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    living today is bad for your health

    living today is bad for your health.....

    in todays hypracritical society everything can kill you
    walking, driving a car, eating fast food, smoking, drinking
    im just waiting for them to say you'll die if you start thinking
    pretty soon having a opinion in this nation will be bad for your health
    isnt life just the process of death so why shouldnt I just blast myself
    im gonna die anyways isnt this what everyone tells me
    or do we hope for death just so we can end are misery
    why should I give a fuck I really dont understand it
    people I will clarify it now there's no way to save the planet
    were barely a tick in this worlds never ending clock of death
    so how could we affect its outcome if in peace we rest
    write a rhyme speak your mind search for nothing to find
    deaths not just a tape that you can easily turn back by hitting rewind
    once it comes there no returning from that common fate
    better it come to early then have it come to late
    for their is no escape from that day of kingdom come
    but Id rather not grow old because the good die young
    wether you think im telling the truth or if you believe Im lieing
    im just saying its how you live your life not how you spent it dieing

    Distinct - Peace
    tell me what you think
    Last edited by distinct; August 8th, 2005 at 05:17 AM

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    pretty soon having a opinion in this nation will be bad for your health
    isnt life just the process of death so why shouldnt I just blast myself
    im gonna die anyways isnt this what everyone tells me
    or do we hope for death just so we can end are misery


    write a rhyme speak your mind search for nothing to find
    deaths not just a tape that you can easily turn back by hitting rewind

    for their is no escape from that day of kingdom come
    but Id rather not grow old because the good die young
    wether you think im telling the truth or if you believe Im lieing
    im just saying its how you live your life not how you spent it dieing


    Those were the parts of the poem that caught my attention. This was true. I felt the emotion. The vocab was good. Overall this was a good piece. Keep up the good work.
    Hit the link in my sig honestly.

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