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check........i'm coo with 10 lines Nerve...........your call homes......~1~
check in..... 10 lines is good with me....
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Wack-(An'es`the't-ic), yea u know its true, your the definiton/
This league is an ill league only, sorry, you dont have admissioin/
You need help, so go call the doctor for assistance/
Crews have never heard of you, to them your not even in existence/
Your rhymes r screwed, cuz you forgot to pay your ghostwriter/
This cat is so weak, he twitch at random times, can barely hold a pocket lighter/
Your hyper about this battle, but you know u gonna lose, so take a chill-pill/
Dont mess with this-i-throw-you-into-abyss, cuz u know im mentaly ill/
Your in a mess, cant think up any rhymes, cuz my flow rattles your brains/
i spit cold hard ice, so it runs through your veins, all you feel is sleet when it rains, youve been frozen up, so just ice left, no remains/
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Last edited by The NerveCalmer; July 10th, 2005 at 12:17 PM
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check it.........
I aint a cannibal but mess wit me and i'll boil ya father
Then i'll shit on this bitch like everyone does to Toilet Water
...Aint Burnin His Garden when i say that i'll Hurt His Cabbage
leave him Shook And Broken more than Earthquake Damage
...I'll throw ya rhymez away cuz i alwayz bin waste
after ya koed i'll chop you up and put you in 'luggage' just 'in-case'
Its all the same..stealing text with that pathetic organ you call a brain
I call it shame..damn..i never knew they let biters in the hall of fame
NeverCalmer look kid i'll give ya somethin to really calm ya nerves
See there's a wide gap between us my rap is str8 your's bend like a curve
Wack-(An'es`the't-ic), yea u know its true, your the definiton/
This league is an ill league only, sorry, you dont have admissioin/
no
You need help, so go call the doctor for assistance/
Crews have never heard of you, to them your not even in existence/
not happenin
Your rhymes r screwed, cuz you forgot to pay your ghostwriter/
This cat is so weak, he twitch at random times, can barely hold a pocket lighter/
sucked
Your hyper about this battle, but you know u gonna lose, so take a chill-pill/
Dont mess with this-i-throw-you-into-abyss, cuz u know im mentaly ill/
horrible
Your in a mess, cant think up any rhymes, cuz my flow rattles your brains/
i spit cold hard ice, so it runs through your veins, all you feel is sleet when it rains, youve been frozen up, so just ice left, no remains/
thank god its over.
v.
I aint a cannibal but mess wit me and i'll boil ya father
Then i'll shit on this bitch like everyone does to Toilet Water
eh shit/toilet punches are played
...Aint Burnin His Garden when i say that i'll Hurt His Cabbage
leave him Shook And Broken more than Earthquake Damage
ok
...I'll throw ya rhymez away cuz i alwayz bin waste
after ya koed i'll chop you up and put you in 'luggage' just 'in-case'
wow wordplay.still not hard hitting
Its all the same..stealing text with that pathetic organ you call a brain
I call it shame..damn..i never knew they let biters in the hall of fame
nope
NeverCalmer look kid i'll give ya somethin to really calm ya nerves
See there's a wide gap between us my rap is str8 your's bend like a curve
no
Well NC you really need to work on actually throwing punches. You just stated random shit. Nothing in your verse was good at all. Anesthetic on the other hand actually tried to throw punches. Nothing was that great. Just some meta's that ive seen a million times. Wordplay was meh. Just a blah battle at that. Anyways..
v/Anesthetic
Ehh atleast Nerve calmer had disses. Never Calmer- Your lines were extremely stretched. Your flow ehh wateva. You really can't tell flow in text. But alot of your lines were pretty played. Try to get more creative when writing your verses. And work on ur wordplay and make sure ur punches are really hitting. Keep it up.
Anesthetic- Yah you had sum punches but it mostly was threats. You basically kept talkign bout beating da shit outta him. But there weren't actually ne disses at all in your veres. And ehh ur structure wasn't much better. Cept they weren't as stretched. Try to work more on ur disses and make sure they really are hitting your opponent. Not just threats. Get more creative as well. Keep writing.
v// The Nerve Calmer for better disses. Rest of the explanation is explained above. Keep it up both of u.
Hit This Up:
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Obscure Intelligences.
Both were kinda weak...
Punches- An
Personals- An (had 1)
Structure- An
Flow- tie
Wordplay- An (had 1)
Creativity- An
Complexity- An
Anesthetic came harder, all of NerveCalmers ish was elementary and played, same with Anesthetic, but atleast he had some original lines. And hes the only one that used any personals or wordplay, which is very creative. He was alot more complex. He had the better verse.
Vote - Anesthetic
Nerve was to Simple, Disses are played and wasnt felling it. Try to come with something that no one used.
Aneth...you used some complex stuff. you didnt really Diss him Tho.... work on dissing .
v/aneth
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Nerve - You aren't ready for this league, your verse was pretty wack. This isn't FL, you gotta step your game up and use better punches and more witty concepts. Your shit was a very boring read quite honestly and there were no punches in it that I thought were harsh at all.
Anesthetic - You tried a little harder than Nerve to be witty but also failed miserably. You also need a lot of work on your concepts as everything you had was just weak or played. Sorry no hate, I tell it like it is so you also gotta step your game up. However, your verse was better in every aspect than his so you got this.
Vote - Anesthetic
The NerveCalmer.
Wack-(An'es`the't-ic), yea u know its true, your the definiton/
This league is an ill league only, sorry, you dont have admissioin/
The whole good league / your not allowe concept is played out.
You need help, so go call the doctor for assistance/
Crews have never heard of you, to them your not even in existence/
I have heard the never heard / non-existence concept a good amount.
Your rhymes r screwed, cuz you forgot to pay your ghostwriter/
This cat is so weak, he twitch at random times, can barely hold a pocket lighter/
Probably your best line.
Your hyper about this battle, but you know u gonna lose, so take a chill-pill/
Dont mess with this-i-throw-you-into-abyss, cuz u know im mentaly ill/
The punch was weak. You focused too much on the flow here.
Your in a mess, cant think up any rhymes, cuz my flow rattles your brains/
i spit cold hard ice, so it runs through your veins, all you feel is sleet when it rains, youve been frozen up, so just ice left, no remains/
No punch here, just a statement playboy.
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Anesthetic.
I aint a cannibal but mess wit me and i'll boil ya father
Then i'll shit on this bitch like everyone does to Toilet Water
They whole shit / toilet concept is played out.
...Aint Burnin His Garden when i say that i'll Hurt His Cabbage
leave him Shook And Broken more than Earthquake Damage
This was an all right punch.
...I'll throw ya rhymez away cuz i alwayz bin waste
after ya koed i'll chop you up and put you in 'luggage' just 'in-case'
Another all right punch. Could've been better w/ better wording.
Its all the same..stealing text with that pathetic organ you call a brain
I call it shame..damn..i never knew they let biters in the hall of fame
Seen this concept a good amount of times.
NeverCalmer look kid i'll give ya somethin to really calm ya nerves
See there's a wide gap between us my rap is str8 your's bend like a curve
Not feeling this playboy
Overall.
Nerve, you threw some punches here and there. Just work on consistently throwing them, and adding creativity aswell. Anes, you had some straight lines here and there. Creativity is the only problem I see at times with you pimpin'. In this match, I got Anes winning this. He had the best lines of the battle, and was more consistent with his lines than was Nerve.
Vote.
Anesthetic.
vote/nerve: for having disses an didn't have disses, he was stuck on himself and
forgot about his opponent(too much self glory).well at least that's what i think.
LOL Feeble has some sense of humor.
Nervecalmer vs Anesthetic ROFL
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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