My rhymes are garbage

[c.b]

Stand with me third degree burns need surgery
Certaintly to worry me is worthy perjury
In burgandy burban be serving sweet truthfully
i been at this site constantly yall know it's me
Supposedly showing me socially what I should be
Saintity still strengthens me insatiably
A emcee honestly held an eighth of green
ain't what it seems supreme beings demean dreams
kill or be killed realer than real fullfilled fiends
now I understand nas when he made street dreams



I love multis.....I posted this topic so the haters can just agree with it

[Mistral]

You need 2 links of replies or this will get closed, Thanks.

[Knowledge]

u can tell u love multis.

breakdown:

topic = not real great..not really sure what ur trying to get at
vocab = good..not too simple
flow = nice..stayed on pace
overall = ok couple of bars


peace