..Good Times , Bad Times.....Ft. Bash and Eviley

[Bashire]

******************Good Times*************************

Eviley: The best moments in My life was when i first glared into your eyes

Bash: For you baby I will sacrifice my whole Life

Eviley: your smile was pure illusion

Bash: When I looked at you , It was one of my best Visions

Eviley: we knew that we had too hace a downfall in our relationship some day

Bash: Because inorder too make this relationship work , We Have to Go Through Rough Days , And Good Days

Bash: But I never thought it would happen this way

Eviley: i felt it inside , I thought this love was here to stay

Bash: Baby You Deserve The World, and More

Eviley: Bash It's You Who I will Always Adore

Bash: You Had Earned All My Trust, I was So In Love With you

Eviley: And I would Catch a Bullet For you, If I Must

Bash: Honest and Beautiful..You're The One I Will always Choose

Eviley: You Gave me Faith to stand up When I'd Lose , U Stayed by My side..The days That I Cryed

Bash: You're the One who Kept me alive when I was thinking Of commiting Suicide

Bash: I wanted to Show You how Much I Loved you, This Isn't Just Lust

Bash: I thought we would Stay together Till God call upon Us


******************Bad Times**************************

Bash: When the Moments were Hard..Or When you were Mad
I Remenis Of the Beautiful Things We've Had

Eviley: Baby I always Told u Not To Be Sad

Eviley: Because when words are flowing out of anger

Eviley: these words we speak arent known by a stranger

Eviley: your angry face i couldnt bare to stare any longer

Bash: Babe I am sorry that this had to happen

Bash: Inside I felt like I was burning

Bash: Because I couldnt stand watching you talk to other men

Eviley: U have to understand that they were just my friends

Eviley: i sit here i ponder where did the love go

Eviley: hate caught up to us and our love was so slow

Bash: I Apprechiate All the Good Times We Had

Bash: Even Though Things Were Sometimes very Hard

Eviley: i still miss your smile,your eyes, and your grace

Bash: Baby i just want you to know that you were never a mistake

Bash: When I sit down And think About the things We Did Together..Tears Fall Down My Eyes

Bash: Remenising the days That You Used To Cry When We Had Stupid Fights

Eviley: But Now that I've realized every relationship has goodtimes and badtimes but the only problem was ours didnt stay for long..................


*****************The End*********************

[Jagged MiC]

Dope . . I Like The Way You
Set It Up . . Also Good Topic
Please Return The Favor And
Look At My Open Mic Piece . .
Pain of Glares

[Bashire]

Thanks......Upping this piece.........STRAIGHT TO THE TOP

[Bashire]

Upping the shit outta this

[Bashire]

Stop sleeping on this piece

[Bashire]

Stop FUCKING SLEEPING...

[Bashire]

Lmao................ZzzzzzzZzzzzzzzz

[Bashire]

This shit is getting fucked up man..........I might as well stop making open mics

[Sureal]

Ok, I Did Not Like The Style At All..
Made The Verse Whack, Some Parts.
Did Not Even Rhyme.. Good Attempt .
and Keep Writing, But Hopefully Improve..

[Bashire]

Originally posted by Sureal
Ok, I Did Not Like The Style At All..
Made The Verse Whack, Some Parts.
Did Not Even Rhyme.. Good Attempt .
and Keep Writing, But Hopefully Improve..

Yeah...That's the kind of feedback I want........Keep them comming , Help me elevate

[Withersman]

This was an aight peace. This suffered from a REALLY important flaw. Since it did not rhyme as much, it messed up the pice. I liked the ocncpet just that the lack of flow threw me off. Anyway this was an iight pice

7/10

return the favor on my piece Outlaw

[rule]

good drop man...i liked how you brought it you 2 callabed well 9/10 1

[redragon]

Omg....man i mean Omg
That was some deep shit,for real
Seemed rather poetic,
Eviley: your smile was pure illusion
Bash: When I looked at you , It was one of my best Visions
^^Fav lines^^
Well you guys stayed on topic flow was there,you want to help improve?Well here ya go,
improve on,
-multis
-metties
-wordplay
^^Learn^^
Vocab wasen't needed in this type of a piece,as a matter of fact you don't need vocab at all,just use it to make yourself not look dumb,stay up guys
One love
Return the favor on my open mics