witeboy steps in

[Witeout]

gansta is not why i wanted to be, all i wanted is some breast to feed,
and thats all i want or need. talking to girls and playing their heads even bullshitting the ones who want to be wed/ but truth is i just want to bed and if they want more that shit is dead. enough about treating a lady like a lady/lets have sex/listen to shady. ready to kiss you tits and even play you boyfriend with the zits, man you easy in bed /life must be the pits. but i love girls who are fit/ and i dont like girls who dont give brains one bit.

and all yall haters/ see you laters/ cuz i got no time for you ugly eye gators.

[Shi]

normlly i dont do this but i cant give u a respectable responce merely cus this peice wasnt sumthin i could respect...but thas juss my words...-shi-

[Icarus]

it's cool.. a lil too basic on the rhyme scheme but it got the point across... Good luck and keep elevating

[Varentao]

This was an open mic or something. Not meant to be in here. PM me if you think it should be re-opened.

CLOSED for now.