mceepj vs V.A. $lim

[Mesmerize]

MCeePJ has without a doubt got this one. Your flow was smooth, punches hit hard, not to mention they were pretty funny. Structure wasnt all that good, but that isnt a big factor, like I said it still flowed well and was a pretty clear read. Dope drop.

V.A. your punches were weak compared to MC, but not bad to be a newbie. You have potential to elevate. Your flow was alright, but you lacked in structure.

vote-MCeePJ

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132806

[Jonezy]

Just drop a vote and a link and ill return the fav

[Hybrid]

V.A - dude your lines were to short and upfront not enough behind the scenes attacks or punches your personals were ok but avatar one's are done to death. structure was ok got choppy flow was decent and you came out ok on this not that strong but not wack so decent drop, keep at it - peace

MC - Decent verse your ending was better than your first half , you came out quite well although keep some of ya lines shorter as to not drag on, nice punches and personals, you worked all areas really well and excelled much better than v.a ans took this one with a bit of ease, good drop keep at it.

Overall: Pretty evenly matched up battle but was quite one-sided.

My Vote: MCeePJ

[Jonezy]

uppin for votes....... just leave link

[RealiM]

heya..

slim..

lets make this one a quick open and shut case//
this cats knows he will die thats why he wont show his face//(his avitar)
weak, poor, bad.

he picked that avitar thinking it would make him a killer//
but he wont kill shit just by spitting some fillers//
blah, weak, weak, weak...

the only think he's ever been good at is spittin //
the cum out of his mouth from dicks he's been lickin//
niceness... sorta

MC you a bitch thats here to waste my time//
thats why it dont take much all I need is 10 lines//
not shabby

now get on your knee's so you can suck on this dick//
I'll let everyone see your just a titless ass bitch//
no..

overall 4/10

weak verse...

MC...


Ya other battles were wack.. an 'ok' verse from you is rare
maybe i should just drop 1 bar......
...just to make this shit fair
average opener, alright

I bring thousands of tears to ya eyes..to mine you bring.....none
Cos like Jay said, I got 99 problems...
....and this Slim bitch aint one
hmm, not very well worded

My lyrics have you gassed, leavin ya throat hard
Only way your winnin battles.....
is by storin my bars in ya note pad
lol niceness

Ya wastin so much of my time..im liable to sue
Judge only said My Boy...
...cos the dude felt sorry for you
lol.. niceness again

Your just like City toilets, the way your full of different shit
Ya verses will get more rejections....
...than porn stars with Pin Dicks
lol ill..

Your unable to claim a win, Like voodoo has you cursed
This fag knows i Own him...
..check the title...he posted My Name First
nice finisher..

overall 7.5/10..

MC won with another nice verse...

v/MC