My Poem..plz Read...Title Is At The End.....

[ChynaDoll]

I aint wanna use all that vocab jus wanted it short n sweet lemme know what yall think plz.....-CHYNA



An innocent being created from love, I swore to myself you were sent from up above.

Constantly on my mind from that very day you came to me, I knew me falling in love with you was meant to be.

I loved you with all my heart and I knew you loved me as well.

But thath day you left me, to my knees I fell.

Questioning my faith, asking God why, how could he have let my baby girl die.

Taking the life of someone so innocent to me was theft.

God knew that you only had six months left.

Didnt even get to meet you, but gave you a name.

Wondering to myself was I the one to blame.

My life was revolved around you, when I found out I couldnt breathe.

Crying every night wondering why you had to leave.
I know your in a better place now and I hope that I will see you again somehow.

When I think about seeing my babygirl in heaven I smile.....
THIS IS A LETTER TO MY UNBORN CHILD.

[Lyrically InSane]

nice piece shorty alot of emotions was put into this i see keep doin ya thang and droppin some more heart felt pieces aight keep uppin^^^

[deeni]

HEY CHYNA U DON'T MIND IF I ADD MY OWN VERSE TO THIS WOULD U?

I GOT SOME SHIT I WOULD LIKE U TO READ, NO DISRESPECT INTENDED FOR ADDIN ON I HOPE.I READ YOUR POEM AND IT PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE BUT NOT ONLY MADE ME THINK ABOUT ALL THE PEOPLE I'VE LOSSED THAT MEANT SUMTHIN IN MY LIFE AND SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO LET GO. THIS IS HOW PEOPLE LIKE US EXPRESS THEMSELVES, HERE I GO.


WHAT DOES IT TAKE FOR A BREAK IN LIFE,
WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO STOP DOIN THINGS WRONG BEFORE RIGHT,
WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO HAVE A GOOD NIGHT SLEEP,
WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO HAVE MY LOST ONES CLOSER TO ME,

I'VE TRAVELED THROUGH MANY OBSTACLES,
HAVE VISITED MANY HOSPITALS,
TO VISION IN MY OWN OPTICALS,
THAT DEATH WAS ALWAYS POSSIBLE,

IT'S HARD TO GO ON,
BUT MY BLOOD STILL FLOWS ON,
EVENTHOUGH MY HEART IS TORN,
TO KNOW THAT THEY WILL FOREVER BE GONE,

I WONDER IF ANYBODY'S LISTENEN,
TO THE NEWZ OF THE MISSEN,
CUZ EVERY NIGHT I BE WISHIN,
THAT DEATH WILL GIVE THEM THEY'RE EVICTION..

R.I.P TO ALL THOSE WHO ARE LOOKIN FROM ABOVE OR DOWN BELOW,
NO MATTER WHERE YOUR AT I KNOW ITS PROBABLY BETTER THEN DEALIN WITH WAKIN UP EVERY DAY, BUT YOUR ALWAYS IN THE HEART AND AND I'LL SEE U SOON!!!!!

[ChynaDoll]

That was good....touching also....and thanks for the comment

[Dadi Kewl]

A heart-felt piece, the emotion's were vivid
Nice piece

-one love-

[ChynaDoll]

thanks...uppin again

[Miguel]

tu eres muy poetica--you are very poetic--i like the verse--much luv------peace

[Xxplicit_Dezire]

awww very sad poem...but yet u seem to show u grew strong from this...tha poem was nicely written and showed lots of emotiom..very much felt nah mean..well keep doin ya thang gurl..pz

[Sincere™]

alot of emotions shown in this piece well down.........chyna.....nice poem sadness felt in this piece deeepish shit.........once again

peep mine

shawty i did like 2 of em

[ChynaDoll]

aww thank you ruth...u a sweety....:P

[ChynaDoll]

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