Lawyer vs Feeble

[Lawyer]

^YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHH



I'm WINNING NIGGA! hahhahahah

[3-6Neilson]

Lawyer
yo, this nigga doesnt know the law, you aint a man mister/
but i am, cuz i finna fuck you momma and butt fuck ur sister/
-opening with a ya momma and sista joke..nahh
you never been good ima leave you corpsed and really really dead/
shoot you a lot with guns and leave you like ya name, a lot of red/
-"really really dead" haha/alot of red ... threat... wack
record dont mean shit nugga, i break em like the Olympics dream/
cuz Feeble is gonna choke on my boot, like Italy did the dream team/
-weak
oooh im mean and will put tacks on nuts you wack as fuck blanding cunts/
ramming sucks demanding fucks to disband the puts of golfing caddy sluts/
-some multis but the lines and punch was wack
death bar kills cats ima leave dis kat soaked in blood like a gang fight/
Lawyer is gonna sprint fo da win but feeble tripped on my land mines/
-another threat, didnt rhyme, wack closer

WTF is up with the pencils lines, and you dont need stupid explanations in ()'s.

Feeble
i'll have him sleeping rough cuz no way this creep is tough
& when you pit him against me, the holes always deep enough
-decent opener
but im there to tell him .. fuck this fake thug & careless felon
cuz if he tried to use his brian id beat him upside the cerebellum
-ummm...ok
knock him silly, clocked & still be wack as fuck.. u have to suck
i'll drown you in an aqueduct take your dead body & wrap it up..
-multi but a threat
stab the fuck til i see you losing.. and know this fiend is broken
aint nobody read ya shit, they mistaking that for ya hemoglobin
-ok
even open ya wounds till they see ya broken, confused..
moping abused, about to quit cuz ya loping, hoping to bruise..
-ok

Had a nice flow, good structure, and multis...
Dont know what was up with threat punches in both verse but...
V/Feeble for multis, better flow and punches

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