my openmic

[Tricky]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...37#post1207837
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...42#post1207842

im a ho
without a fucking home
but what can i say when i have an empty dome
thats why they fucin call me tricky...
I play tricks....
spit shit thats sticky
and i flow bricks
fo real
im englihs fuckin british
call me the fucking lama cuz i spit shit
i fuck the FBD with no regrets
but could evencall that decieiving monster sex
on her steps i can nasty with it
shit...i l0ove thpussy and the DICK yeahhhh

[Da Kid]

hard to follow but it was aight. but do me a favor and relpy on mah open mic see what u think.

[FreeThinker]

amm i hope that was a joke since its prop the worst thing iv ever seen

[Tricky]

SO GAY!! Fucking Pheoniix is the gayest guy ever! that was so dumb. he comes over to my house and posts that. if it was cool, hey. but that so dumb. no talent whatsoever. I'm going to leave it up for shits and giggles, but dude. Jason, you're a dumb mother fucker. who gets drunk and does that. dumbass. europe will rock, so shut your face. fuck meters, it'll still be hot and tempting...? hahaha. whatever, dumbass

[Genazyde]

To be honest...this was really poor, you need to elevate...firstly, your structure blew...if you have you lines like this -
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and not like this -
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then you'd find that your raps will flow much better...also, broaden tha vocab, ight, it ain't all about big words, but as soon as you've start'd spit'n wit good vocab, you'll find that you can start spit'n rhymes that aren't so intellectual...no hate kid, I'm jus' tell'n you ma honest opinion...

[Tricky]

Well i think It's charming