Still Uppin for EXPLAINED votes.
Still Uppin for EXPLAINED votes.
steveontrial-your structure was wack,you had a good flow,ok punches,average rhymes,ok creativity and wack vocabulary.-untouchable--good structure,you had an ok flow,you had nice punches,your rhymes was ok,your creativity was iight and your vocabulary was ok.battle overall-this was a close battle but untouchable edged out on this battle cuz his punches were more direct to steveontrial.vote -untouchable-
Untouchable, quotables is a very justified way of voting.. it's how people in LLL vote. In FL who won is obvious 95 percent of the time. In a real league it's not as obvious so quotables are more in order.. anyway
Untouchable - Dude your shit was like there but not hitting. It seemed like all your bars were too long and really not going anywhere. Just a whole lotta rambling. Not that your concepts were bad necessarily even though they were all played, but they just weren't hitting. Read the verse by Spitacular in the LLL champ match to see what i mean by writing bars that hit.
Steve - The UN opener was pretty tight. The sexlife line was okay but i feel you coulda developed the concept better or worded it better. Straight draw shit i was feeling cause I play poker. In fact the only line I didn't like was the Colts line cause that was just a statement but the rest was very solid, good shit man.
Vote - Steve
youll never kill me son, a win for you's outta reach
only time u got guys in your trunks....
......................................'s at the beach
Vs.
nothin
pretty easy win for Steve...good job.
Vote Steveontrial
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
vote steve easy.
untouchable focus on sum wit, and makes sum attempts or atleast try to use sum setups cuz ya verse was just ridiculous to me
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