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Thread: Abercrombie & Bitch

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    Abercrombie & Bitch

    Abercrombie & Bitch

    Face all painted up like a little Barbie doll
    Clothes fitted perfectly, skirt short, boots tall
    Shimmery blonde hair, brushed to shine
    But behind green eyes she hides pain over time

    As she strides by, her expensive perfume lingers
    The world is at the tip of her manicured fingers
    Isn't she lucky? She's the hottest for sure
    But on the inside she just can't smile to allure

    She's got fame, fortune, boys and fast cars
    Everyone loves her, but she's hiding scars
    She can barely go out without making a scene
    She's tired of her face on every magazine

    But has this angel really earned her wings?
    She IS NOT perfection, she's done bad things
    This so called "superstar" hasn't earned her own
    All she does is bitch to the Rolling Stone

    What exactly does she have to complain about?
    That Luis Vuttion purse she simply couldn't live without?
    She has never seen failure, she always gets her way
    I would like to see her last on the street for a day

    She acts like the whole world shouldn't know her business
    Stop parading around in your underwear, princess!
    I guess money cannot buy happiness, which is an unscratchable itch
    She isn't so innocent, she's been exposed as a bitch

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    This Was A Good Piece, I Really Enjoyed The First Four Stanzas Over The Last One Because You Had A Good Sence Of Style In The Emotion Along With Creativity In A Simple Rhyme. It Was Amusing To Kind Of Listen To A Story Told About Behind The Scene Emotions Of A Star. Very Neat. Well Done.

    If You Could...Leave Some Feed Back On One Or More Of The Writtings In My Sig...Click The Link.

    Thanks.

    And Well Done.

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    ^She's My girlfriend, she's exempt, .

    I loved the sheer sarcasm of the title itself, and then the whole poem, you touch my heart, in sooooo many ways. Hmm, maybe that's why I love you?
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    Lots of emotion in this

    i liked it the flow was nice

    nice drop



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    Sorry, but no more than two pieces allowed on front page at one time. Read rules about how to re-open this piece at later date. Patience..

    *cowers into corner, wary of Bruklor's incurring wrath..*...
    Last edited by Varentao; January 11th, 2004 at 01:56 PM

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