree runnin riot in streets? Be another clown dead
Catch him in public and spray the heat..
Now I'm the one that's paintin the town red!
For wailing bitches I've got free samples,
Pump the barrels and...
Blow holes in your back like marine mammals.
Pathetic faggot, your mother wont weep for your soul
Anyone would think you had mob debts..
Way Plots putting you so deep in the hole.
Last edited by Plot; September 30th, 2023 at 08:55 AM
Plottin your demise.
Aka RoboCop
Listen faggit
I’ll dress’m in bullet holes wit this relaxing hot gauge
After i Body Robe? I’ll think about the killing over a spa day
The ghosting after loses is what we define-as punk shit
Sign in thread say “Cop out”…& thats how the league describes your punches
And the swag talk is foolish, cos you a fuckin fag
Sure you swang wit a chain on, you are the sites punchin bag
You being dope is long winded, a story that cost none
Theres abridgment for you, that im’a use to have ya body tossed from
I’ll enforce pain on the corner you claim. You cant stop Godly
Cop lights up the street? Its red & Blues reflecting off yellow tape around Plots Body
Plot I liked painting town red
KS - had some fire. Body robe was ok but thinking about killing over a spa day is Aeroesque. Sites launching bag was caliente!! Abridgment was good wp but needs a better writer to do it justice...
Kill Spree vote
Last edited by Aero; September 30th, 2023 at 02:21 PM
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Plots opener was fire. Great structure that was nicely executed from setup to closer. On the rocks/whiskey neat was pretty clever with the entire concept. The rode kill nameflip was cool, could have done something more than just saying dogs because I don't really know anybody that calls females by that term. I would of substituted it for something different. The marine mammals simile was nice too. Had great, impactful delivery. For KS cop out, punching bag and abridgement were all dope. There were in succession too being back to back to back with made them impact even harder and gave you an advantage over Plot in terms of consistency. Te relaxing hot gauge opener wasn't all that hard to me, Plot definitely outperformed KS in that regard. His opener was LOTB. It was pretty close but I have KS. Plot needed at least one more bar that could help him win but he didn't manage to get there.
V-Kill Spree
Plot
Opener- fire
Rode kill been done on him quite a bit but switching it to rode gave it a fresh flip. Pretty cool
Painting town red was fire
Marine mammals was pretty cool
Closer was ehh
KS
Body robe was fire
Cop out nice
Punching bag was fire
Abridgment was dope too
Closer was ok
Botw here. Dope verses imo. The shorter bar version of KS ain’t the one I’m used to seeing but I ain’t seen him battle in a while. It’s actually really close but I feel KS mighta slightly edged this with probably a better closer than plot. It’s tuff cuz Nothing was really too wack tho so props to both y’all for showing out. Great read.
Dpree
Plot
Dudes a mess, careers on the rocks & futures a gamble,
So it's ironic to me...
He drinks his whiskey neat while his life is in shambles.
ok i like this one
Such a failure, only a desperate hoe would let him nail her,
Coz all dogs that rode Kill..
Look like they've been hit by a semi-trailer.
lol nice
Now Spree runnin riot in streets? Be another clown dead
Catch him in public and spray the heat..
Now I'm the one that's paintin the town red!
this was a bit lackluster. I think you could have done a more substantial punch with "Painting the town red".
the punch was fairly telegraphable.
For wailing bitches I've got free samples,
Pump the barrels and...
Blow holes in your back like marine mammals.
wailing, whaling -marine mammals.
basic but not horrible
Pathetic faggot, your mother wont weep for your soul
Anyone would think you had mob debts..
Way Plots putting you so deep in the hole.
i didnt really care for the closer. i think a better set up would have made this punch more impactful. the mob tie-in is there but it isnt enough imo
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Kill Spree
Aka RoboCop
Listen faggit
I’ll dress’m in bullet holes wit this relaxing hot gauge
After i Body Robe? I’ll think about the killing over a spa day
ok opener
The ghosting after loses is what we define-as punk shit
Sign in thread say “Cop out”…& thats how the league describes your punches
lol ok
And the swag talk is foolish, cos you a fuckin fag
Sure you swang wit a chain on, you are the sites punchin bag
light jab here
You being dope is long winded, a story that cost none
Theres abridgment for you, that im’a use to have ya body tossed from
the wp here is fire, but the set up was sacrificed for the rhyme scheme. and the wording on the punch was a bit iffy.not what I'm typically used to seeing from you.
I’ll enforce pain on the corner you claim. You cant stop Godly
Cop lights up the street? Its red & Blues reflecting off yellow tape around Plots Body
closer was a light jab
Pretty good read here from both gentlemen. I feel that Spree's High points out shined Plot and Spree's low points didnt exceed Plot's. The punches i felt like Plot missed were costly. Where as any punches i thought Spree missed were not that damning. Good drop fellas
v/Spree
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Dudes a mess, careers on the rocks & futures a gamble,
So it's ironic to me...
He drinks his whiskey neat while his life is in shambles.
Such a failure, only a desperate hoe would let him nail her,
Coz all dogs that rode Kill..
Look like they've been hit by a semi-trailer.
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Listen faggit
I’ll dress’m in bullet holes wit this relaxing hot gauge
After i Body Robe? I’ll think about the killing over a spa day
The ghosting after loses is what we define-as punk shit
Sign in thread say “Cop out”…& thats how the league describes your punches
And the swag talk is foolish, cos you a fuckin fag
Sure you swang wit a chain on, you are the sites punchin bag
You being dope is long winded, a story that cost none
Theres abridgment for you, that im’a use to have ya body tossed from
lol what the fuck spree. I normally dig plot's verse structures but I think this time it lacked some sting. but spree you nasty boy that punching bag line was fire lol. closer was meh compared to the rest of the verse, but had good hitters all around
got spree
Such a failure, only a desperate hoe would let him nail her,
Coz all dogs that rode Kill..
Look like they've been hit by a semi-trailer.
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The ghosting after loses is what we define-as punk shit
Sign in thread say “Cop out”…& thats how the league describes your punches
both had smooth wording in my opinion, the concepts weren't that hard though which made it hard to quote even when I liked the lines. I do think Spree was more consistent though. Nothing really "fire" but a good read.
v/Spree
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